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Reviews for Breaking the Rules

By : Darkprism
  • From ANON - Rafi on June 23, 2016
    So fucking hot and well written, you're good!
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  • From djserani on April 10, 2011
    You know, I think out of all of them (up until R&B, that is), this has to be the toughest one to read. You know quiet well how I feel about Mr. Prissy Pants. But even before Checkmate, there was still enough of Sasuke's background to understand why he can be such a prick. And somewhere in all of there, there probably was a kernel of truth about wanting to do some of it for Naruto.

    Anyway, the emotion, especially in the third part, really gets to ya. Well done, sweets. :D
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  • From duskpixie on December 12, 2010
    Hey there, Darkprism :)

    Just wanted to quickly review and let you know how amazing I think your fics are.

    I just read both Breaking Point and Breaking the Rules and both were truly brilliant. I agree with other reviewers; you capture the D/s lifestyle in a way that's completely real. There is so much more to D/s than many think, and your fics give an accurate representation of it.

    With regard to Sasuke and Naruto, I love your portrayal of both characters. It's always nice to see people writing NaruSasu (that's what I prefer to write, myself). I agree with QueenofQuills, when you look deeper the NaruSasu combination works so well, especially if you stay true to the original characters and don't make Sasuke weak and feminine. Your fic captures that perfectly, and doesn't portray the submissive as being weak.

    I really, really enjoyed it; the audio recording too.
    I look forward to reading more of your works.
    ~dusk. xo
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  • From ANON - sesshoumaru4me on August 28, 2010
    love it :D More please.
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  • From ANON - Maja on June 23, 2010
    I would really love to see a story that builds up to this relationship. Needless to say, that would be ridiculously long considering the history with Naruto and Sasuke. But It would be awesome if you saw fit to do that.
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  • From ANON - QueenofQuill on May 12, 2010
    The audio version of chapter two of this story is amazing. The way you read it makes it so intense and Kiba is such a great aspect to this story, the way he talks so suits his character. I've said this many times but I just think Naruto seme and Sasuke uke is so much more realistic when you take a close look at the characters. Sure Naruto is senstive and forgiving but he never backs down to anyone and you have him just perfect in this story. Also, he if I do find Sasuke uke stories they usually portray Sasuke as weak and despite his submissive personality as is seen through the way he allows himself to be used by Itachi, Orochimaru and at the moment Madara, he is by no means weak and it seriously annoys me when people write him like that which is why your story is so refreshing. A submissive doesn't have to be weak, in fact it takes a lot of strength to yield and your portrayal of Sasuke's mischievious personality adds a lot to the character.

    I also like the way Naruto (despite being surprisingly lenient of Sasuke's disrespectful behaviour) gives Sasuke his comuppance.

    Again, the audio version of this chapter was amazing, if I closed my eyes it almost felt as if I was watching. And mother of God was chapter two intense. Anyway, your writing is amazing and I hope to hear more Naruto/Sasuke audio chapters.

    Best Wishes QueenofQuill.
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  • From maybewhynot on March 11, 2010
    that was heart breaking ... I know they love each other and all but it just kills me that people in love can hurt each other like this just to make a point ... but in the end Naruto is such a sweetheart & Sasuke is a stubborn bitch.

    btw I would really like to know about Shika's first night at break & did they play or not ;) the whole thing IN DETAIL :D
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  • From Bluesake on February 13, 2010
    ...OMG this story was very nice....very nice. I felt bad for Sasuke but I can understand Naruto as well. Very intense at the end. This story had me trembling with anticiption for what was gonna happen next. Very good.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 08, 2010
    As screwy as their relationship can be, they really have a strong bond. This had to be one of the sweetest stories I have read here. Really nice.
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on January 25, 2010
    Wow, I must say this was really intense story and at some point I really couldn't stand anymore how they tortured Sasuke and how Naruto treated Sasuke because Naruto was the first one who messed up, if he didn't mess up then Sasuke wouldn't be so frustrated in the first place...
    This is amazing story I really enjoyed reading it :) Is there sequal?
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  • From jordash00 on January 20, 2010
    OK, I have a few things to say about a few things and I guess the review will be last.

    I have been on this site for awhile and as of recent took a hiatus from reviewing for various reasons which is beside the point, but I had to come out of "review retirement" to review this fic. LOL!

    I cannot for the life of me understand how this fic and the other Naru/Sasu that you posted here got such few reviews. I am utterly and completely speechless, daunted, and mortified! Logically, I cannot come up with an explanation. I can't! Ironically so, I came upon you on ygallery while reading two authors who left this site for the very reason of feeling under appreciated for their talents through lack of reviews. The ONLY reason I didn't review your stories on ygallery is because I cannot access ygallery on my desktop because of my internet server and can only do so through my phone which cannot hold much data so reviewing on my phone is troublesome. So imagine my surprise and utter joy when seeing that you posted your story here.

    And really I could care less if this is review etiquette or not, but I soooooo encourge you to post Undercurrents here under the general male/male section. Not AU or Shika/Neji. It will not get the coverage. I am an avid fan of the Shika/Neji or Neji/Shika - I have no preference and that fic blew my freakin mind! As a matter of fact, I have a friend who is an avid Shika/Neji fan and cannot see Neji as anything but "uke" but read your fic and her ultimate analysis of Undercurrents - "Beautiful". But I digress.

    I am so utterly frustrated that this story has 1 review and so few votes. I am not so eloquent as to give this story the justice that it truly deserves. And the beauty is that it is not the SEX. I totally understand that BDSM and D/S is not everyones thing. But the way I see it, this story and the other is so not about that. It's like in the Ninjaverse - you have to see what's under the underneath. Again, that's my interpretation. Undercurrents brought me into this "universe" that you have created, but these stories are breathtakingly beautiful. And whether or not you will continue to post on this site regardless of reviews or not, I don't know. I just hope that it doesn't deter you.

    I had so much more I wanted to say; I just cannot remember everything, but in a nutshell....

    You Darkprizm are PERFECTION.
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 16, 2010
    i found you on here lol *happy dance* now if only you would post the other tales for this lovely little world you have made that would be so cool
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