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By : KaraMayonakaSora
  • From ANON - Alisha on July 18, 2013
    I love this story! Super funny and adorable. I would really love to read more, so please continue this story!!!



    Alisha
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  • From Kingcobra on November 30, 2011
    Will you be updating this soon? This is a really great story and I am dying for more. :)
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  • From ANON - juiz on May 30, 2011
    I *love* Sasori so much. I hope to see more of him in the future. I don't know why, but I picture him as Alucard from Hellsing in my mind. XDD It's a little weird cause they look nothing alike. But I love his flirty ways with Sasuke. Hope to see another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - mjaku on May 13, 2011
    You know, I read this story in one night.

    One. Night.

    From 10 PM to 7 AM.

    Yes, I'm serious.

    And you just made me get hooked up to naruto shippuden AGAIN. I sweared almost one and half years ago that I would not watch naruto anymore, because it envelopes so much of my time but BAM there goes my promise, flying out of the window and here is one happy/crazy fangirl drooling over NaruGaa in the first season of Shippuden.

    YES! ALL THIS BECAUSE YOUR FIC IS JUST SO UNBELIEVABLY AMAZiNG, YES THAT'S WHY.

    And I don't even know should i hate you for making me crazy with waiting for the next chapter, or loving you and drowning you with virtual hugs because you are so amazing to make a fic like this.

    *gives you the virtual hugs anyway*

    I love the way you have described the characters and I just....I just can't wait to see Bee in Naruto shippuden XD I have to see if I can flail over the Gaara/Bee action in this even more than I already am after I have really seen him.

    And Gaara moaning.....*gave herself a nosebleed*

    Sorry about the incoherency, but hopefully you got the main idea XD

    I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOUR FIC ANDAND I LOVE GAARA MOANING AND I LOVE NARUTO AND SASORI AND THE HYPOCRITE SASUKE AND....*rantsrantsrants*

    ...I'll shut up.

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  • From ANON - Alicia on May 06, 2011
    Ahhhhh, this story is so gooood! But It also frustrates the hell out of me! Because I keep wondering if Gaara is ever going to end up with Naruto. Because at some point (if the story is heading that way) he and Bee will have to break up and that could get...nasty...

    I won't give up on this story cause it is so damn good. Is there some direction this is going? Who is the final pairing. I think I might explode, It's doing my head in!

    Update soon please! I need to get my BSG fix!
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  • From Carousel on May 03, 2011
    The last chapter was excellent. I love this story so much and I was wondering when you were going to update. Still want Naruto to get with Gaara and Sasuke to get with Sasori...
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  • From missbri88 on May 02, 2011
    OMG!!! This chapter had so much going on!!! I hate you all the more since you only want to update once every decade! :Cries: I was so upset when it ended; and I'm totally left drooling for more. I do hope to see you soon.
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  • From ANON - volaju66 on May 01, 2011
    Yay! Update! I loved it, though I feel a bit cheated with Gaara and Killerbee's first time. I can't help it, despite their being one of the crackiest couples I've ever read I love them together. Is it wrong of me to want Sasuke to end alone? Your depiction of him is spot on I believe but he's just not a character I like. Ah...can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Carousel on December 25, 2010
    Just read chapter 13. Brilliant and hilarious as always. I really wanna see who the girl is. Could it be Karin?
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  • From emochickenbutt on December 04, 2010
    very interesting! I can't wait for naruto and gaara to get together already, and though i'd like to see naruto and sasuke do a vid together i think it'll be much more... fun for sasori to get him. anyhow, good job! keep working hard! the plot is original so yay for that, and you've got good character development. this is one of the few stories where i've gone back and reread it cause it was good and i'm waiting for mroe :)
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  • From Prism0467 on October 20, 2010
    Nay for me but Yami, you are a GODDESS. THis chapter was LUSH.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 20, 2010
    Great chapter!
    And bring Sasuke's old girlfriend back!
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  • From ANON - Lil-lo on October 19, 2010
    I'm looping back to review ch 11...

    Udon and Konohamaru had a great portrayal of the dumb knuckleheaded plans that teenagers come up with. Seeing Kono so riled up is like a true life reminder of parents instilling hatred into their kids- sometimes a teenager is lucky and sees enough of life where they can make their own decisions and other times they just complete the cycle into bigotry. I wonder if Kono is just a bigot or if he is maybe struggling with his own sexuality.Either way it lead to some pretty funny zingers from Gaara to Udon and Sakura.

    Speaking of Sakura I hate that she's right and wrong- I guess it's more of right concept wrong delivery. Learning more about Naruto's fear and using it against him like that was like kicking a puppy...poor Naruto.

    I always love your insight and how you put it into your stories. Bee's concern about wanting his relationship to last past sex was head on. A lot of stories jump into the relationship and it's sex sex joy joy love-don't get me wrong that can be great, but you've really grabbed the real life drama in between that all and seeing something that's so relatable come along with the story is a touch that I didn't realize I needed.

    Sasuke is written as the best asshole he could possibly be. (oh I mean that in a good way) It's like his source character was already a trip so now that you've exported him into a everyday situation and people are actually getting with him for his smart assery, add in that life itself is just balancing him out (getting caught up with Karin for example) then I can really love that he's kind of a jerk! See, Kishimoto messed up by not letting his crap catch up to him and a lot of fans are crying foul.

    I guess finally the last part was a great cliff hanger (and I had to cheat & jump into the next part before reviewing)- I feel for poor Haku, the door incident had me going crazy and I was stuck on if Naruto was going to blow. The whole arousal thing was some good writing :D.

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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on September 26, 2010
    Wow 11 had a big cliff-hanger...but somehow I missed 11 when it 1st came out and 12 was written :D

    The action always gets me so pumped up and hyper. I am really excited about what shady connections Sasuke will pull out of his sleeve to save Haku (you seem to really want to kill Haku for being in the wrong place/wrong time...or Gaara from blue balls).

    Then again,it's good that Gaara learned more about Bee before they got into a more serious relationship even though the family situation (and I'm stuck on Bee's back story being so creative and orginal-I wonderhow you thought of such a unique background)is so bad because Bee had been so hurt in the past and really wanted things to work out after that happens. I'll always love that at the end of the laughs and the drama that the characters are more real and worry about real life things.

    I loved Sasori's slide into regular life AU. I don't really see him in AU's and when I do he's usually just deidara's annoyed boyfriend...but here he was a crazy body hiding Sasuke wanting ball of joy. He just popped out so much as this psycho crazy Gaara cousin. Tenten takes the cake on new dimension-seeing her handle things like she does just brings up so many emotions.
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  • From volaju66 on September 22, 2010
    Yay new chapter! I love the character development as well as the introduction of Sasori. I think Sasuke needs a little redheaded love at least once. And of course Gaara and Bee have become a favorite pairing of mine though I believe you are the only one writing this pairing. So a cookie to you for making such an amazing update. Can't wait for next time.
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