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By : KaraMayonakaSora
  • From ANON - Carousel on August 28, 2010
    WHAAAAAAAAAAAT? Haku? Oh my ohmy. I can't wait or more. Please update soon. This is getting insane.
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  • From serenagold on August 27, 2010
    OMG WTF JUST HAPPENED??????? ''O_o''
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  • From volaju66 on August 25, 2010
    *screams* You are such a tease. I was so excited that Gaara was finally going to sleep with Bee and yeah....nothing...*sighs but it was so good. Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on July 11, 2010
    I was so happy to see another chapter! I squeed bad enough at the update-but the chapter itself was brilliant! You had me laughing at Sasuke who made being on baby life support (lol, that should not be funny) be this high achievement proclaiming how wonderful he was. You almost killed me to tears at how hard I laughed at his horniness, especially when Naruto was like you're going to kill it and he said it hurts so good.

    The reason you wrote about Mikato is because you made her such an amazing character with a kick ass back story that you should be allowed dibs on the Naruto manga. I cheered when she said she had a Masters in finite mathematics and to think that was on the tail end of her going on a spree about those crazy socialites. She was so absolutely written that I could see shy Naruto looked up to her-she had this amazing personality and everything and life brought her to a place where it was choking the spirit out of her. I'm really happy that you let her situation get better.

    Oh and Naruto! I was so on an emotional ride with him. I don't know how you could write a boy in love at sixteen as well as you did considering that the odds are that you are not one, but Naruto's crush evolved into such a beautiful (if never going to happen) story and I was adored by how much he was moved and romanced at the idea of her yet I also was reduced to embarrassment and flat out teenager-ism when he proposed (granted I also jumped up and slammed my notebook down like I was a teenager getting caught when Sasuke's mom almost caught him jerking and I'm a grown woman). I usually read almost any pairing because the source anime/manga and 90% of fan fiction don't really inspire me to feel much on Naruto in a relationship but I can put this chapter in the percentage that does because you expressed the passion that's present in Naruto's character so well for another person (and I can't believe I was somewhat rooting for Naruto/Mikato...I'm glad you let things down the way you did (I love Mikato for saying at least they'll call me a cougar instead of a pedophile)

    I don't have any ideas yet on this universe's shady dealings but I look forward to the ride.

    Btw-don't worry about the dash, I even register at different sites with it in different places....I just count it as my randomness.

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  • From missbri88 on July 06, 2010
    I was soooo totally happy to see an update for this, even though its only a side story(cries). I do hope to see our main fic very soon, but until then...
    Ja~
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  • From Carousel on July 06, 2010
    I love the MILF thing. That was great. XD And now the plot thickens....oooooooooooo
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  • From serenagold on June 02, 2010
    Too funny. Yeah, Sasuke would definitely have to bottom. :D

    Although Naruto's in a relationship now!!! He can't do porn!! >:/
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  • From Carousel on June 01, 2010
    Chapter 9 was bloody hilarious! XD This story is the most amazing fanfiction to have ever existed.
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  • From ANON - zimmrie kanoah on June 01, 2010
    omg i think i peed a little i laughed so hard. freakin sasuke is such a douche bag but i love it cuz hes one in a lovable kind of way. lol i dont think that makes sense but oh well.
    so i totally fainted when i saw your update. yesh! thanks for comforting me. Bee and gaara together is so dang awesome if they end up not together... sniff but its a great story either way so i'll be happy. and no its not bad cuz your side stories are great. XDD
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  • From ANON - Lil-lo on June 01, 2010
    I learned 2 new things-the bashing reggae song and the Dorthy phrase (granted I don't feel like googling it even though I did google the gay mafia) The gym was interesting though I would be scared if anyone tried to caveman anyone in real life like they did Gaara. Sasuke and Naruto arguing was a hoot.
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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on June 01, 2010
    I forgot to mention Sai...he was my 1st lol. But on to this chapter I think what I like about your work is that you have a real life skip the stereotypes take on writing about Gaara and Naruto. I am not as familiar so seeing Gaara break up misconceptions is educating in a fun way. I think it seems kinda natural (and funny) for Naruto to bust somebody in the face for the sake of his friends,and that's why you keep straying there.Sasuke and Kiba are a beautiful mess, and neither have really arrived! Last, Haku was a doozy! I thought Haku was going to be a boy,so being trans gendered was a twist.
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  • From ANON - Lil-lo on June 01, 2010
    I really enjoyed your writing! It was funny, interesting and endearing to see Gaara in such a sweet mode. I really loved Naruto's denial and knowing that Sasuke not only sold him out for a game but sent him to this shoot. I even enjoyed the lemons because they flowed so well.
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  • From Prism0467 on June 01, 2010
    I didn't read this on ff.net yet, so I thought I would review it here. That last chapter was GREAT! Sasuke is a twink who doesn't know it--I'm not sure he can get more pathetic than that. Serves him right for insulting Gaara! I hope Bee mangles the bitchy twink!

    LOL I love this story.
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  • From serenagold on May 23, 2010
    Awww, Gaara and KillerBee are so cute. Kinda doesn't make me want to want Gaara and Naruto to get back together.
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  • From Sheemashelin on May 22, 2010
    okay so i finally read this and well i love it. and omfg i laughed until i peed at some parts exspecially the phone sex messages left by sasuke about food on gaara's voice mail... gawd im laughing all over again! bwahahaha!!! i love it so much. its totally something sasuke would do in my opinion. fuckin prick that he is. and the sasuneji thing holy jeeze that was brilliant too. i hope to see an update very soon. oh and i never thought of the two together before but BeeGaa is awesome... i wants them to stay together forever. sniff... if bee's heart gets to broken or is broken... i will soooo saaaaad....
    well i guess i should go. seriously... update... i loves it. i love you. lol
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