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Reviews for Making "The Lucky"

By : ladygizarme
  • From moodysavage on January 04, 2012
    oh... and you should totally repost it or something for those who only get around to keeping up with the latest stories because people are definitely missing out. Maybe you could add an epilogue of when the movie comes out on video and Kakashi includes that CPR kiss scene in the extra deleted scenes... yeah that would work :)
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  • From moodysavage on January 04, 2012
    omgosh I LOVED LOVED LOVED this story. Soooo many awesome things about it. I loved the interactions between all the characters. Naruto all competitive, Sasuke pining for Naruto, Sai was just hilarious (shouldn't there be some chest compressions was my favorite line from him lol), Itachi changing the apartment and then changing it back... oh just everything! Awesome awesome awesome!
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  • From HalfFallenAingyl on May 23, 2011
    I suck at leaving reviews, but I thought I'd stop by and say I saw, I read, I loved!
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  • From ANON - Colter on November 26, 2010
    I don't normally review stories but I just had to tell you that yours was awesome. It is quite possibly the best NaruSasu fanfic I've seen. I really love that everyone hits Sai for being an idiot because that is so funny^-^. The cats were a sweet touch too!
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  • From bloodshound on September 23, 2010
    ah. Agsty goodness. Thanks.
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  • From MagicalReality on January 08, 2010
    Lurved it.
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  • From ANON - FireonIce on January 08, 2010
    Yesss I love a long, established one shot. It was fantastic. Your Sai made me laugh so hard omg he was so shameless and oblivious XD Really really good. Took me a while to read and I stayed up a bit later then I probably should have but it was so worth it
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  • From Ljiljana on January 07, 2010
    Oh, this was so much fun! Just long enough and very interesting, well written and – I surely motioned a lot of fun by now. Because it was.

    I loved it how Sasuke wasn’t even aware of the rivalry Naruto was so stuck on, too busy ogling him in newspapers and, er, in his bathroom. I also liked Sai. People usually go overboard with his ‘penis jokes’ but you did that part to successfully that was actually, for once, amusing to read. All characters slid into their places in this au with a natural ease. Every time you introduced someone, I’d think ‘well, of course, that makes perfect sense’.

    And of course, the way Sasuke announced his feelings at the end was just a cherry on top of a delicious cake. I’m going to put this on my recs list (if you have nothing against it) and the fact that I update that thing maybe twice a year should tell you more than my clumsy attempts at leaving a review ever could.

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  • From DevilnBlue on January 07, 2010
    Wow this story was long... and amazing. I mean god at first I thought you were overzealous about doing your first chapter but when I saw the the blue bar shrink to a thick little line I knew this had to be a one-shot. But wow what a one-shot it was. I liked the whole behind the scenes feel that you gave the story and how you utilize every character to the best of their abilities in the world you created for them.

    I was really curious to see what Kakashi was reading for those scripts and omg I freaking load the whole stalker reveal moment. Everything was my favorite part in this story but the Calvin Klien poster and then the confession about the tabloids as well as the bulletin board made me want to yell at my computer screen and tell blondie to run for the hills. I mean cause no one really realizes that celebrities can be stalkers too and he proved it too in a big way. I was halfway expecting Sasuke to close the door and ask an ususpecting Naruto in the bathroom if he liked what he saw. Also halfway expected a shrine too but found it in the bulletin board.

    Omg I love Sai's comments here and there and when he tried to lift up Naruto's shirt and Sasuke walked in I laughed at the visual of the two freezing. Or when he was left alone in the kitchen with Sasuke describing Naruto's penis I nearly joked on my water. My god you know how to make someone laugh. And I love how Sakura was secretly trying to hook them up and not going all obssessing like to snatch up Sasuke.

    My god you have such an interesting imagination when you had that life-sized picture of Sasuke on the toilet blown up in full color with the make up on his face. I nearly died of laughter as much as Sasuke must have died of amusement. You are some sick, evil genuis for sure. I was just thinking how Naruto would have just stared at that for hours in amusement and amazement before taking a picture to laugh at alter before rubbing it in Sasuke's face.

    Oh but seriously this is really good and I know it's not possible but you should totally do a sequel or something. A sequel of the movie with additional cast members to shake things up like maybe one of Naruto's old boyfriends joins the cast as a love interest or something and Sasuke isn't really feeling that or something while he has to deal with the anxiety of introducing his boyfriend to his parents. I don't know, I don't care, it'd be legendary either way. Just love, love, love... and now I'm done T_T
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  • From kinai26 on January 07, 2010
    #wipes bleeding nose# wow, so goddamn hot.
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  • From Raina on January 07, 2010
    Wow, that was so much fun to read! I really enjoyed myself with this story!! It's just been so long since I got lost in such lighthearted fun. I found myself really engulfed in the story that I was even leaning forward toward the monitor in some parts and gasping aloud at others. I laughed, I giggled, and I smiled throughout. I loved all your characters especially Sai's social inept tendencies. You explained Sasuke in such a heart warming and sympathetic way. I hate to use this word but this was so cute! Though this kept me up later than I thought, I am really happy that I read this! Thank you so much for sharing this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2010
    Wow!...Just WOW!!! Awesome story and amazing writing, I loved it!!
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  • From loveusender on January 06, 2010
    I feel so LUCKY to have fallen across this when i did! *claps hands together* So nice!! This one shot was so exhilarating! Sasuke was so daring in this, i even felt MY NECK HEATING UP..*laughs like a shy school girl* Yet i felt like Naruto was definitely the man in this, oozing all that uber hawtness..*heehee*
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  • From Dorkchic on January 06, 2010
    I loved this!
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  • From tovah on January 06, 2010
    Loved this story soooo much and the smexy scenes were the hottest thing have read in a long time even though it was not ful out sex. Awesome Writing!
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