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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From Silkylove on July 07, 2010
    damn it! How much longer till the finally hook up! Stupid Neji back down! Update soon please?!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2010
    Oh my God, Oh my God!!! That chic fight was the best ever. I liked how Sasuke made sure to finish his drink before he just said eff it and blindsided Neji. Then you have Neji b*tch slapping Sasuke... that was classic. I also like Sasuke having to work hard to get back together (the cello over the answering machine was good) and that Neji managed to make the point that Naruto is choosing not to exist in a shady relationship anymore. Loved it. Please keep it comin'.
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  • From missbri88 on July 07, 2010
    I'm telling you, I'm so happy that I'm on vacation and not sneaking in the middle of my work day to read this!!! I SCREAMED when Sasuke threw that first punch! Omfg! Wow. Now I expected Naruto's reaction to the "I love you" but a public fight between Neji and Sasuke?! Jesus Christ, Mary AND Joseph! Wow! I know I've said it before, but I love this story!
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  • From thelastsoul on July 07, 2010
    breathtaking, as usual ^_^
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  • From loveusender on July 07, 2010
    Did you know that I died? I f-ing DIED since the last chapter Kage. I've been a zombie roaming the earth hoping for an update!! And finally here it is!

    Fuck Sasuke! you need to make something big happen because right now neji is winning and you cannot let that happen man!!no way! he bested you with that closet thing!

    Naruto still cares no matter how much he damn well tries to denies it. Yet, how do you stop caring for someone you've loved all your life? That's hard so so hard. If sasuke was injured really badly and neji asked him to stay could he? and if sasuke REALLY moved on to some other guy, could he REALLY cope with that? no, he couldn't

    As such, neji needs to fucking disappear for christ' sake! dammit!
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  • From cynaga on July 07, 2010
    (chapter 18) great chapter! lots of tension and action.
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  • From Prism0467 on July 07, 2010
    Sasuke is such a bitch.
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  • From ANON - dar on July 07, 2010
    YAY for a new chapter!!! The best part was definitely the fight!! I'm really stuck between who to choose, sasuke or neji, yea sasuke loves naruto and all but because he can't declare his love for him to the world it feels like sasuke is ashamed of naruto.....while neji, he's pretty damned intent on declaring it once naruto lets him. So for that.....I think I would choose neji.....but sasuke's past with naruto just makes it sooo hard!! haha definitely a good story!! Thanks again!!
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  • From ANON - dreamer on June 27, 2010
    so he finally said. I can't wait to see what Naruto's response is.
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  • From kaiyousama on June 26, 2010
    ch17 - "Because I have absolutely no clue what I did to make you love me in the first place." - totally made me cry. I feel so much for the bastard in this. Thanks for writing.
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  • From serenagold on June 26, 2010
    I am holding my breath until the next chapter.
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  • From kaiyousama on June 25, 2010
    ch8 - lovely chapter. I especially liked the line " I'm sure that in about twenty years or so, the entire world will be one nation united under Naruto." ^_^ but the cello playing was a sweet touch.
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  • From mindslip on June 24, 2010
    Damn, that was magical. The undeniable chemistry between Sasuke and Naruto is entrancing. Just imagining Sasuke, revealing the skeleton of his emotion out in the rain to Naruto, gave me chills. Why? Because it was still that shadowy crazy bastard we all halfway hate doing it and not some fabricated kitten-loving Sasuke who's eyes "glimmered with unshed tears as he clasped Naruto's hand and professed his undying affection". Really, you stay true to his dark side while withdrawing the light. And are you sure you're not the person who writes Naruto's speeches in real life? Because you bring up the most uplifting and true points that make me want to stand up and say, "Yeah! Listen to him! He's completely fucking right!" Or it just makes me think, "Wow, I really wish I could argue/persuade people like this, and not think of the perfect come-back half an hour after the fight's over." Whew! Anyways, done reviewing. Just had to let you know how much I savor your writing after digging through so many stale stories. Update as soon as your muse allows :)
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  • From ANON - softwelshrain on June 23, 2010
    Beautiful, and I like the fun with Kiba, Kiba/Hinata parallels, and that Kiba "gets it". And the bit at the end with Sasuke and Naruto - again parallels with the rain at The Valley of the End, if Sasuke had tipped that little bit further ..... I'm not even going to try and guess what's next, I'm just enjoying the ride. Great work.
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  • From ANON - lividangel on June 23, 2010
    GAAAH! I hatewhen I'm not signed in!!!

    that was me above, so PS _ go Kiba!
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