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By : KageKitsuneXXX

From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2010
sakura gets it......finally......isn't it amazing how blind we can be when it suits us??? sasuke had the right of it...the girl could be smart when she wanted to be......we like to hide the truth from ourselves when there's pain involved....good for her for moving on. i still can't believe that those girls did not know that the boys were sooooo gay for eachother.

this is your captain speaking.....buckle up people it's all down hill from here.....sorry i was listening to grandfunk railroad....i'm your captain during this review so hence the captain reference....never mind me i'm just tired as hell and this song just does it for me when i'm tired and still need to stay up.

oh and this is my ?? oh who knows i think 3rd review cuz i love you and your hard work.

thanks for the update
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From ANON - gingitsune on August 04, 2010
Wow! Just wow! This is an amazing chapter. I like how you tied up Sasuke & Fugaku's interaction & sort of lead into Neji's future.

Can't wait to read more!!! Excellent chapter that touched on alot of parts in the story & yet did not feel rushed.
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From loveusender on August 04, 2010
REVIEW!!
KAGE!! YOU'RE BACCKKK!!!! *GLOMPS*

We missed you, and prayed for our beloved couple to come back!! I just logged in and was so delighted to see an update staring me smack in the face!!

Sasuke, has FINALLY faced up to his father and it was such a relief and uplifting experience for that to happen. Having deft knowledge of the kind of reputation that Fugaku has in any story i encounter him in, he steel hold is legendary. He really prob is getting old! (HAHA!)

Naruto and Sakura's ironic situation: I literally did not breathe. I held it for the entirety of those few paragraphs...I was like SHIT! she's FINALLY GONNA FIND OUT!! I didn't expect her to faint though, that caught me off guard.

Intermission: what is going on with neji? and what "plans" does his uncle really have?

I want to be placed as INO hell-to-the yeah!!yaoi fan-girl all the WAY!! really, the shame on sakura for withholding such valuable information

and finally..some reconciliation between my two best men, i do love the pair wholefully. and three more chapters huh? I'll take them in stride!

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From ANON - DarlingShadow~ on August 03, 2010
lol I loved Sakura's reaction to finding out about Naruto and Sasuke... to just pass out.
I love your work! Keep up the awsomeness that is you, please?
And thank you for updating!
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From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2010
I still have my mind set on Neji with Naruto, but Sasuke is finally making some major strides... though, he still has close to a decade of making up to do. Kinda holding out for an awesome threesome, since other compromises have been coming about.

Sakura is still self-centered, but she now seems to be forced to move along and accept that which she cannot change. If it had actually been a girl that Sasu was in love with, you know she would have done something nefarious to her, especially with how she was still grasping at a way to force Sasu's hand through his father. I can't get how she can be so indignant that Sasu has been in love and having sex with one of HER "closest friends", when if memory serves, she purposefully insinuated herself into there already very strong (pre-sex) relationship/bond. I have no love for her. Naruto doesn't own her a damn thing, much less the answers that she seeks. She's definitely not the type of person/friend you can trust with how low she has stooped.

Was curious of what Naruto's friends might have thought of the Sasu/Neji battle, since Shika was informed by Asuma. Since we saw Naru's interaction with Sasu after the fight, was hoping to see what went on when he first saw Neji.

I am glad the patriarchs of both clans are striving to change their ways for the future of those they care for. Also curious of how/if Itachi will be brought into the picture and why exactly he was out of it in the first place.

FUNNIEST MOMENT - Ino off in her yaoi fantasy land. Too funny. Makes me feel sorry for her gay friends. Oh, also liked the bit about Sakura's 'experimental' phase.
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From ANON - qwerty on August 03, 2010
I feel like I'm watching the Hindenburg crash is slow motion (in reference to Naruto/Neji relationship). I know this is a Sasuke/Naruto and they OBVIOUSLY belong together but I hate sad endings for people who don't deserve them. In this case Neji. You've been hinting that Hiashi has major plans for Neji that will probably allow him a much bigger role in the company (and eventually take it over?) which is awesome by itself, but I was wondering/hoping that maybe Neji could find someone after Naruto finally gets with Sasuke (please?). Just a thought.
That scene with Sasuke and his father was really touching. Do we get to see Itachi get welcomed back into the fold?
I'm glad Sakura finally gets it. Even though she's hurting, she should have know better than to force the issue and basically buy Sasuke in exchange for her dad's company.
Great chapter! Love this story!
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From Prism0467 on August 03, 2010
That's right Naruto, make him work for it.

I would personally love to see Naruto and Neji wind up together, but I am fully aware that won't happen. It's just too bad. It would have been the icing on the cake after that dogfight, LOL! Sasuke would pout for years!

Ahem. Anyway, I get the impression this story is nearing its end. So I'll indulge my Naruto x Neji fantasy a while longer, until it's over for good. *sigh*

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From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2010
i will heart you forever for this story. it is wonderful with real emotions that make me cry and go YOU IDIOT!!! *shakes fist*

a song i fell in love with recently fits it well i think.

Little Lion Man by Mumford and Sons

keep up the excellent work
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From ANON - lividangel on July 12, 2010
excuses, excuses, excuses!!! first football, now tennis, what's next men in tight spandex on bikes?!!!
now listen here missy...... umm...... oooooh... so fluffy... umm..... what was I saying?

um, yes...

I glad you are making this a slow evolution and not making this easy on any of them.
and oh the boys took out there claws, rar :)
looking forward to the father and son reunion.
lovely, lovely. thank youuuuuu.

.....oooooh.... so very fluffy.......

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From ANON - Luddie on July 11, 2010
...Never in my life have I stayed up twice up until the wee hours in the morning just to read something as amazing as this. OMG! You just don't know how much love you've brought back to one of my original pairings~ Just, for a while I've quit Naruto. Hoping that one of these coming years, Sasuke would die but.... This fic brought back my lovehate for this pairing~ I would like to thank you for being such an amazing writer and I hope to see more because.. My dire need for this pairing and this fic is... OVER 90000 DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: BTW I love all the safety dance refs. It amused me a great deal and its the most In Character thing Naruto WOULD do~
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From ANON - dreamer on July 09, 2010
This is getting interesting. Sasuke was kinda right in what he said at the end.
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From serenagold on July 08, 2010
Fight!!! Things are getting heated!
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From ANON - 7troublesome on July 08, 2010
Very interesting chap! So the little bastard finally showed his claws, though I vote for Neji with both hands I really doubt that Naruto will stay with him. I totally look farward to Sasuke's suffering - please let it be long and real, the bastard deserves it!
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From ANON - Ivy on July 08, 2010
Epic fight! Glad Hiashi accepted Neji's recommendations. Sakura must wish she never forced Sasuke to marry her. Naruto seems destinied to hurt someone no matter what he chooses. Very involving fic!
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From roro237 on July 07, 2010
You had me cracking up first off with the emotions of World Cup:) Then Rafael Nadal needed your attention:) I didn't know where you were taken us after that I love you from Sasuke?! Fluffy bunny I loved where you took us! It shouldn't be that easy! Sasuke still has to many lose ends right?! I love it!!! You wont be done with this story soon!(spinning around for joy in my compute chair) I was laughing out loud at why a clan would teach a man to slap another man as a fighting technique. That struck me as so funny. One reason was because Sasuke was pulling Neji's hair:) It was like a girl fight. I really loved this one oh I say that everytime:) I did love this chapter Mrs.Soon to be X Uchiha got a little smack-down. Neji got a little joy from his Uncle. This was my pick me up today! Thank you ^_^
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