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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From PillowFight on August 23, 2010
    I just read all 19 chapters in two days and I am...speechless. You are getting a shrine in my closet right next to Masashi Kishimoto-sama and Crimson court-sama's shrine. ^.^
    The love triangle is perfect! I think you captured the story line of Naruto in RL faultlessly. What I love the most is how you've kept the personalities exactly like the manga. Sasuke's personality is so....Sasuke! I hate when he is turned into a sugar-coated-happy-go-lucky lover. You've also made me fall for Neji. Of course there is no Naruto without Sasuke, just like there is no Sasuke without Naruto. That's just a fact of life. It won't stop me from loving all the wonderful personalities you've thrown into the drama of epic proportions! I will be eagerly awaiting the next update!
    *Pets teh fluffy bunny* =3

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  • From ANON - Rachel on August 22, 2010
    I love you, you gorgeous piece of man/woman writing flesh! Everything is amazing- besides a plot line that rivals the epic saga of Naruto (or any block buster movie)- the characters are perfect.
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  • From suzannecmc on August 18, 2010
    PS - denials of lateness will be noted on your Goddess chart!

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  • From suzannecmc on August 18, 2010
    Time of death - 21:43...

    There was a solemn silence in the room before, like a banshee, Sakura screamed "Nooooooooo!"
    and grabbed the traveling defibrillator from her bag and dove for the annulment papers.
    "Oh for Christ sake.." Ino mumbled as she executed a graceful roundhouse to the forehead and Sakura flew in an arc across the room landing on the couch. Before given a chance to recover, the 'Ghost of Marriages Past' slapped a Shirley Temple Black in her hand and said "Nice try chickie!"
    But let not beat a dead horse.....

    sorry, sorry....
    OK, I said I was sorry!!!!


    this is late, I know.
    I was out of town and finally got to write.

    as I said all along, Sakura is not bad, misguided, vulnerable, insecure and a wee bit stupid, but not bad.
    as for Neji, whom I love, I get the feeling Neji is going to be so busy with his uncles 'plans' that he won't have time for a relationship.

    and you made Sasuke cry, and his dad human and his mom happy and you better have Itachi show up somewhere...oh the warm and fuzzies....

    really nice bit with Sakura and Naruto, all the right rollercoaster of emotions there. beautiful.

    Sakura swung her head around so quickly, she almost gave herself whiplash. "You've had sex?" - Perfect:)

    "Fucking Sasuke…" She muttered darkly as she slumped defeated over the counter. "Fucking Naruto… Fucking Naruto who's fucking Sasuke…" - Perfect:)

    "After all the upheaval and paradigm shifts lately, it's kind of comforting to know you're still an idiot." _ Perfect:)

    thank you:)

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  • From ANON - dreamer on August 15, 2010
    I'm interested to see how Sasuke will handle things from now on and what Narutos response will be.
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  • From ANON - Lightly on August 10, 2010
    Awesome story! I was waiting for the next chap with such impatience and was so happy to finally read it! So, the bastard finally got the idea of who he wants and how to get him... I was totally surprised though that Naru rejected his "innocent" invitation but I guess in the context of this particular stroy it is all right. Great chapter! And I really liked the Sakura/Naruto talk.
    And I want to praze how you have written the sceen between Sasuke and his farther - very touching... Tbaks a lot!
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  • From ANON - Tali on August 07, 2010
    I loved the latest chapter. I read the entire story the whole way through a bit back and tagged it to my favorites list so I could come back and check up onit. Its a beautiful well written story and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Sofuchan on August 06, 2010
    Io is my favourite XD
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  • From SuperSticky on August 05, 2010
    I just started reading this story a few days ago. Fantastic writing! I even checked out the fan created video. I can't wait to find out what happens next!


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  • From ANON - animelover on August 05, 2010
    yeah, you're back!!!!! this chapter totally kicks booty ... i luved the part where sasuneji's poppas were screaming at them, and sasu's dad came out on top; at least so far anyway. ;-)

    ok, you've drawn it out, now let the unhindered narusasu begin, and put neji to the curb. yes, i like naruneji as much as anybody. but the "you deserve better and i'm just better" attitude really stunk. LOL!! but hey, it made for really cool catfights to read, and there was finally some fist action too. drama, drama, drama. gotta luv it.
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  • From serenagold on August 04, 2010
    eeeeeee!

    Great chapter.
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  • From roro237 on August 04, 2010
    I was on a roll coaster of emotions! You even had me feeling sorry for the soon to be X? The title of this chapter was so perfect:) Sasuke blossomed more than the rest. I CAN believe that standing up to his father and crying while doing so was more pain than he had felt in his hold life! I loved that part:) Then when he went to the window and seen Naruto looking up at him. WoW that was so loving and being connected to each other.(fangirl smile with little hearts dancing around my face) Now to the funny stuff with the girls when they were drunk! I loved every bit of it! Espeically Ino going into fangirl mode:) I do love your long chapters! AND I missed you to!! ^_^
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  • From nivell on August 04, 2010
    Yay, I'm glad that Sasuke finally stood up to his dad and his dad approved!!

    Now all he needs to do is give Naruto a little time and space. Hmm, I wonder what Sasuke should do to pass the time instead of sitting at home alone, twiddling his thumbs like a loser. I know!! How about a gay cruise to the Caribbean?? That'll show that stubborn Naruto for turning away from him! (LOl, I'm just kidding, but dammit, Sasuke should stop being so stalkerish, lol! XD)
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on August 04, 2010
    I thoroughly enjoyed the latest instalment, particularly your perfect pace!
    You reveal things at the right moment, and progress smoothly, allowing the characters to progresses realistically, it brilliant.
    Plus you have such eloquence in your words! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - softwelshrain on August 04, 2010
    Oh God - I cried, I laughed. Sasuke-Bastard - he's been forced to dig deep and found some emotions. Sakura got hers, still not really accepting it though. Please, please don't be nasty to Neji, he has been Naruto's saviour, and I would hate to see him shipped off to some moon base or other to open up a branch of Hyuuga Industries or whatever. I want to see how it wraps up, but then what?? It can't end!!! Great work
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