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Reviews for Torrid

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From Nicola258 on September 29, 2010
    Ahhh!! Cant believe a cliff hanger at such a vital moment!! i'm in love with this story. Too excited for words for the next one. Been addicted since chapter one. Keep up the good work!! XXx
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  • From ANON - softwelshrain on September 29, 2010
    AAAAWWWWWW - what a cop out for Neji! After he tried so hard, a talk with his "seniors" and the carrot of de-caging veered him off course and he effectively throws in the towel. Another wonderful chapter - you take your time, my dear, quality is better than quantity. I really don't think you would have any defectors from this piece of writing, just a lot of sore heads and badly bitten nails. Especially after THAT ending ..........
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on September 29, 2010
    Argh! I may have to kill you. Not for the late update, but for the cliffie and the unkown as to how long it may be until you uuuuuuuuuuupppppppddddddatttttttttttteeeeeeeee!!!! This is the only story i actively check daily for and i feel like a crackhead waiting for the next update hahahah! Keep up the frustratingly awesome work ;D
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  • From ANON - Ivy on September 29, 2010
    Amazing!!!
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  • From roro237 on September 28, 2010
    I was smiling giggling and then the belly laugh can with Sarutobi-sama saying he hadn't heard that much name-dropping since he listen to his grandson's hip-hop music:) Plus I have heard the older generation say "wazoo" before. I loved the hold interview scene:) I had some good laughs with the "X". I'm going to say it 'poor thing' I had to since she is trying to get help and get her life back on track. And Neji I'm happy he is alright moving on. Well alright as he can be for now. But KK the bomb you dropped on us was an atomic one! Naruto needing time! Yes I can see that but wOw! You are gOOd! This chapter was fantastic and I loved it all! Most of all I have missed you ^_^
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  • From ANON - sango_houshi on September 28, 2010
    oh...my...god... you are horrible. that was just mean and cruel of you. i almost fainted. this is by far one of the best stories ive ever read. i know you dont update as often as we'd like, seeing as how you actually have a life, but if i offered a mountain of cookies and cows for milk would you *please* update as soon as possible???

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  • From ANON - richon on September 28, 2010
    hoho no naru you can't say your goodbye. I want an happyending !!! see you soon I love your story
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 28, 2010
    AHHH. This story is seriously tugging hard on my heart-strings. I feel so much for Naruto, Sasuke, and Neji (not really Sakura though... lolz). Those 3 guys are constantly trying to negotiate between their identity, what's best for them vs. their family/other people's expectations, and more (which I can totally identify with).
    I just want everyone to be happy (as sappy as that sounds, I really do hate sad endings) but I know realistically the journey there has been and will continue to be full of problems.
    Great chapter!!
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  • From suzannecmc on September 28, 2010
    Talk about emotional roller-coaster! were you just trying to put me in a rubber room!!!

    thank heaven's no one was home when I read this because I can't remember when I laughed out loud so much
    more than half of this masterpiece had me howeling:D

    then:
    "It was a good season." Naruto smiled sadly as he pulled away. The finality of the situation was a little breathtaking for them both. oh now this...why don't you stick an ice-pick in my ear, I would have cried less...and to top it off after I go and listen to the song "everything you want" my jaw dropping at how perfect it was and how perfect your Neji is.

    then I'm off laughing at the bar scene
    (looking out for the nice men in white coats with soothing voices to take me away)

    and then you do this!!!
    "I don't know." Naruto ran a hand agitatedly over his face. "I don't know how much time I'll need, Sasuke… and I'm not asking you to wait."

    you leave me on a *tight-rope* while Naruto kicks Sasuke in the head o.0

    thanks for that by the way:) I always said Naruto was just as much to blame)
    well I'm getting a drink or ten!

    thank you - your the Goddessie-goodness-best!

    I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

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  • From suzannecmc on September 28, 2010
    The Goddess is doing 'jazz hands', the Goddess is doing 'jazz hands' !!!

    IT IS A SIGN OF THE COMING REVELATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    now once again stop apologizing for life getting in the way! it's really hard to write when you have only an empty cavity in your noggin:)

    ps - I reaaally liked your poem...


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  • From ANON - Dreamer on September 28, 2010
    I'll be interested to see if Sasuke can convince Naruto to stay with him or something similar.
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  • From loveusender on September 28, 2010
    Shit! I was NOT expecting that at all! After everything..he's letting Sasuke go?!! NOONOO!!he can't do that *he cant give up that easily!*
    Stating such a final decision is too rash right now.Is this really how things are going to end? *cries* NO KAGE YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO USSS!!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on September 28, 2010
    Yay Naruto! Way to grow a set!
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  • From on September 18, 2010
    HOLY CRUD! i just read this whole thing in one sitting...it has got to be the best narusasu story i've ever read
    i can't wait to read the end!!
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  • From ANON - Miss Just on September 02, 2010
    I usually don't start reading fics that are not completed yet. But the summary of this one was nice and I though: let's give it a try, it shouldn't be something that I will read everything, right? WRONG! Damn, girl, I loved this! It's amazing how you can work the relationshio of those two for so many long chapters and, yet, it's still vicious and it really looks like a real relationship, not a "fic-relationship". It was really, really nice to read this fiction and I don't regret it, even if it looks like it'll not have a new chapter soon (and, trust me, I hate when this happen, and usually make me feel mad at myself for reading the fic).
    Anyway, I just want to say that the fic is awesome and a hope a loooot that you can give us a new chapter soon ^^
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