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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2010
    I like where this is going. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - lividangel on February 21, 2010
    I trust you, Sakura. You're one of the few people I can trust - waaa kick in the head to Sakura!

    ...I'm better - kick in the head to Naruto -yeah Neji! (knew he would be a witness)

    nice excitment thought out this chapter, makes you read it in seconds flat. that's how much it draws you in!

    oh and the whole boat/goat thing...my first thought at the end of the sentance was Dr.Seuss and there you go and say it in the next line...
    I believe this means I've reached the next level of discipledom! (runs off to your gold likeness to bow and pray)
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  • From Prism0467 on February 21, 2010
    All right Neji! Way to challenge the boundaries!

    I want him to win. Sasuke is SUCH a god-awful JERK.
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  • From loveusender on February 21, 2010
    I can't believe I'm SAYING THIS..but..I'm rooting for Neji. I have had it up to *there* with sasuke wining and jerking people around to meet his desires.I care about him and Naruto sooo much, but he just can't keep doing this! Naruto is NOT his plushie to be toyed with whenever he wants.
    It takes Someone as clear eyed as Neji to see that. I just really hopes he makes the right choice. I feel so sorry for Sakura at this point. This is something that she will NEVER understand, she's just at a turntable of trouble and doesn't realize it yet. *sigh* Great update by the way, Kage!! ^^
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  • From Munez on February 21, 2010
    OH SHIT. This story is all kinds of plot twisty. *flails* This is addictive. I'm definitely psyched for the next updated.
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  • From ANON - liby318 on February 21, 2010
    Loved Neji's talk with Naruto at the end. Naruto needs more than what Sasuke is willing to give and it would be great to see Neji be the one to show Naruto.
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on February 21, 2010
    As always I have nothing but wonderful things to say. So [insert as many positive remarks here as you see fit]. Can't wait till the next chapter
    ~Cianis
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  • From ANON - lividangel on February 16, 2010
    Oh I hope your keeping Neji as a hiccup!
    and it took me five minutes to stop laughing over your resturant choice:D

    Sasuke who I think truly believes he's doing right by the two of them
    Naruto who is so hung up on Sasuke that he can't think straight
    and a vulnerable Neji - wonderful:)

    the talking between Naruto and Neji in the woods was...oh heavens it was so charged, so sexy!

    thank you oh Goddess of Naruto land!


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  • From ANON - anon on February 15, 2010
    O. M. G.

    "He wasn’t even sure where an ‘onus’ should be located."

    if laughter cures all ills I will soon be a very well woman. That's why (ahem) it's quite imperative that you continue to write naruto. Forever. Unceasingly.
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  • From ANON - anon on February 15, 2010
    Ahh! I LOVE:
    "As far as he could work out from the first few paragraphs, he was promising them his firstborn providing that they spun all his straw into gold. Sounded like a fair trade to him. Deciding that whatever it was wasn’t worth the impending aneurysm, Naruto started signing."

    I've raved about your work in many reviews. One thing I loved about Role Play was sasuke not being evil: just rude, clueless, and in pain. Your portrayal of these too boys, throughout thier lives, reaching out and pulling back until they finally understand, was nothing short of brilliant. I find myself hoping torrid!sasuke has a reason to be they way he is, and a capacity to grow...because I hate to see naruto hurt (unless there is a spectacular reward at the end, hee hee).

    since I'm supposed to critique (damn that, how can I critique a genius?) I'll say this: I'm weird, but I like writing to be writing and manga, manga. So my least favorite of your writing (though I still love them) are those that tread across that boundary. You are not a big violator of this, you hardly even use "sweatdrops". But when writers say: "sakura punched naruto, and a throbbing bump the size of his head burst up", my mental images of the characters are ruined. Thank you for not going there. BUT! Don't be you DARE let my comments be in your mind when you write humor-- I don't want anything to disturb your genius for comic timing!
    adore you...
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  • From ANON - richon on February 14, 2010
    neji can't just let naru go away !! i love your story, see you soon!!
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  • From loveusender on February 13, 2010
    I wouldn't want ot be Naruto right now. No way. He has such a hard choice to make. I would really welcome him getting involved with neji but unless he does something about it, Sasuke will always be an anchor trapped on his leg to drag him to the pit of sorrow. He can't keep going on like this. IT WILL TEAR HIM APART!..BTW: Neji is so cute ^_^
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  • From DevilnBlue on February 12, 2010
    I'd be a fool not to review this when I saw that you had a new chapter. I squee'd in my head when I saw it and when I remembered that this was the chapter that Hyuga entered I was doing freaking backflips... in my head.

    My gosh I loved every moment between Naruto and Neji and I freaking laughed until I cried when Neji ate the chilly of life. At first I was omigosh this will end up like one of those teen slasher movies when I found they were meeting out in the woods then it progressed to my cheeks hurting from smiling so hard. My god just picturing the proud and sophisticated Neji just suddenly smiling confidently, freezing up as his face changes color and just keeling over was freaking brilliant. That was one of the best filler episodes ever and I'm glad someone actually touched on it. Meh... still think TenTen was trying to kill Neji by feeding him that curry.

    Awww and the moment when Naruto said that Neji was his type got me all warm and fuzzy inside. I was really hoping that Neji could be the one that could drag Naruto from thinking about that damn Uchiha bastard. I swear if there is still someone out there that thinks that Sasuke still deserves Naruto after this moment they need to be flogged. Yes I used a new torture word... flogged. But meh, loved it... as always and I'm ranting again. Sorry...CONTINUE!!!!

    And damn it I swear Sasuke is like crack >< But if Whitney can recover from it then so can Naruto. Crack is whack Naruto... REMEMBER THAT >
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  • From Softwelshrain on February 12, 2010
    Love your wit - from the details of the contract (what was that!!!) and all through the "date"! That's more like Naruto, it was good to see him laugh, even if was at the expense of Neji. Until Sasuke turned up. How about Naruto change his locks?? Naruto belongs to Sasuke, eh? Grrrrrrrrrr......... Sasuke, grow some balls and do the right thing!
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  • From USuki on February 12, 2010
    Ah! woo-hoo! An update already! Keep it up, and thanks for the best story I've read in a long time. ^^
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