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Reviews for Torrid

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - Macy on February 23, 2010
    Neji is so awesome in this. I'm now undecided as to who I want naruto to end up with. Sasuke is such a moron but I already knew that beforehand. I've always had this love-hate relationship with the broody jerk. Argh. Anyway I think this is developing well. It started a little slow for me but the latest chapters have been fantastic. I'll be on the lookout for more updates.
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  • From Kalos on February 23, 2010
    WOW I ... wow its awesome... there really is no other word for it you are doing a great job. I especially liked Neji's speech Rarely do I like how he is written but you balance him very well cant wait to see were this goes. I know this is sasunaru/narusasu but I cant help and root for Neji ^.^
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  • From ANON - richon on February 22, 2010
    i love neji !!! he really know what he want; sasu must realise what it's important befor it' s too late. I love your story!!!more more !!!!!
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  • From aliases101 on February 22, 2010
    Yes I hope this means more nejinaru in the future.
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  • From ANON - Kt on February 22, 2010
    Yes!!! Amazing story.

    I don't want Neji to win in the end but lets show mother fuck'r Sasuke what jealousy is!!!

    God damn I want Naruto to hurt Sasuke SO bad instead of being his 'indoor bathroom'!!! Aieeeee must read moar!

    Go Narutoooooooooo! BWAIE -faint-

    ahem so like yeah, jesus best story I've read in a LONG time.
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  • From Dorkchic on February 22, 2010
    Oh my God I LOVED Neji's speech at the end of the chapter. It managed to be confident, sweet, observant, and sympathetic all at once- very impressive. I cannot wait to see how it affects Naruto.
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  • From Softwelshrain on February 22, 2010
    So, there's a small (miniscule) little light flickering in Sasuke's head at last?? He's offended because Naruto calls him boring - dear lord, there must be better choice words to describe him than "boring"!!! But nevertheless the apology from Naruto triggered something. I'm rooting for Neji but am resigned that it's not gonna happen - poor guy. There's bound to be fallout of major proportions eventually, and I'm loving the tantalising way that you are getting there splattered with a good dose of fun (Crunch - owieeeee!). Good work!
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  • From LumiiSol on February 22, 2010
    I'm starting to feel like I'm the only person actually rooting for Sasuke. :(

    I think it's kind of rude of Neji to constantly question Naruto about his personal choices, even if he does believe himself to be better. I'd be pretty ticked off myself if some semi-stranger just sort of floated into my life and started criticizing all of my choices, whether or not they were good or bad ones. In my opinion, Neji is most definitely the asshole in this story. But I'm pretty sure I'm beginning to be the only one who thinks that.

    In the case of Sasuke, I think you have to give the guy credit for the fact that he is doing what he can. He is trying to save face for his family by marrying a girl he doesn't like and yet he is still devoted to Naruto. It would be one thing if he had constant sex with Sakura, but even from her thoughts we see that he still only has eyes for Naruto and has only had sex with her to consummate the marriage. Sasuke is in a rock and a hard place. He has obligation to his family and job and to his lover and he has to sort those things out properly before he can move forward. And yes, while this is difficult on Naruto too, you can see that Naruto does get pleasure and happiness out of being with Sasuke. He obviously cares about him, just as Sasuke obviously cares about him. The romance is strong even if it is hidden.

    I just hope that Sakura's deception can be revealed so all will be settled and Neji can move on to someone whom he hasn't meet only a few times and isn't already in love.

    Keep up the great work; I'm looking forward to seeing how this will play out! ☺
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  • From LadyWolf on February 21, 2010
    I totally agree with Neji!!! Sasuke is an asshole to the fullest!!!!

    Naruto needs to open those pretty blue eyes of his and see that AssHole(Sasuke) is using him...
    Like Neji stated, there is history there, but what the hell man!!! You are basically the lover to your best friend who happens to be married to your other best friend...

    Come on Naruto...dude!!! That doesn't seem right!!!!

    One other thing...CHANGE THE DAMN LOCKS TO YOUR APARTMENT!!! Than the bastard can't get in whenever he wants...!

    *taking a deep breath**

    Great fic!!! Post soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Assassin's Kiss on February 21, 2010
    Too lazy to sign in but had to review while I was still fueled up. Yes Neji you are better. For some odd reason I had the freaking picture in my head of 'The Six Million Dollar Man' you know the whole mess about we have the techonology to build him stronger, faster. It was like Neji was going all bionical by saying he was smarter, and had the great eyes and crap but it doesn't matter because Neji's the one >
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  • From ANON - Katey on February 21, 2010
    Holy crap, I didn't realise it wasn't completed! Pleassssssssssssssssse more. Amazing story (although naruto's mercy is getting on my nerves, PUNCH THE BASTARD IN THE BALLS NARUTO!!) So yeah. Seriously the best fan fiction I have read EVER!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on February 21, 2010
    Ok I've followed this story since like the second chapter I think, and I haven't reviewed because I'm not a NaruSasu fan. I'm SasuNaru and the other irks me however reading your story I find that I have not been able to stop reading it. Your good writing and plot have manipulated me ARGH!! LoL, now, I love Sasuke and Naruto together oodles oodles oodles! No pairing has ever been more right in my eyes *stars and hearts in her eyes* And I'm pretty sure once everything is out in the air that's how this story will end, but I must say....I LOVE A COMPETITIVE NEJI!!!! *swoon* can't wait for more =D
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  • From ANON - Michelle on February 21, 2010
    Oh, sweet jesus lord all mighty. This story is like the finest Columbian cocaine. Necessito mas sexo por favor.

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  • From serenagold on February 21, 2010
    Go Neji!!! I think thats a Check worthy move.

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  • From ANON - KC on February 21, 2010
    I am hoping the Neji and Naruto will get together in the end of this story. Naruto deserves better that the Sasuke in this story. Although part of me wants to see Sakura suffer for all her schemes. Looking forward to the next chapter when you post it.
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