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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - dar on March 02, 2010
    YAY for new Chappie!!! Sigh I'm torn on who I think Naruto would be happy with!! I mean I like how sasuke is with naruto and I like how neji is with naruto.......now if only there was some way that sasuke could denounce his dretched marriage to sakura, ugh. Keep up the good work!!! Thanks for the update!!
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  • From ANON - SexyRyu28 on March 01, 2010
    *daydreams of strangling Sakura with a Cello string*

    Oh hai ^o^
    I'm torn between Sasuke and Neji *sigh* So much love and so much sad stuff and always that woman in the middle of it all just makes me so angry. See, a good story makes me feel a whole bunch of things ans this is a good story. Nice update for before bed reading.

    Ryu
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  • From inuspike on March 01, 2010
    You're making my moods just swing all over the place with this one. First, I'm laughing at Neji and his wondrous experience on the farm. Then, forlorn at Naruto's tale of non-existence and subsequent acceptance from Sasuke. Moving right along to pissed at Sakura for thinking that she could even fathom the boys' 'unique' relationship via scientific observation, then take these observations and apply them to her own relationship with Sasuke. All the way up to (and I really have no other word for this) "Awwww" when Sasuke decides to act as Naruto's muse (love the way you didn't have that lead into something physical, but equally as intimate). And backed to pissed when Sakura thinks she could EVER have that kind of closeness when she's a scheming trollop. Grrr...

    Excellent chapter though! I thoroughly enjoyed my little mood roller-coaster. ^^
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  • From ANON - lividangel on March 01, 2010
    uggg!
    I can't get use to this typing your name bother!
    that was me above (anon)

    well I will add that I am very curious about Neji and his roll in this
    so write as much as you want, let the chapters flow, and I love the fact that you
    allude to the fact that you stories end just were they are suppose, to no more - no less.

    that my friend is a writer in every sense of the word:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2010
    "So let me get this straight. You want to put Naruto and Sasuke in a controlled environment like a couple of your lab mice, watch them interact and make a series of observations that should lead you to make informed deductions, after which you'll be able to make a fitting conclusion, thus salvaging some semblance of a marriage?"

    GO INO!!!

    double the usual writing...well then thank you, thank you!
    and if you take next week off the GREAT ORANGE DICTATOR will come after you!!!

    (it's nice that I haven't fit all the puzzle pieces together yet and you have surprises in each chapter, lovely - thanks:D)
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  • From aliases101 on March 01, 2010
    I am not getting tired of this story. I check back everyday for an update crossing my fingers that this will be nejinaru for at least 2 chapters. No one writes that pairing anymore. Keep up the good work I love it.
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  • From ANON - Daisy on March 01, 2010
    Wow... i just started reading this today and i have to say it's a fabulous story.. Can't wait for more. I feel so sorry for Naruto. All that scheming on everyone elses part and he seems to be getting the short end of the stick. i know he should say no to Sasuke but i have been in somewhat the same situation and it is never easy to walk away. I can't wait for more. Please update soon!
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on March 01, 2010
    It was beautiful as always. I think I would die without andother chapter but I suppose it would be all the sweeter reading it the following week. Sasuke playing cello for Naruto is the cutest thing I have ever read!! I can just imagine the scene. I cant wait for the end just so I can see how the story comes together!! I really hope that they can be happy and Sakura realizes Sasuke will never love her like he loves Naruto. And I hope Neji gives it up lmao. Sasuke is soooo better XD
    ~Cianis, waiting with baited breath
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2010
    Hmmm. Sasuke's now showing some interesting sides that are not totally selfish... could it be love?
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  • From ANON - reality bites on March 01, 2010
    i don't know who asked how long this would be but honestly this is one of my favorite fics of all time. its really got the depth of character development and thought that is lacking from so many one-shots.

    i hope you write until you havent got a single idea left of how to take this story forward :)
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  • From roro237 on March 01, 2010
    That was so awesome!! The way Naruto describled his love for Sasuke and being a ghost was so breath taking to me:) Then Sasuke keeping the laptop and wanting to be Naruto muse was so romantic:) I hope Mrs.Uchiha will see that all the tricks in the world can't change someones heart. WoW! I totally loved that chapter!! The hard work you put into it came shining threw! Hey no running away after giving us a punch in the stomach talking about taking a week off:)
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  • From Prism0467 on March 01, 2010
    KK you are a goddess.
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  • From ANON - SexyRyu28 on February 28, 2010
    First time reviewing any of your stories (tho' I've read most of them)
    I'm a sucker for love triangles, I was already too wrapped in the story when you added the Hyuuga element.
    Neji's last words just hit home and I anxiously wait for the next chapter.
    Thanks for sharing and awesome work.

    ~SexyRyu28
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  • From ANON - lryne on February 26, 2010
    i definitely agrre to Neji!

    its not just i like neji-naruto pairing, but i am an avid fan of naruto-sasuke pairing always, i just like it when Neji is way better than Sasuke in some sense. and i like it when Neji becomes the 3rd party, Naruto deserves someone who deserves. Sasuke is afraid to lose their reputation so it only means he doesnt love Naruto to the extent that what other people say to him matter more than anything else.

    unlike Neji that his uncle doesnt care if his a gay as long as he's doing his job....

    hmmm..it would be an interesting chapter where somehow neji and naruto will attend some charity party and then they will meet sasuke and sakura their, i really love seeing sasuke so very jealous specially if neji will make a move on naruto publicly! and he can't do anything about it for it will ruined his image..hahah XD

    i wonder what will he felt when he knows that his rival also got interested in the one he love, will he fight for his 'love' or something like that or not?

    please update soon
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 24, 2010
    i'm sorry, neji. but all i have to say to you is, fuck that shit. no one is better for naruto than sasuke.

    lol.

    i like this story. i am so not looking forward to the angst and drama that may happen before we reach the end of this ride, but it doesn't detract from the story's goodness. i look forward to the next update!
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