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Reviews for Torrid

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - lividangel on March 10, 2010
    oh,oh!
    Neji just kept aiming the arrows!!!

    nice little roller coaster this:)

    flash-backs, heart-ache, and frazzled minds
    (and how often does one get an Arch Duke Ferdinand reference in Naruto-land? Not to many WWI references by my count)

    and yes...I too knew "Cellophane"

    thanks cookie!!!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on March 10, 2010
    This keeps getting better and better. I love the mix of the profound, as in Neji's parting speech to Naruto as well as the funny with Ino's "Oh you bitch; I have been looking for those shoes everywhere."
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  • From Prism0467 on March 10, 2010
    LOL Sakura is so clueless it defies description. I'm seriously LMAO.
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on March 10, 2010
    What Sakura needs to do is get a friggin reality check and realize she will never really fit into Sasuke and Naruto's relationship! Cuz in all honesty that's what it is! Sasuke and Naruto were friends and she jumped in, in any way she could fit because she was friggin obsessed wit a guy who will NEVER SEE HER!
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  • From roro237 on March 10, 2010
    Well well well Mrs.Uchiha the little black dress didn't work huh?! I'm mad at Sasuke for not remembering! But even if he didn't he could have been nicer about it! And I'm mad at Naruto for remembering something like that! Then expecting Sasuke to remember it to! I love your story it shakes me up and I like that:) I should feel sorry for Mrs Uchiha. But I just can't. She pushes Naruto around to much! I need to say this one more time I love your story!! Plus you crack me up either before the story or at the end or both:) This one~your mind is yaoi and Broadway all day everyday was so funny to me:) What a combo ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2010
    okay this is my 3rd review and I was only going to leave one on ygal and ff but dammit after youtubing the damned song...that is all I can hear in my head now....So yeah thanks for encouraging me to go check out broadway songs only to have them stuck in my head...Mr. Cellophane Mr. Cellophane...UGH!!!

    Hope that makes you chuckle a little...by the way.....Loved the chapter...do you get how much I love this story yet? Leaving you 3 reviews in one day....OMG I'm a damned stalker!


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  • From serenagold on March 10, 2010
    Yaoi and Broadway all day? Are you sure you're not a fellow New Yorker? lol

    Great chapter! Things are really breaking down. Sasuke's little house of cards is going to come crashing down around him and the collateral damage will be massive. I wonder how Naruto will respond to Sakura's questioning of his and Sasuke's relationship. He's going to think she knows and Sakura's not going to expect the kind of answer he could give.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From DevilnBlue on March 07, 2010
    Meh, meh this is so freaking sad. Naruto-chan you aren't a ghost to me but I like how you described it though. It still doesn't mean I like Sasuke though, even if he can play the cello like a god. It only cements the fact that he is only truly happy with Naruto and if he's not willing to acknowledge to the point where he is willing to stop playing tug-o-war with Naruto's feelings then he seriously doesn't deserve him.

    My god you put Neji on the farm? Poor thing he was getting all warmed up watching Naruto chopping wood and you had to ruin it with thoughts of manure. Thank god Neji is stubborn. It's cute how he acknowledges the fact that he's a complete idiot around Naruto but I love the situations you create with Neji and Naruto more than with Sasuke. I seriously want the pairing to end up this way so... *tries to push the story into the 'Naruto/Neji' corner of aff.net*

    It's just so wrong... Naruto doesn't deserve to be just the other woman... I mean other man. And sure Sakura tricked Sasuke into marriage but she doesn't really need to deserve this either. Neji is a best bet and as soon as Neji can figure away to convince Naruto that then the better. Can't wait for more though XP
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2010
    Your story is amazing! Whoever says it should stop isn't worth your time. This is one of the most riveting, exciting, tense, dramatic and beautiful fics I have read in years. I await for your update.

    I can't wait to see how this turns out!
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  • From ANON - FireonIce on March 05, 2010
    I'm not gonna lie, that ending broke my heart. I admit I'm 100% rooting for something awful to happen, the marriage to end and for Sasuke and Naruto to ride of into the sunset together but...
    When you're a fan of SasuNaru, poor Sakura, who really can be a great character, often gets swept aside. I'm really not a big fan of hers, especially not in the anime but it's moments like these that remind me just how much their fragile relationship means to her. I mean yeah, now we know she's a conniving jerk who set it all up and is splitting the boys apart for nothing more then her own emotional satisfaction but still, I can't help but shed a tear for the poor girl who is lost in a storm of lies, ambition and a bottomless love that is ultimately doomed to fail.
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  • From serenagold on March 03, 2010
    This chapter was beautiful. Everything about it was perfect. Sasuke is such a prick and everything about the nature of the relationship he forced upon Naruto makes me want to scream for Naruto to go to Neji, but after a chapter like this I can see why Naruto would find it hard to leave.


    Keep up the great work.
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  • From kinai26 on March 02, 2010
    Loved it, just like I loved the past chapters. Will wait patiencly for the next update
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  • From ANON - dolphina23 on March 02, 2010
    Oh wow. For the first time in a long time, I couldn't stop reading. I've seen this story here and on Y! Gallery but never thought to click on it. I regret it now. It's beautiful, yet subtly dark and complicated, just how I love them. And different too. And while I'm no fan of Neji, especially not Neji and Naruto, the scenes with them worked well for this story. They all stay mostly in character too, hard for an AU, except Sakura who is definitely far more devious than in the manga. But I love that too unlike when it happens in other stories, it's just the right amount and so carefully put together. It adds great intrigue. I'll be watching on Y! Gallery for a new update. Please don't wait too long!
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  • From ANON - richon on March 02, 2010
    sakura has got no chance at all, I hope so!! sasu you need to decide, because naru is madely in love with you but neji will interfere!!
    I am crving for more !! see you next week
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  • From loveusender on March 02, 2010
    That was so beautiful! There's definitely something deeper there. neji is good but the binding strength of Naruto and sasuke's relationship goes BEYOND words. Having that as a child makes it even stronger. Sakura is going downhill with that plan. Never going to work *shakes head*
    The cello playing was wonderful! and sasuke smiled! man, i felt like something lit up in my heart also *feels fluffy inside* I'm a sucker for sasuke *hangs head in shame..*
    You can definitely get a break hun, a week is good, but don't keep us waiting forever! we will track you down!!
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