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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - teasetillyoudrop on March 21, 2010
    Bad Romance indeed. That was the song that was going through my head the moment Sasuke suggested that Naruto sleep with Sakura so that they could get off his back.

    As much as I feel bad about Sasuke needing to marry for the sake of duty, and Sakura being madly in love with Sasuke... I say FFFFF them both. Naruto's love is so pure and blinding that... you've broken my heart. Even though I don't really like Neji with Naruto... I kinda wish they have at least a little time together so that the bastard, aka Sasuke, at least gets some idea as to what Naruto's going through. Hell, if I wasn't so into NaruSasu, I'd say let Sasuke and Sakura burn for their sham of a marriage but I want Naruto and Sasuke together ;_;. You have them so IC that I could picture this if the manga was shoujo, with Sasuke being the self centered a-hole, Sakura the blindly in love and Naruto, the one who wants everyone's happiness at the cost of his own.

    Gah, I can't say how much I enjoy, hate, and love this story all at once. Keep up the good work and I hope you make Sasuke pay somewhat for what Naruto's gone through for his ass. :D
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  • From DevilnBlue on March 20, 2010
    I know I should be sad... I really should... end of a NaruSasu dynasty and all that jazz but I'm freaking doing cartwheels in my head. And god damn it don't play with my feelings. Don't you dare yank the rug from under my feet by giving me false hope that it could be a Naruto/Neji fic because the blonde seriously needs someone who will appreciate him. All of him without mindfucking with him to get his way. It's not in his nature to hurt others and for Sasuke to not realize it... to not appreciate that and love him for that is unforgivable. He's more of a taker than a giver and... meh... Down with Sasuke, up with Neji. Really love this chapter not just because it seems like Naruto is really, breaking up with the Grinch who Stole Christmas. Lol, now I'm going to call Sasuke Grinch in my head, but anywhoo... no I'm in love with the emotional rollercoaster you sent us all on. And I'm happy that even though Naruto knows he loves Sasuke with all of his being he knows that now it's time to stop with all these games. *holds out hands* More please. Hopefully Neji can help heal Naruto's heart and maybe a dash of Sasuke suffering will be nice
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  • From ANON - KC on March 20, 2010
    I do not remember if I have left you a review on this story yet or not. So if I am repeating something I wrote perviously sorry.

    I hope that you hook up Neji and Naruto as a couple. I think it would be wonderful for Sakura and Sasuke to get their "just desserts" for all of their lying and manipulating. ALSO for Gods sake have Naruto change the locks on the appartment, so Sasuke can not just show up there. Or have him move to a new place.

    Looking forward to new chapters...

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  • From DevilnBlue on March 20, 2010
    Oh dude, my heart freaking sputtered for a second when Sakura said that. I'm pretty sure Naruto is having his first ever heart attack at those words. She probably doesn't mean to say it the way she is saying it but still... man oh man, that's not good at all and by God Naruto buy yourself a clue. I'm starting to get pissed at all three of them now and can only Neji right now because he's the only one who makes sense. Him and Ino are now the only ones I'm liking right now because Sakura is beyond delusional and Sasuke is an emotionaless bastard that can only feel with his dick seventy-five percent of the time to realize that he's not only hurting his wife Sakura who he is supposed to be married to but his bestie Naruto. I know run-on sentence but meh, this story always gets me flustered but in a good way of course. Naruto... sweetie, you idiot.. Neji could so be the one because he's not attached and he's hot and he won't treat you like a doormat twenty-four seven so pick him for everyones good @_@ I don't care if Sasuke has a change of heart and realizes in his Grinch-like heart that he actually loves Naruto beyond friendship. I could give a flying fuck because he doesn't deserve Naruto and as manipulative as Sakura was she doesn't deserve Sasuke either. Meh but kudos on flashback moment though XP
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  • From loveusender on March 20, 2010
    I don't think that Sasuke expected it to end like that at all. For someone that always has a retort, he was pretty dumbstruck. Even the bed? was he really stooping that low to make naruto feel worse? That's not right man, not right.
    Now that it's over, is Sasuke going to continue living within the pretense of a loveless marriage? Where will Neji fit in? And can Naruto repair his broken heart enough to move..on.

    The part at the end really hit me hard *sniff* i wanted to cuddle up my dobe in my arms and tell him that everything was going to be alright, that Sasuke-teme doesn't deserve him. I just wanted to wipe his tears.
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  • From ANON - midnight essence on March 20, 2010
    Damn lady gaga! I
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2010
    Nonononoonnoooo!!!
    Poor naruto x_x
    Sasuke and Naruto should be togetherr! Arghh! I hope Sasuke finds out about what Sakura did, and then ditchers her so him and naruto could be together..haha..
    Anyways, I absolutely love this story, you're really an amazing author @_@
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on March 20, 2010
    Perfect, absolutely perfect. Their breakup was so intense. I'm feeling so many emotions right now, I almost feel as if I'm in Naruto's head. Amazing chapter.

    Please, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - richon on March 20, 2010
    oh poor naru, sasu you are a real bastard !! hope you will move and fast!! because neji is here !!
    see you soon, hopefuly your computer will not be dead any time soon !!! because i am craving for more, i love this stroy !!
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  • From ANON - Tweedleedee on March 20, 2010
    I have never cried so much while reading another fanfic. This chapter was perfect, it hurt so much. You writing is great. I hate you for hurting my favorite character ever, but I love you also.
    Thank you, and I hope it will go better for Naruto (Sasuke, too, I love him when he loves Naruto).
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2010
    Poor Naruto. He deserves so much more for what he gives. He needs a break from both Sasuke and Sakura. At the very least, Naruto should be unreachable to either of them until he can get himself together. It feels like they prey on him in his weakness of love for them. Hopefully, Neji will pick up the pieces and build something strong with Naruto, be it friendship or more.
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  • From Dorkchic on March 20, 2010
    Oh My God. I was actually crying a little by the end of that chapter. My situation was not as extreme as theirs but I have given a speech like Naruto's before. So I could really envision the detached look on his face (as if he were on the outside watching it happen) and that dead flat tone of voice that you only get when you are attempting to distance yourself from something. Extremely well written and I hope your computer holds up because I cannot wait for the rest of this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2010
    I've become obsessed with this story!
    HURRY UP AND BRING ME MY NEXT FIX D
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  • From aliases101 on March 20, 2010
    Woo loved the chapter now we can get some nejinaru action.
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on March 20, 2010
    Sasuke is a jerk, piece of s***!!!!! Ugh and I'm the one who's all for Sasuke and Naruto being together! (Question: Is this strictly NaruSasu?? Like will Sasuke never top??? Is Neji gonna top Naruto???) Sasuke needs to know how it really feels to lose someone, REALLY LOSE someone! He should walk in on them having sex tch...
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