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Reviews for Torrid

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2010
    "You hungry?" "Not really." "Fuck yes, you're hungry...." That was a beautiful exchange right there. couldn't continue on with the rest of the story for about 3 minutes I was laughing so hard.

    also, as a side...i must have used step 2 to over power step 1 because i didn't have much of a stay in bed and life is crap moment..... now i want to know if there are more steps i missed.

    great story... even though i feel like i should be slightly depressed and pissed about naruto's situation your cometic timing makes everything really easy to take and helps keep my interest.

    Happy writing!!!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on April 01, 2010
    After all his hard work, Kiba is back to square one with Naruto. Poor Kiba. However, I'm happy that Kiba kept Sasuke away, he needs to suffer a lot more than Naruto does. Thanks for another great chapter.
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  • From serenagold on April 01, 2010
    Goddamn Uchiha!!!! He just doesn't care who he hurts or what damages ensue as long as he gets what he wants. What an ass.


    Keep up the great work! As always, your updates for this story are fantastic!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 01, 2010
    AH! I prefer the crazy, energetic Naruto over the sad, morose Naruto. Sasuke needs to get his shit together and stop toying with Naruto's heart - either you want him or you don't. Argh.
    Anyway, great chapter. I love this story!
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  • From Prism0467 on April 01, 2010
    REading this reminds me why I don't do relationships anymore. Egad.
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  • From ANON - fireonice on March 29, 2010
    Your endings are always so good.
    I can no longer tell who I want to win. Sasuke is being so selfish but I can't honestly say I don't want it to work out but Neji is a great second choice. I cannot wait to keep reading so I hope your computer holds out for, if nothing else, my sanity's sake because I don't think I could stand it if you ever discontinued the story. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - lividangel on March 26, 2010
    girl, let us know were to send the donations for your new pc!
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  • From Vixenreborn on March 25, 2010
    I don't normally opt for NarutoxNeji, but Naruto is just so broken from Sasuke it makes me want to cry.
    From the moment Neji showed up, I found myself cheering for him. He is trying so hard.
    I know it will be SasuNaru in the end, but I think Neji is just want Naruto needs right now.
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  • From ANON - Lala on March 23, 2010
    EXCELLENT!!! I love your story. :) Keep it up! Please update soon and often!
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on March 23, 2010
    Aaah! So I wrote this big long review and then my internet died for a second. So I will try to reiterate the whole thing XD.

    Not a whole lot of things make me cry, but the end of this chapter did. Gaaah!! I'm so mad at Sasuke for not telling Naruto that he loves him and needs him just as much!!! Poor Naruto, I could feel his heart breaking as I read!! But I can also understand Sasuke's dilemma too. The way you write I can just feel the battle going on in him. Even though he purposely tries to get Naruto's goat, he loves Naruto (even if he wont say it xP) and cant live without him. But he's also trying to fit pieces from two different puzzles into one. He's trying to please his family and Sakura and Naruto when all of them have different interests for him. No wonder he is so messed up!! You really cant blame him. One of them should have told Sakura forever ago, but then I guess there would be no plot then xD. And Sakura, I just cant bring myself to feel sorry for her. The dumb bitch caused all this and if only Sasuke knew he'd be singing a different tune!! Hopefully she sees all those lovely Naru-marks all over his lovely body. THAT'LL SHOW YA YOU DUMB BITCH!!! Hehe sorry, got carried away. I just love how you have modelled all the characters to fit your own style but they remain true to their personalities. Its a beautiful thing you do. As always this chapter was perfect grammatically and flowed like a smooth stream. I cant wait for the next chapter. The great thing about you is that you make me even more excited with each chapter that goes by. If I thought I was waiting with baited breath for this one, the next one might just strangle me =D
    ~Cianis
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  • From USuki on March 23, 2010
    *does a little voodoo dance for the health of your computer*

    Best story I've read in a while. I can't wait for updates. ^^

    I would like to see Naruto become involved with Neji before circling back to Sasuke. He needs a taste of his own medicine anyway. (Just don't let poor Neji get too heartbroken!)
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  • From serenagold on March 22, 2010
    As of this chapter, I am officially putting this story onto my recommended story list under my profile. This last chapter was so incredibly amazing that it deserves a place among the stories that I will go back to read from time to time long after they've come to completion.

    Keep up the great work. I look forward to seeing Naruto regain his sense of self and consequently, Sasuke fall apart with out him. Also, go Neji, for being there.
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  • From ANON - Rose on March 21, 2010
    I am soo wishing that your computer holds out!!
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  • From ANON - Sana_Zane on March 21, 2010
    you have no idea how addicted i am to your story. Normally i dont even bother to review but i'll make an exception in this case (especially since i check to see if your story is updated pratically everyday)
    so please up-date soon !!! your story is completely awesome and i cant wait to see how sasuke will react once he finds out about neji.
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  • From ANON - liby318 on March 21, 2010
    Another great chapter. Was so happy that Naruto walked away and Neji walked through his door. Thanks for the wonderful story.
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