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Reviews for Torrid

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From OddGadget on April 03, 2010
    I love this story...I mean I sat down and read all 11 chapters in one sitting. (Kinda sad I know)
    The point is after I finsihed the last chapter I was craving for more. I felt just like Naruto did when broke it off with Sasuke LMAO. I was just dying.
    I can't wait for the next update. *SQUA*
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on April 03, 2010
    I absolutely adore this story!
    So beautiful and angst-y, and you keep to the characters perfectly!
    The plot makes very nice connection and your writing style draws the reader in, you certainly have a talent for dragging emotions out of us, and making the butterfly in our stomach do the 'Macarina'!!!! But serious, this has developed into a brilliant story with a nice contrast between Kishi's world and your own!!
    I patiently await more!!!

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  • From ANON - lividangel on April 02, 2010
    "Damn you, Sinead O'Connor. Damn you to hell…" gasps in recognition...then whispers "I say that every morning too..." O.o

    this took me so long to read because I couldn't stop laughing!!!
    this was beautiful and manic and sad and so damn funny.

    your eloquence for Shikamaru on love and loss...
    (well didn't that just make us all think of someone from our past...with a wistful smile - runs off to light a candle at your shrine)

    I luuuuuv youuuuu:)
    thanks for this! (ps - really, where do we send the PC donations?)
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  • From Vixenreborn on April 02, 2010
    I felt myself sniffling at the end of the chapter.
    You had some really amazing and awesome parts in this chapter.
    It's good that Naruto has people like Kiba in his life.

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  • From Tsukbakida on April 02, 2010
    ZOMG Torrid is FTW and so is Kiba in this!! XD
    this is like...seriously the 2nd story i've ever loved this much!!
    It's so emotional, like....in the last chapter when Naruto and Sasuke got into it was like "BE STRONG NARUTO-KUN" but then he gave in and i was like 'wtf is wrong with you' *sigh* this is great!
    i find myself staying up until 4am reading this. XDDD it's that good.
    there are no such things as breaks when reading this story. it's like...you have to read ALL the way through. lolz. Can't wait for your update!!! :P
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  • From inuspike on April 01, 2010
    To be honest, I wasn't really expecting that. I loved stage two though, so that made up for it. Poor Naruto, being demoted back down... stinking Sasuke. I know I was rooting for him at the beginning of this story but now...well, he can just fall down a conveniently located abyss.
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  • From loveusender on April 01, 2010
    kyah! kyah ! kyah!! i squealed like a little girl when i saw UPDATE!! You do know that this is my favorite story on AFF right now, right?? Great!

    The exorcist was scary as shit! why did you have to remind me....God..i love and hate sasuke. Right now i want to cut off his balls and twist off his dick before i put lime on the wound. WHY THE FUCK DID HE HAVE TO BREAK MY DOBE'S HEART!!?? HE's BACK TO FUCKING SQUARE ONE BECAUSE OF DUCK BUTT asshole!!fuck! i'm pissed!!!really!!

    *whispers to Naruto*-'don't worry hun, everything will be alright' *kisses*
    Kage, i want you to ban that son-of-a-bitch from coming close to my blue eyed angel for a while!! ok??! Let Naru-chan at least lick his wounds...

    Also, can you give us a warning with how many chapters are remaining? I don't want to suffer an aneurysm while reading to see it's the last...*screams*
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2010
    Poor Naruto. Just when he thought we was progressing through his grief, Sasuke has to show up. What will it take for Sasuke to realize what he keeps rejecting between them. Hopefully Sakura stays away while Naruto recovers. Good to see he has some true friends in Kiba and Shika. Hmmm... would be interesting to see Neji me the friends.
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  • From roro237 on April 01, 2010
    I just loved it! You have a great sense of humor:) All the stuff Kiba did trying to cheer up his bestfriend. Shikamaru doing his part. While I was being sad with Naruto I cracked up at the Knights of Naruto round table:) good one! Naruto dream with Akamaru on his chest was something else that had me going:) Stage two I think we've all been there and you nailed it! This chapter is great really! You covered all the base in a delightful way:) Then Sasuke showing up and blocked! Naruto on the other side of the door blocked! That just broke my heart. It has to be untill some changes are made. I hope that helped Sasuke realize that. I love this story! I was hoping your computer was still working:) Thank goodness it is! ^_^
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on April 01, 2010
    Hahaha 'I need to clean!'
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  • From missbri88 on April 01, 2010
    Damn you Sasuke!!! And we were moving on too! I can't wait to see the next chapter. (Prays that the compy gods allow him to life some time longer)
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  • From ANON - richon on April 01, 2010
    i love this idear, of stage 1 and 2. naruto a maniac freak, it's unbelivable !!!hopefully your computer will stay on a little longer for another chapter!! i love your work !! see you soon
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  • From littletoshiro on April 01, 2010
    This hath taken quite a turn for the angsty. Poor Kiba having to help Naruto through it all. Thank you for updating.
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on April 01, 2010
    I thought I would tell you just exactly what my very favorite part of this chapter was....

    "He needs a bath." Naruto spoke with an air of authority and finality that brooked no argument. Soon, Akamaru was neck deep in suds, being cleaned within an inch of his life. He was then dried and coiffed and was finally able to exit the bathroom, tossing his head and swaggering with all the confidence of an international supermodel. Of course, Naruto then deemed the bathroom dirty again, and attacked it with renewed gusto.

    "Kiba…"

    "I had a bath this morning, I swear!"

    Laughed so hard picturing Akamaru strutting his stuff like the supermodel he is.....LOL
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  • From ANON - o0SIlverKyuubi0o on April 01, 2010
    I'm usually not into NaruSasu stuff unless it's really good, and this is REALLY REALLY GOOD. I think I've been checking every hour for the last 2 days if a new chapter came out, lol. You write beautifully, and I will continue to be unable to patiently wait for your next chapter. ;D Lots of love.
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