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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From loveusender on April 08, 2010
    I believe thinking about the past really helps people to cope. a flashback may really help sasuke to realize what he's missing. WOuld he rather spend his life living up to his father's expectations or a happy one with the one he truly loves? I hope he finds the answer soon. The longer he takes the farther Naruto drifts away...
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  • From ANON - richon on April 08, 2010
    it's so sad !!! naru and sasu really break up !!sasu you need to accept yourself and be brave. be the knight naru want you to do!! i love this stroy !! see you soon
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  • From kinai26 on April 07, 2010
    I have only one thing to say about this story and the chapter...I loved it!

    I can hardly wait for the next update XD
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  • From ANON - Ivy on April 07, 2010
    Such a sad and beautifully rich descriptive chapter. The whole fire/wind part just knocked my socks off ;-) Love this story! Also when is Neji making another appearance? Will he be a viable alternative from Sasuke who seems to be unwilling to go for his happiness?
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  • From serenagold on April 07, 2010
    Ack! More depression!! Oh god. At least Naruto is one step closer now to moving on.

    Sasuke's cries of family and his textbook interpretation of are a real deal breaker. He basically just told Naruto he was worthless in comparison. I can understand where he's coming from but he's fighting everything he ever wanted every step of the way. Its horrible.


    Keep up the great work. Every chapter you weave reads like poetry.
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  • From ANON - lividangel on April 07, 2010
    I think I'm beginning to channel you ...
    (runs of to declare self high priestess and official sacrificer at your shrine)
    because I wrote this *before* I even got to the whole beautiful wind saga part ...

    "I had felt that this was your most painful Sasuke yet. And boy, I was right! Naruto is this man's air.
    (see what I men about the channeling!!!) He is terrified to admit this, to Naruto or himself. Because if he did the pain of not having what he wants would be unbearable and if that hair fine tether to Naruto snapped,
    his breath gone, Sasuke would cease to exist. So he pretends it casual and denies the love more to himself
    than even to Naruto.

    O.o (okaaay...enough of my ramblings...)

    have to say thanks for all the little references, clones, fire, wind affinity, nice nod to Masashi-sansei :D
    and I can't be the only one who feels sorry for the main three (yes that includes Sakura)
    lying to get what you want isn't good, but she truly believes that her love will be enough for both of them
    and I kind of admire her gumption and really had he said "hey babe, I'm gay" she might have given up...or proclaimed she would cure him.
    Sasuke really is just emotionally retarded and confused and trying to be the good son, he honestly thinks he's doing right, that's why he has always garnered my most sympathy. Naruto is not without fault, he could have pushed but fear kept him from doing so...poor boys.

    ahhhh I'm rambling again!!!!!!!

    well thank you for the beautiful, emotionally charged words, as always:)

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  • From littletoshiro on April 06, 2010
    Another update so soon? The fates are smiling on me. Thanks for taking the time to update and here's hoping sasu-chan learns to be like Itachi.
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on April 06, 2010
    Ugh ok ya know Sasuke is just continually and totally PISSING. ME. OFF!
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  • From roro237 on April 06, 2010
    I truly loved the walk down memory lane the boys took:) It was sweet sad and sexy! I'm so pissed at Sasuke and Sakura! I can at lease see Sasuke trying to please his father he's been trying that all his life. But Sakura she's so self center to believe that if she loves him he has to love her back?! And at the same time Naruto gets a punch in the arm from me because he can't throw Sasuke out of the closet he has to come out on his own. Oh! I love your story:) I am so hooked!!! ^_^
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  • From Dorkchic on April 06, 2010
    I cried. Sasuke has lost his wind and fire cannot survive without being nurtured by air. Please update soon.
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on April 06, 2010
    I'm glad that your computer is holding out!!! Thank goodness for all of us who check for updates every couple days =D!! I am a little surprised this might go all the way to twenty chapters but that just makes me excited to keep reading! I liked this chapter a lot because Naruto remembered little things about Sasuke that prove he's in love with Naruto. I just wish Sasuke would say to hell with his father and run to Naruto!! I also can't wait until the both of them find out the marriage was Sakura's idea! Will the fit hit the shan on that day!! Poor Sasuke is trying to spare her feelings because he thinks she's just a victim. Ah can't wait till he learns differently. I just hope Naruto can hold on until then!! I really like how complex their relationship is. Anyway, fantastic chapter!! update soon!!!
    ~Cianis
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2010
    broke my heart broke my heart broke my heart....poor sasu-chan..ugh!! By the way I didn't tell you just how much I am loving the fact that you are not rushing this story did I?? Yeah well I'm loving the realistic pace of this.....angst, angst, attempt to fix angst...more angst...yeah me likes this!!!
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  • From dhur on April 06, 2010
    Ahhh I love new chapters of this story, but I really feel for naruto and hope he gets to be happy soon!! Thanks for the update!!
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  • From Prism0467 on April 06, 2010
    You are too much.

    We are not worthy.
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  • From ANON - Ghastly on April 04, 2010
    I liked this chapter a lot and need to tell you that I find your characterizations spot on.
    The cleaning part killed me XD... Good work!
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