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Reviews for Torrid

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From Kerrisa on May 13, 2010
    You did it AGAIN! You little evil conniving bunny suit wearing- evil evil woman!!! First you Leave me grasping at...!! Wait ... Oh thank God, i had to double check and make sure this was in the Naruto/Sasuke category so I could hold on to my hope that Sasuke and Naruto will be together at the end of all this!!! I'm secretly hoping either Neji or Sasuke gets hit by a bus. If Neji gets hit, maybe, hopefully, he'll be out of the picture, forever. If Sasuke gets hit, maybe Naruto will come running to him and never ever ever ever leave his side again, and also having to say goodbye to Neji cuz all his love is going to Sasuke where it truly belongs! So while I'm reading about Naruto breaking it off with Sasuke again, my insides are rolling with anxiousness, and low and behold you turn around and have Sasuke destroy his treasure, ONLY to find out what Sakura's scheming ass has been up to the whole time!!! YOU ARE SO LUCKY I ONLY HAVE ONE PROJECT AND ONE EXAM TO TAKE FOR THE REST OF THIS SEMESTER OR YOU WOULD HAVE TOTALLY SCREWED ME!!! Dx !!! -Runs around kicking over buildings and flipping cars like a rampaging 50ft Gorilla- Ooooohhhhh your next update had better be something or so help me I will destroy all the chocolate in the world and you will have to live without FOREVER!! DX!!!!!

    Love Always,
    Your loyal reader and fan,
    Kei-Chan
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  • From ANON - Maera on May 13, 2010
    I don't often add reviews to be honest but I have to say your last author's note at the end of chapter 15 had me giggling! Cliffhangers may be evil but that's half the fun of good writing! *hands over more chocolate to fuel muses*

    I'm loving your story and all the drama! ^^ I think it's the beginning of the end for Miss Sakura's charming innocent act...
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  • From dhur on May 13, 2010
    I agree cliffhangers are evil!! but I still love this story! Ahh sasuke you fool, he needs to realize what he has done before it's too late! I'm glad that naruto has found someone to make him happy but it'll mean neji will be that much more sad if naruto ever gets back with sasuke!!! ahhhh the dilemma.......hahaa highlight of the day =D keep up the good work!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 13, 2010
    OMFG CATFIGHT!!!! Why did you stop them?! I would have paid money to read about Neji handing Sasuke his girly-ass...

    It's about time Sasuke figured out he'd been duped by the team of Fugaku and Sakura. In addition to being girly, he's witless, too. Not exactly a combination I'd want in a man, no matter who he is; of course, I'm not Sakura Uchiha, either...

    Okay, I'm done now.

    /bashing
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  • From ANON - Marissa on May 12, 2010
    Ive been looking everywhere for good naru/sasu stories when i stumbled upon this and i'm so glad i did! You are a great writer and i can not wait till u continue this story!
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  • From ANON - FireonIce on May 12, 2010
    Is it wrong of me to enjoy the NaruNeji when I am ultimately hoping for the NaruSasu to work out? Because I love Neji, I think he's great and all but Sasuke just makes more sense (even if her is being a selfish little bitch about EVERYTHING). I actually kinda hope Sasuke would just leave Sakura already, she's starting to get on my nerves. OH WELL. Can't wait for the next update :D
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  • From ANON - Katus on May 07, 2010
    Loving the new updates, think this is the only fanfic I've ever come back to check for updates! Keep it up.

    Have to admit finding Sasuke/Naruto's idiocy a bit lengthy now... but yay for Neji. And an uke? SO WORKS! Sasuke is such an annoying little brat atm! Hope he comes to soon.

    Sort of feel like I'm waiting for Ino to suddenly realise what the actual DEAL is between Sasuke/Naruto. Poor Sakura :(

    Love love love :)
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  • From roro237 on May 03, 2010
    This chapter is fantastic! I've been rereading it and everytime I fine something new to think about:) Like Sakura thinking 'Naruto had probably been too much of a looming and impeding presence in Sasuke's life and subsequently, their marriage'. That just sounds like Mrs.Uchiha Pink it's all Naruto fault! Will she ever see what is right in front of her?! Can she become the hero? I think you have written her well:) At this point even Sasuke telling her he's gay wont register in her mind will it? I can't wait to see what you're going to do with her:) But of course my favorite plot going is Sasuke fining Neji there!!! I just had to drop you a few more lines. I so love your story and your beginning and ending comments crack me up ^_^
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  • From ANON - donnita on May 03, 2010
    omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg !!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From 8thDeadlySin1098 on May 03, 2010
    Ohhhh Gawd the ending! I was literally rolling on the floor (my couch) laughing my ass off XDDDD
    I simply cannot wait for more! 8DDDD
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  • From OddGadget on May 03, 2010
    I love this story so much. The only thing I can really say I hate is the time it takes for
    a new page to come out!
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  • From ANON - Ghastly on May 02, 2010
    Hopefully it'll work this time... *dundundunnn* I loved this new complication and find the flashbacks as cute as always ^^!
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  • From serenagold on May 02, 2010
    OMG!! AAAHHHhhHh!!!!!! Bwahahahahahaaqaaaaa!!! Oh man. I can simply not wait for the next chapter to continue.

    Neji and Naruto make such a great couple. =^^= Sasuke's gonna be so freaking shocked and angry. I wonder if he'll fight or storm out to brood more.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From littletoshiro on May 02, 2010
    Oh my God! Awesome! You are my new favorite (Daydreamer, you have been relegated to number 2.) Awesome update. I'm glad Neji finally got some.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 02, 2010
    AH! Showdown of the century! Can't wait!
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