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By : KageKitsuneXXX

From missbri88 on May 14, 2010
That wasn't a cliffhanger, my ass! I hope you hurry and update soon or I'll leave a very mean review within the week.
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From Gingitsune32 on May 14, 2010
*catches Kage bunny* Another cliffhanger?!!!!!!!

Yay that Sasuke finally knows the truth! :D & I really doubt Sasuke will suddenly crawl out from underneath his father' thumb so......

Argh!!! Can't wait to read more of this fic!
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From satterb on May 14, 2010
Relax, I love your cliffhangers! It gives me reason to go back and re-read if I start jonesing for more of this wonderful story. LOL. That way I'll be up to date and fully informed when you are able to post the next riveting chapter. I have loved this fic, and I appologize for not reviewing every chapter, but I've never been dissapointed by what you write. Look forward to more.
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From ANON - richon on May 14, 2010
sasu is losing narut, the love of his life and he just discover the mail. sakura be careful!!! sasu must be so angry !! i really looking forward the next chapter !! I love your story , i can't wait !!
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From ANON - softwelshrain on May 14, 2010
Oh for God's sake Sasuke - you still can't see it? It's Naruto's fault how?? Never mind the Sakura bit - hopefully coming to a head now - he still can't get round the "I'm gay" bit?? I'm loving this story so much, all aspects of it are great - the writing, the plot(s), the characters, I could go on. I want to know what will happen, but then I don't 'cos that means that the story is coming to an end, and I don't want it to. I'm having a quiet pity party for Neji: he's heading for heartache, and that's so unfair (I've said that before, haven't I?). But he has caught a glimpse of that "special" bond from Sasuke's face, so he has an inkling (sorry if that is a British word!). The bit with the key - LOL! - bless him. Is Itachi coming into it? - bit of a tasty morsel there too. See you next time .....
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From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2010
You go Neji!!! Naru definitely chose right. Thank god Sakura is finally outed. But this doesn't mean we like Sasuke. Their history speaks for itself. Sasuke just never really has Naruto's back when it comes to the most important things. I would feel used or like a convenience to Sasuke if I were in Naruto's shoes.

It's
about
to
go
down.
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From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2010
Did you think I would not review on this site? Ha...as if...

Okay here are some observations from your dear stalker....(you know you like the stalkage don't lie KamiKitsune.....yeah that's what I'm calling you now....foxy goddess yeah)

1. You dear are brilliant at setting the flow and timing of a good fiction. Okay you know how Huge of a fan of your work I am....you hooked me with Saving me, then Serendipity and Role play made me a Fan For Life. Those three works are examples of how well you set up a scene to make it flow right into the next and your sense of timing in terms of humor is excellent, but this fiction right here puts those previous works to shame....it's just that good.

2. Your characters stay consitent, they don't seem schizophrenic or bi-polar...do you know what I mean by that? For example some fictions will start with a strong and willful character in chapter one, but by chapter five that character has become completely unrecognizable...some type of uke-fied version of itself.....totally unrealistic...I know that characters will usually grow and change due to circumstances in a fiction, such as trauma etc., but that is not what I am referring to.....anyway...Your characters stay true to themselves from chapter one until....well chapter now....so yeah that is another great hallmark of your writing.

3. *glares pointedly at Kitsune in bunny suit* I'm going to your country and getting rid of all maner of chocolate goodies and holding your bunny tail down to the fire damnit...how could you do this to me again? Evil Cliffies are Evil.....

Now get thee to your lovely computer and feed us some more....please...and thank you.
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From ANON - qwerty on May 14, 2010
AHHH! So intense! I was just thinking when was Sasuke going to find out and then BAM! Well played. And cliffies are NOT*** cool but I understand the need for an author to do them.... sorta lol.
Great chapter!
p.s. I'm torn between whether or not I should be rooting for NaruSas or NaruNeji because I love both pairings.... ah, you're messing with my head!
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From ANON - qwerty on May 14, 2010
AHHH! So intense! I was just thinking when was Sasuke going to find out and then BAM! Well played. And cliffies are cool but I understand the need for an author to do them.... sorta lol.
Great chapter!
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From aliases101 on May 14, 2010
You have no idea how long i was waiting for that update. Seriously I had to remind my self to start breathing 3 paragraphs in cause my chest started hurting. During the whole Neji Sasuke confrontation I was giggling every other sentence that my sister came over to see what I was reading. I loved this chapter and I don't mind cliffhangers that much whenever I read them I giggle like a school girl and check back twice a day for updates. Even though I'm hoping for a nejinaru pairing I will still keep reading if you go to SasuNaru. Think about an alternate ending pretty pretty please or maybe writing a NejiNaru pairing next because its my fav and there are not enough out there. You are made of awesome keep up the good work.
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From loveusender on May 13, 2010
"Neji stared at both Naruto and the key dubiously, but was too curious to see how this 'do over' would play out. He skidded the key across the table once again. "Here- this is yours."

Naruto stared at the shiny metal with reverent silence. "Really? For me?"

His bottom lip trembled and his eyes went as wide as dinner plates. Neji's lips twitched as Naruto slowly picked up the key with kid-gloves. There was the tiniest hint of a shimmer in the blond's eyes as he stroked the key tenderly against his cheek. "Oh, Neji."

Neji bit down hard in an effort not to laugh. "Just take the goddamn key, you fucking moron."-"

ROTFLMAO..!!!Naruto is such an idiot sometimes!! I love how you embody him so perfectly.isn't it ironic how kiba never really liked sasuke but is rooting for them t get back together? he's even counting down the days of 'when' and not 'if' lol. Neji is..finicky. I don't like him. They just don't click, you know what I mean ?? It bothers me so much!!

UPDATE!! My heart gives this fantastic WHOLLOP EVERYTIME I see kagekitsunexx and torrid at the top of the updates list..hehehe....
Shit..Sasuke finally found out huh? HAHA SAKURA IS FUCKING SCREWED LMAO..Tell that BITCH SASUKE!!! HAHA..

We love you despite the death threats love. Yes, you really have spoiled us with weekly updates :D Good Luck With Work!!
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From Dorkchic on May 13, 2010
I hate and love cliffhangers. As a reader I want to what happened RIGHT NOW, but as an author I fully understand the usefulness and necessity of a good cliffhanger. Plus, sometimes it is fun to giggle and imagine the shocked/pissed/disbelieving/needy faces of your audience.
But seriously though, I need you to update soon because I have to know what happens to that selfish, conniving, two-faced bitch. In the meantime I will enjoy myself considering all the things that could happen to her. Love you soooo much- keep up the good work!
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From arabuzumaki on May 13, 2010
rofl lies that is a cliff hanger lol. the suspense of anti-climatic endings make me crazy >.
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From ANON - dolphina23 on May 13, 2010
Oh, no cliffhanger eh? Evil. Evil, evil, evil. But soooo good to read. Oh, now don't make us wait too long. I need to know how Sasuke is gonna confront Sakura and how she's gonna respond. Ooo, I hope they break up (I'm a sadist that way with those two). It's Naruto's turn again, maybe. But I'm kind likin' how you portray NaruNeji. Damn it! I usually review this on Y! Gal so maybe I'll just have to read it again there. It could only (hopefully) make the time till the next chapter fly by. Yes, time, you cruel cruel mistress, go by faster and give me the next chapter! Oh, and are we gonna finally learn just who and how many people have keys to Naruto's apartment? Hmmm? 'Cuz I think you could even make a multiple pairing (cough, slut Naruto, cough) sound sexy.
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From ANON - liby318 on May 13, 2010
This is the best Naruto x Sasuke story ever! Thank you for a great update.
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