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By : KageKitsuneXXX

From ANON - 7troublesome on May 25, 2010
AWESOME STORY!!! I liked it to bits! Especially AFTER NARU/NEJI debut - so Neji is going to kick the all-mighty Uchiha's ass - just plain awesome! Amazingly written Neji and not so self-sure Sasuke - pooor little uchiha thing, he is really suffering - I LOVE THE STORY!!!!!
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From ANON - FireonIce on May 24, 2010
OHGODFINALLY. What a terrible thing for Sakura to do but at least now Sasuke knows and he can go about salvaging whatever there is to be salvaged. I just hope that Naruto and Neji aren't going to cause any problems. I can't bring myself to wish harm on Neji, he IS my favourite after all, but at the same time I was Sasuke to win this one. He's such a pathetic mess that I find myself really rooting for him. Well either way, I'm super excited to read the next chapter.

And cliffhangers are great, pay them no mind. I think they add greatly to the story's appeal :)
(and sorry if I reviewed twice, my connection is being glitchy)
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From serenagold on May 24, 2010
Oh man, Sasuke's falling apart!
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From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2010
OMG I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY FOR SO SO LONG, and I am too lazy to say how much I love it... But you've ended the 15th chapter HORRIBLY. OMG, not in a bad way, but in a good OMGINEEDMORE way
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From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 16, 2010
AHHHH!! *rips out hair* THE SUSPENSE!I am very very excited to see what happens next. Damn that coniving, secretive, manipulative bitch! Sasuke better punch her out, then go grovel to Naruto. ASAP!

Please update soon ^^
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From suzannecmc on May 16, 2010
definition of commodity:

-Something useful that can be turned to commercial or other advantage.

-a good or service whose wide availability typically leads to smaller profit margins and diminishes the importance of factors

-one that is subject to ready exchange or exploitation within a market

so I'm thinking Sasuke's anger over being traded as a commodity will turn to backbone against Daddy...
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From ANON - weskerism on May 16, 2010
HOW COULD YOU?! REALLY HOW COULD YOU!? HOW COULD YOU JUST leave me hanging on your every word and then end with a cliff hanger! (do you see the tears streaming down, soaking my keyboard) You are pure unadulterated evil! I LIKE IT! Please update soon or I will find you and glue your fingers to the keyboard with my trusty pink glue stick...or not. That is your only warning...take it seriously...or not. (glares nastily at the computer screen and pretends to hear suspense music in the background)

Love the story and I hope Sakura gets what she deserves! Just don't hurt Neji too bad he is still my favorite hotty! TA TA FOR NOW!
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From DevilnBlue on May 15, 2010
Don't you dare breake Neji's heart woman >< Sure I knew that this was NaruSasu from the start but Sasuke has been yoyoing Naruto's feelings for a while now. He can't have his cake and eat it too and even if he does leave Sakura it doesn't change the fact that he'd be willing to be open about his relationship with Naruto. Naruto deserves better, Naruto deserves Neji and I loved the key moment. I could visually picture that crap and I was dying laughing. I'd demand my key back immediately if I was in Neji's place. And omg the way Naruto did the do-over and clutched the key to him like he was going to go all Lord of the Rings and call the key 'his precious' was priceless. Shimmering tears nice touch but you should really move this story out of the Naruto/Sasuke category because it'd break my heart if they got back together.

VIVA LA NARU/NEJI!!! VIVA VIVA
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From ANON - Ghastly on May 15, 2010
Sasu-chan does not seems to realize that what he is feeling about Naru-chan is pretty much the textbook definition of love in many people's head, methinks -_-'... I liked the part about the new couple being everywhere he looked though XD! The laptop part was sweet, too. And dammit but if you continue I could end up actually forgiving that *words censored* for running off and/or attempting/succeeding to kill the only bunch of people who actually cared about him. Two hold up confrontations in two chapter... really?
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From littletoshiro on May 14, 2010
Oooh! Ha! Weasel your way out of this one Sakura! And for the love of all that is holy Sasuke do what needs to be done. cough, Naruto, cough.
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From roro237 on May 14, 2010
ok! Let me stop laughing and pull my face together so I can type.. Because it seems there had been an accident! You have left us with another jaw dropping back breaking cliffy dog-gone-it! Give yourself a stern talking to please:) The Sasuke Neji openner was so good! I done know what I though would happen. Those two are so subdued but the blood was definitly boiling:) The puppy look from Sasuke had me feeling sorry for him I can't help it! Then the next minute I'm all laughing and smiling with Neji and Naruto and the key! I want Sasuke and Naruto together but I have enjoyed the time with Neji to:) I'm sooo happy Sasuke click on the email(yes,yes) The time had come for Mrs.Uchiha Pink?! Fluffy little bunny with the cotton tail I love your story ^_^
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From SoSickOfNyQuil on May 14, 2010
ok i think sasuke's been punished enough and i'm sick of neji being wit naruto. neji doesn't belong wit him....ever. lol. it's time for naruto to blow up at stupid sakura for what she did cuz the skank deserves it. i am soooooo glad sasuke has found out!!!
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From suzannecmc on May 14, 2010
OK get your bunny butt over here!

I happen to like cliffhangers, gives you something to look forward to.
besides, just good business sense!

"my world" is just achingly appropriate for them, huh?
now you can name the next chapter "your busted" (on the Phineas and Ferb soundtract!)

funny I took the same offence as Neji with the key scene, although I don't think I
would have been so willing to hand it over even after the cutsy Naruto...

love the three's rollercoaster, delicious:)
(it is a lovely threesome, oh and a foursome if you throw in Sai...all that dark with the one pinnicle of light...*drool*)

sorry, sorry back to you, all the bits make this flow, thank your fluffy goddess butt, that is your earthly form?
and oh my, but were are heading for 'THE' confrontation!

take your time to write love, do it when the muse tickles, and thanks:)
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From ANON - Blackthorne369 on May 14, 2010
Dear Kage Kitsune XXX,

Sweet Gods on a cracker with jam and cashew butter! -Goodness, am I hungry.- You're back! Just when I was preparing a gently cajoling, mildly homicidal review for you. Just mildly homicidal of course. But then you and your fluffy bunny tail wonderfulness decided to be wise and update. Good bunny, nice bunny. Before I say anything else let me get this out of my system= That BI@#H! Not you, of course, my dear but Sasuke. Sasuke�s the bi#%h. I am really not liking him. No, no, no. I haven�t for a while actually but this just makes it worse. Grrr -Growls like the Killer Bunny that guards the Holy Grail. See I did read your AN. ;p- He's a whining, narcissistic, possessive, stalker-y - not a word, I know.- many times outright abusive bi%$h. And I say this with love in my heart.

But there's a thin line, ladies and gentlemen -Gentlemen whom Sasuke has proven himself NOT TO BE ONE OF!-, between love and hate. Neji knows this, Kiba acknowledges this. Now if only Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke would get a clue! Naruto, the insecure, loveable oaf, because he was, and still sort of is, in an abusive, adulterous relationship with that needy, parasitic, issue filled user, Sakura since she blatantly, but stupidly, manipulated her way into the marriage bed with the parasite. -A.K.A. Sasuke. And who doesn't know that when you're committing actions that are not all on the up and up you do not leave the evidence tra-la-la on your email account! And is she so dumb that 'Sasuke-kun' =enter disgusted look here= is her password! Anyone who's spoken with her in the last decade could have wrangled that out of her!- Still, while the pink hair dye has made a little dumber, especially for the steps that she has taken to get to where she is now, if she hadn't never would it bring Sasuke, the truly manipulative, cruel, selfish, simultaneously sadistic and masochistic, insecure, bogged-down-with-extremely-stringent-traditions-and-not-handling-them-very-well-at-all, Oh-Daddy-why-won't-you-ever-love-me-like-I-need-you-to child that he really is, to his current point in life. His fictional life...I know he's not real. {Yes he is!} Silence!

*Ahem* I'd simply like to say that while I will admit that Sasuke needed to know what Sakura has done to him, a good deal of his grief has come about by his own making and machinations. While he and Naruto can be wonderful and excellently epic together, Sasuke will not allow it and cannot allow himself to be happy with anyone else. Naruto can. -at least I hope he can; he deserves it. Sasuke does too but not with Naruto, not with the way he's treated him, and not until he suffers a little more.- Also, I fear that once Sasuke has gotten over the feelings of well deserved rage and humiliation at being used, he'll go scampering off to Naruto, proclaiming all the while that 'It was her fault! She's why we're like this now! Be angry at her! And comfort me. Completely disregard how I've used you for decades like a two cent whore, just because I wanted the approval of a father who's got his own issues but has learned to handle them far more healthily than I have. Forgive me! It wasn't my fault!' Yes, that's what I'm predicting he'll say. Word for word.

And I still hope that Neji and Naruto will end up together! Come on, with Neji finally loosening up a wee, he needs AND deserves his time in the sun. Along with a careful, gradual, hopefully minimally painful realization that Naruto cannot remove Sasuke from his heart. Which frustrates me to no end but I've already stated why so, bang up Kitsune and/or bunny that you are! I can't wait -but I will, since possession is not one of my skills...yet- for your next addition.

Sincerely,
Lady B

Good Goddess, this was longer than my last one! I've got to stop doing this!
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From Sonten on May 14, 2010
Aww got my fix! Got my fix! *dances around happily*
I just love this story, and when I see that it's updated... it just makes my day!
Can't wait for more - the plot gets better and better with every chapter. I hope you'll have time to update it soon
*goes back to read it again*
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