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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From littletoshiro on June 11, 2010
    Yay!! I'm happy it was "Life" stuff and not your computer. They can be scary sometimes. Love you a million ramen-bowls for the update!
    Too bad Naruto can't have both Neji and Sasuke. Oh, no. My inner perv is showing.
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  • From suzannecmc on June 11, 2010
    I just watched the Youtube! It was brilliant, but I was so busy reading key words you wrote that
    I had to look up the song lyrics.
    'Until We Bleed' by Andreas Kleerup is perfect! Oddly eclectic and passionate and fatalistic.
    just like our boys:)

    the trailer was...scary, but like an accident you had to look:) Freaky fun!
    congrats on your homage.
    Hope it brings you smiles now.
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  • From suzannecmc on June 11, 2010
    Never apologize for life getting in the way. Obviously this was immediate family if you were involved with the arraignments.
    My condolences and Heavens Blessings to you and yours.

    These were the very last words Buddha spoke: "Behold, O monks, this is my last advice to you. All component things in the world
    are changeable. They are not lasting. Work hard to gain your own salvation. Do your best."



    Now just for you:)

    No black and white characters for you! Shades of gray (charcoal, dove, heather...yeah, heather...)

    Sakura; "it seems horrible and evil of me" oh yes, this is exactly how I would start my defense...
    Sakura: "besides being Fugaku-sama's second choice" like the killing intent wasn't strong enough...
    I feel sorry for Sakura. Don't get me wrong, she deserves what she gets...but obsession often leads to bad choices,
    not always bad people:(

    "There should be blood on the walls!" I remember that review!!! :D
    I think it's a tag line we should all use at least once a day...

    Sasuke's growing a spine, Sasuke's growing a spine...(you can't see, but there is a dance accompanying this)
    and can Sasuke and Naruto become any more confused/angst/torn?

    I think Fugaku was perfect!
    Fugaku: "I do not want my children shamed, Sasuke, I will not have them ridiculed and set upon, not while it
    is within my power to prevent it. I told you before to cling to that happiness, and I meant it."
    Oh sweet Jesus...that IS love! A parent's protection.

    Neji...beautiful Neji...that's messed up...

    cliched love but, "time heals all wounds" - (dusts off bunny suit and offers with sincere smile) "Do your best"


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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on June 11, 2010
    Oh how I love the drama! His dad is seriously messed up, Sakura (take that BITCH!) has finally gotten knocked down to where she's supposed to be and now I'm just waiting for Neji to kick rocks and leave! =3
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  • From Allandaa on June 11, 2010
    Great chapter. Unexpected developments, but they turn out real great ^^ . I'm still wishing for a happy ending for everyone, and praying with all my might someone will hear me... Sigh. But for now the story is simply breathtaking.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2010
    Man, it still stands that Sasuke has not promised anything different from before certain decisions he's made, regardless of the fact that he was duped. People always have choices from which to make decisions. What they decide says a lot about that person. Sasuke chose to hide his relationship with Naruto and refuses poor Naru's love confession, then get married to someone he does not like just to please his father. Why should Naruto go back to that? As for Neji, what the heck is he thinking just walking out (though I know he must be hurting)? He knows Sasuke is pushing hard to get Naruto back. Is he going to give him up without a fight? He's gonna have to stand his ground to keep Naru. Poor Naru... sucks to be him, but he did make a decision to break away from the madness. What will he do now?
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  • From serenagold on June 11, 2010
    Fantastic chapter. Sorry to hear about your family.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 11, 2010
    First off, I'm very sorry for your loss. I hope you and your family will be able to make it through these tough times.

    On a happier note, this chapter was everything and more when I envisioned the eventually confrontation! Well done!
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  • From missbri88 on June 11, 2010
    Wow!!! Fugaku did a bang up job on damage control! Lol. And Sasuke fell for it! But whatever... And Naruto(I named one of my blond kittens after him -squee-)! He better not do what I think he's gonna do!(Cries) I love Neji-kun! Please don't do him like that Naru-chan! Don't be a dawg! You're better than that!


    But always--- I'm sorry for the hell that you've been through for the last couple of months. Its hard but I hope things are looking up now. Luffs yous!
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  • From ANON - softwelshrain on June 11, 2010
    Firstly, sorry to hear of your loss - your updates have been sorely missed, but you should take your own time. Quality not quantity!!
    Sakura - needs therapy. You cannot make someone love you, or even "see" you". Hopefully she will pay dearly. Rather arrogant of her to declare that Sasuke had no life before her - good grief.
    Neji - Awwwwww. He should stick around for the true story and not just assume. But he was always heading for a train wreck (I was secretly hoping for a threesome).
    Can't wait to see how it all pans out, Sasuke has already been cold to Sakura, now hell will freeze over. Enlightening about his father, why couldn't he just say that in the first place? Dear lord, secrets within secrets.
    Checked out the U-tube as well - awesome!!

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  • From ANON - lirin on June 11, 2010
    Neji's reaction in this chapter is wonderful. I'm glad he is making Naruto chose.....take that Sasuke!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2010
    Your story continues to captivate and entrance me. IT'S JUST SO JUICY!!!!! Please oh wise and wonderful author, continue to grace us with more story!!!! :D
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  • From Prism0467 on June 11, 2010
    You are a goddess.
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  • From dhur on June 11, 2010
    I'm sorry to hear you had a death in the family. You have my condolences. But as for this chapter.....it was definitely well worth the wait. I can't wait to read about naruto and what his decision will be. Though I do feel it very....easy for sasuke if naruto just chooses him because of that I mean he gave naruto up!!! There has to be more hell to pay than just sasuke seeing naruto move on!But I Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - karasu-kun on May 27, 2010
    dammit!! that cliffhanger was the worst of the worst!! and by that i mean best of the best of course!!

    i just wanna point out that i seriously hate Sasuke right now. like...i already hate him in the manga/anime but then this just makes me hate him more. He's always disregarding Naru-chans feelings >:V

    i mean. i WANT them to be together, and to be happy! But if giving up Sasuke means Naru-chan can be happy then i approve and i think he's doing a bang up job with Neji as his new partner.

    i can't wait to read more. deceptive Sakura is gonna get schooled! Right?? yea... im pissed at her too cuz no one would be going through any of this if she would've just accepted that sasuke wasn't interested *crosses arms with a scoff* that chick, i swear.


    sorry for the long review. Had to get that out somehow *smiles* see you at the next update!
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