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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2010
    you made me cry! (sniff, wonders if disciple should pet or kick earthly form in bunny-butt)

    Obito's even made it:D people have tried to weave the manga through modern AU, but you, you
    have got IT! clever, clever girl.
    Neji...sigh.

    "Because I have absolutely no clue what I did to make you love me in the first place."
    one of the most perfect sentances...

    thank you for this long, funny, beautiful and amotional chapter.

    (yes... sweaty, young, toned men running around in shorts is quite distracting, but what's a Goddess to do?)
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  • From ANON - FireonIce on June 23, 2010
    Oh god, here it comes. Please let him still love him. Please. I don't think I could handle a rejection after such a heartbreaking scene. I hope you've got the next part written because it's going to be hell waiting to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Zeph on June 22, 2010
    Damn, that was an intense chapter! I'm glad that Sasuke finally seems to see what's or better who is really important to him and I'm curious what Naruto's response will be. But I also hope that Sasuke doesn't say something like "See, I love you, we can work it out. My father wouldn't accept us anyway...." and so on afterwards. That would make me want to hit him!
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  • From ANON - richon on June 22, 2010
    hohohh you can't stop now !!!what will be naruto's reponse?? i am craving for more and lot of time because france is out and ridiculous !! see you soon
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  • From ANON - Ivy on June 22, 2010
    Great chapter! Liked the insight into Kiba and Hinata's relationship too. Poor Neji... seems like he's gonna end up the loser in this equation. Hope your team wins the World Cup ^_^
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  • From HitomiKanzaki on June 22, 2010
    Gosh I was reading this and near the end my computer started playing speechless by lady gaga and then i was left speechless by this! Gosh! Wow! xD
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 21, 2010
    Poor Neji T_T I wish you hadn't gotten him attached to the blonde before you up and break his heart. He doesn't deserve that and even defended Kiba... albiet reluctantly. That's why that coward slinked away when Neji asked him that question. I hate the whole situation because I know blondie will give into the darkside. And I hope Neji doesn't forgive him for breaking his heart either because that is what will most definetly happen.
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  • From loveusender on June 21, 2010
    This has to be the most emotional chapter out of this fiction, I swear. I was shocked at the update also! but thanks, it makes us all very happy i'm sure :D

    1. I love Kakashi, because he's like the balancing piece of the equation. He's full of reason and helps both Naruto and Sasuke to think things out.
    2. Neji is finally coming to the realization that there is nothing he can do anymore. At all. I feel kinda sorry for him, BUT Naruto deserves t be happy.
    3. Is Sasuke really going to give up everything and extract a part of himself and give it to naruto? oh gosh, everything was so HEARTFELT! That last line, a frog stuck in my throat, with my eyes brimming with tears. The rain was a great touch, also added to the mood. Fantastic, just so..we love you ~~!! Merely because we would suffer from withdrawal from your writing..:D
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on June 21, 2010
    Amazing, breath-stealing chapter. I can't even predict how this story will end. AT ALL.

    Please please update soon!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on June 21, 2010
    Oh. My. Goshhhhhhhhhhh!!! *she dies from happiness at this moment* XD *this is the look she died with* Lol
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 21, 2010
    Holy crap. By far the best chapter yet!!! When I first read "You're the wind and I'm fire" metaphor I absolutely loved it and I still do. So apt.
    I feel a little bad for Neji. Even though he and others knows it's coming (the "time in the sun" metaphor was awesome too! Basically I love your writing :D), it's still really hard to read what's happening to him.
    Great, freakishly long (not that I'm complaining!) chapter! Loved every bit of it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2010
    YAY!!! Superlong chapter. I like, I like. You GO Hinata! She definitely has more balls that those whiney males. It's nice to know that Sasuke can reveal his love to Naruto, but revealing and living up to it are two different things. I really don't want to see Neji leave. I agree with someone else who is hoping for a compromise with the relationship, but is there enough Naruto to go around? A threesome would not work unless Neji and Sasu can find some common ground. Oh and the whole safety dance thing was just too funny. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From Prism0467 on June 21, 2010
    ROFLMAO at Kiba.

    So...Sasuke finally removes his balls from his mouth. It's about damn time.

    Poor Naruto.
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  • From roro237 on June 21, 2010
    Bunny girl I second the statement on the World Cup and beautiful guys! I like to call it the eye candy festival it only happens every four years so you can have as much as you can hold in 30 days:) I love your Naruto with his wise cracks. I'm laughing one minute and the next I was getting choked up. You covered every emotion including lust in this heavenly chapter:) You're a good bunny girl:) I have new love for Kiba with his visit to Sasuke. Sometimes I think like Naruto that Sasuke is Kakashi favorite. But at the sametime Sasuke needed someone in his corner. I'm glad Neji knew up front what might or most likely would happen because I'm feeling his pain. I know it can't be helped. The heart wants what it wants:) I just loved everything in this chapter and I could go on and on and on:) Thank you for all the wonderful hard work it was a pure joy reading ^_^
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  • From cynaga on June 21, 2010
    GREAT story~! ♥
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