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Reviews for Bathhouse revelations

By : lunael55
  • From jayellakity on January 20, 2010
    You know,I've read so many sex stories,plotless or not,and mild-adult stories,but I have to say,this story is one of the best I've ever read so far.As you said it,screw the sex scenes,the plot,the drama and the emotion in it,and the general idea of a shy-Kakashi was way better than a highly detailed sex scene.Really it was.And your English is really good too.I also come from a country which doesn't speak English on a daily basis,though they teach it in school,not many take it seriously.Your English is really good,the Internet really is helpful,good ol' chap.
    To make the long story short,great job and keep up the good work.And have a pleasant day!
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  • From Irana on January 08, 2010
    I really enjoyed this. I'm fairly new to the Naruto fandom (yeah, I know :) ) but I've already figured out which pairings work for me, and this was one of them. I think you handled the entire story with grace. It was well written, funny and tugged at the emotions all through. I do hope you end up putting more up here... it was a lovely read.
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  • From Dorkchic on January 05, 2010
    Sweet. Very sweet.
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  • From loveusender on January 05, 2010
    This was pleasantly refreshing and heavily sated with emotions. I enjoyed it so much. At the beginning i felt as if something was missing, or like if things were drawn out, but it felt nice to not have a storyline where they are already in the relationship, having sex. whatever.
    You were right that the sex scene wasn't needed, because strangely, i didn't miss it at all. The idea of them being intimate was better than having out and rough. I also think this is my first fanfic where i got 'Ruka's view full on. It was almost always kakashi's in other stories.

    Also great insert for my fav couple! SASUNARU :D man i was so happy when i saw that there. I even liked their little quarrel! so cute..I better stop now. You must be tired of me. Read this all in one sitting and i want to talk about it all but, I really like it!
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  • From edhelwing on January 05, 2010
    Just wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying the story so far! I've been waiting for some new Kakashi/Iruka stories to come up, and its been ages! Keep up the good work!
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