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Reviews for To See Your Face

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on October 21, 2012
    Hey Jelp! It has been quite some time since I last read your material and I remember the one story you were working on but had not yet completed was this one. The last chapter was left on a very hot and steamy note and besides the smutt surely to follow I was wondering where else you were going to lead this story as well as what the "secrets" you had hinted were to be revealed in further chapters. Do let me know if you just plan to no longer continue with writing material for this story but if you do plan on continuing then I hope there will be an updated chapter posted soon as it has been some time since your last update on "To See Your Face".
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on December 29, 2011
    It's been quite some time since you last updated this story and I see at the end of the last chapter posted (chapter 5) that you were still on a mission to continue. Hopefully that is currently the case, right? I always enjoy reading your stories, but this one in particular a did like the best because no one else has come up with a love twist scenario like this one. And more secrets, you say? Oooo! I do want to know those as well.

    Hopefully you will get the chance to come back on this story and write some more, Jelp!

    ~SasuNaru723~
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  • From ANON - Darsha on October 21, 2011
    Lol like a lost puppy sound so right lol
    please don't leave us hanging
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  • From ANON - Hollow on August 24, 2011
    please tell me that this isn't the end please don't do this to me and on the good part to nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please have mercy
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  • From ANON - Aingyl on April 09, 2011
    I know exactly what you're talking about, doll. There's nothing worse than all of a sudden being alone and needing to be touched so badly that it feels like you're about to crawl out of your skin. Well...there are worse things, but at the moment it's happening... Wonderful chapter!
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  • From ANON - Aingyl on April 09, 2011
    *snicker* Painted Nail Revenge!!!! There's nothin' like prettying up a man's hands to hit them where it really hurts...

    I'm sad to say I never thought of doing that with any of my ex's, but I DID get into a 'contest' with my high school best friend to see who could talk more guys into letting us paint their left thumb nail with glittery nail polish. I had clear, she had pink. Guess who won...

    And with that odd detour down memory lane, I rejoin the main road to give two thumbs up and a bag of Oreos for the story! It's of the awesome. I am now a converted fan of yours :-D
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  • From ANON - Moodysavage on November 27, 2010
    I'm guessing Sasuke wanted him since their school days. And clueless Naruto didn't have... well...a clue. lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2010
    This is such a great story. I was so excited when I saw that you had updated - I love how original it is! Thanks for sharing and I hope you update soon!! :)
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on September 01, 2010
    WOW!! That was so STEAMY!!HOT!!EROTIC!! OH MY GOSH!!! SQUEEL!!!! :) You just totally made my day!! Hehe....came home from work and logged on to check my FAVORITE author!!! I was Thrilled to find the update!!! Computer has been buggy so its on and off days when we can log on to actually read updates....so I'm like HAPPY!!! YAY


    I just LOVED how Sasuke played with Naruto and was completely in control!!!
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  • From Blackwidina on September 01, 2010
    I've fangirled over this six ways to sunday already, not to mention re-read it probably five times since chapter five was posted, and I only just now made the happy mental connection: Naruto + Sasuke + Jelp + Shower = OMGFSJHGFUHVPASBV;SEHVIEUHGUHEXPLOSION!!!!!!!

    As if I weren't excited enough...
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  • From MagicalReality on August 27, 2010
    I absolutely loved it.
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  • From Blackwidina on August 24, 2010
    ...I think I just exploded from the awesome. Have I mentioned lately how much I love you?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2010
    Arghhh! Why stop there? Can't wait for the update. It seems Sasu has been holding out on Naru for quite some time. Hmmm...
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  • From ANON - Cai on August 23, 2010
    Oh, you are mean for leaving it there XD

    But I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I was a bit nervous when Naruto chased Sasuke into the hallway, worried he would say something to Sasuke that he would regret later. Sometimes he says things in the Manga that just make me shake my head and say, "Oh, Naruto... did that shit really sound good in your head?" I'm so proud of him for wisely letting it play out. And it was nice to read the scene where the sex happened naturally. Wonderful job on the Frot and they way Naruto watched as Sasuke came.

    Lovin what you're doing with both Naruto and Sasuke in this story. Very nice work on their characterizations. I look forward to more.


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  • From loveusender on August 23, 2010
    I don't just like it!I love it! thanks for an amazing chapter! and they finally ..almost do it. Almost there Jelp, Almost. Damn, the wait is killing me! hmm..secrets huh?interesting....
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