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Reviews for To See Your Face

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Charm and Strange on January 23, 2010
    Thank God Sasuke quit his job. It was very disappointing to see that he was a porn star, as all you need to have in porn is a gigantic dick. And FYI, reviewing this is really amusing because the button says "Review to see your face"...yeah, I'm a dork.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2010
    I really like your Sakura in this fic. She is so awesome to want to help Naruto get with Sasuke, and was nice enough not to spill the beans at the massage parlor. I was expecting Naruto to have a tent when he got up from the table, and was gald to see you saved him the mortification.

    Great chapter can't wait until things get steamy....
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  • From YuukoUchiha on January 23, 2010
    oh yes, I understand what you mean about missing missing the physical intimacy :S and hehe, that made me feel connected to Naruto XD hahaha, but at least he was wise enough to not snuggle with Sakura, I agree with him if he had... well that could get them somewhere else...

    GODS! thank god they met again! it's fate! it's fate and no one will tell me the contrary XD hahaha, I loved how stalkerish Naruto was getting LOL but thankfully he doesn't have to do it anymore .:grins:.
    and I wonder if that bussiness about the porn movies is really over? and I don't mean because I don't think Sasuke could quit but you know... if he is so popular his former boss could look for him, and will we know how he got in that position? hahaha... you know how random I am XD

    aw... and I really loved Sakura in here, it was fun when she got 'angry' at Naruto, but it was nice of her to try to help him with Sasuke, she really must love him :D
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  • From ANON - Cai on January 23, 2010
    Jelp, I'm completely in love with this story. It's wonderful babe and you had me laughing so many times that I got "the look" from my hubby. I love the pace you're going in this and I love how you have Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke interact with each other. Their personalities are realistic and perfect in this. Your attention to the characterizations and detail are amazing. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Kimra on January 20, 2010
    You write brilliantly and... err it's brilliant. Sorry for lack of discriptors, I'm extreamly tired, but your writing is awesome and has never disapointed.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 18, 2010
    This story is so weird already. But I'm going to continue to read it because, well, I love you, Jelp. ^_^
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  • From KaraMayonakaSora on January 18, 2010
    Actually, for men, straight porn is a pretty shitty job. The women always get paid more. Example: Woman gets paid $350 bucks for a movie, man in same movie gets about $125. You get a little more if you have a nice body and a big dick, but it's not much. Merchandising is where you get the big bucks. You know, casts of your schlong for dildo models, et cetera. Men who want to get paid go for gay porn.

    Enjoying your story so far. Hope to see more soon. :)
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  • From YuukoUchiha on January 17, 2010
    oh~ I gave no idea what's going on... for a moment I thought 'oh they are filming him without him knowing' lol~ but I know -or guess- that's not the case (yeah... I know I just want to make excuses for him XD)
    pretty coincidence hu? meting Sasuke in a shop like that, it was fate! XD the way Naruto was looking for ramen no matter what! I understand the feeling, when I really want something I get it!
    it made me laugh how horny Naruto was :D all the time thinking about sex hehehe
    and who was that s-? but I agree with Naruto, gods! the way Sasuke threw him away~ .:shakes fist angrily:.
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  • From DevilnBlue on January 17, 2010
    HOW DARE SASUKE NOT BE GAY >< I'm not like a very big fan of Sasuke... barely but Naruto really seems to like him in the anime/manga and if my dobe is happy I am. SO HOW DARE HE NOT BE GAY >
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  • From DevilnBlue on January 17, 2010
    Omg I'm crying from laughter. Sakura is like the girlfriend from hell. One minute she's all turning Naruto gay and the next she's fighting him because she thinks he's cheating on him. Before finally deciding they are going to become BFF's so she can paint his nails.

    God bless Naruto he got out at the perfect time before she could do more stuff to him o.
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  • From kitsuko999 on January 17, 2010
    This is so good that I'm finally at the point of begging for Chapter 3 to come out soon this upcoming week! Very, VERY good! I do have a hunch of what Sasuke was thinking the entire time, but I won't tell until Naruto and Sasuke hook up as I wouldn't want to ruin the surprise. Hehehe. Talk to you next time, Jelp - and hopefully soon! ^_^
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  • From animeaddict666 on January 17, 2010
    oh I love the "type" of gay man you've made Naruto. Yeah for noon-stereotypical depictions. I really think the ramen was hilarious. Naruto is so utterly hopeless. I much admit I'm very curious about sasuke's reaction to Naruto not being a writer anymore, and equally confused about the girl's appearance. It was a very awkward scene, and really perfect for setting up the conflict to come. Really enjoying the plot progression.

    I will say that Naruto's internal thoughts/monologue were a little long, and maybe some more dialog would have helped to show how he feels uncomfortable or how they're skirting around current "issues". However, it was a negligible issue and I'm sure we'll see plenty of interaction later! Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 17, 2010
    loved it, please update soon.
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  • From animeaddict666 on January 17, 2010
    OMFG I'm in love already. This is such a great setup and Sakura is sooooooo empowered and in character. I adore the back story with Sasuke and the porn videos are just titillating. I really can't wait to see what happens.

    And, oh, that last bit with the nail painting and sakura's eveel-green-gleam of doom made me die laughing.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 17, 2010
    i think...!

    ... that sasuke somehow sold himself for naruto's dream of writing, and when he found out that naruto didn't go into writing, he got angry because he's in a job he hates for nothing.

    or something. but i do have to wonder why sasuke has scheduled sexual encounters with women, off camera. we all know he's probably thinking of how to go about killing himself in a way that would embarrass his father the most (if he hates him) or without making his mother cry (if he likes her) (or if they're even alive) as he does her. though, that's just my impression, lol.

    i really like this one! (though i like everything of yours, so that's just a given). looking forward to the next chapter!
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