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Reviews for To See Your Face

By : Jelp
  • From YuukoUchiha on May 03, 2010
    it makes me smile that Naruto didn't noticed he asked Sasuke if he I supposed to expect him to jump him every time they saw the other XD

    it makes me chuckle though, that Naruto is the one who feel he had to give some explanations when Sasuke is the one that has been behaving all secretive and stuff
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  • From LunarNemuri on May 03, 2010
    Hahahaha I just knew Sasuke was going to see the porn, it was so predictable, but it's still incredibly funny xD
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  • From ANON - Repanse on May 03, 2010
    OH.MY.GOD.
    *dies laughing*

    P.S. Please update sooner next time T___T pleasepleaseplease
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  • From ANON - move_them_hands on May 03, 2010
    XD Oh how happy I am right now. I just read the last chapter and I laughed so hard I snorted!

    This story is too great. Its so gripping! I spent the whole time yelling at Sasuke for not telling Naruto what I think he wants to say!

    Its amazing how interesting I find this story! Normally any Sasuke and Naruto story just gets so lame and over-used, the same expressions and phrases and drama, that I get bored of it after two chapters but you make them so damn addicting! I'm not too surprised you're able to do so though, being as awesome as you are *chuckles*

    There's so much I'm assuming about this story that its killing me! I can't stand not knowing, I usually only read stories once they are complete but your stories can't be ignored!

    I love how emotionally deep your stories are, how well you connect with your story as an author makes it almost painful to read. But pleasurably painful, of course ;D

    I very much look forward to your update. I hope you email people to tell them when you update? I'll remember a story forever, but I'm too lazy to look up if they've been updated ^^; Invisible_Pink_Unicorn@live.com if you do.

    Thank you so very much for yet another amazing story.
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  • From ANON - Macy on May 03, 2010
    Lol. Oh naruto, my poor boy! What a situation! Hahaha! This is awesome. Can't wait to see how he explains himself. Lovely chapter!
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  • From ANON - Maya-Nara on May 03, 2010
    one word .... SHIT

    I seriously did NOT see that coming ... you totally caught me off guard.

    but I'm optimistic ... Sasuke broke up with the freaky girl ... Naruto didn't do something stupid ... they are together & the bed is ready for them ;)
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 02, 2010
    Ack! How embarassing >< Poor Naruto. I really hope next chapter Sasuke will explain why he ditched Naruto that night just for a quick fuck??

    Please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Cai on May 02, 2010
    Jesus Jelp, you are evil for leaving the chapter off there. I want a refund... like now >.>

    Seriously, though babe, I love this story : ) I've been keeping an eye out for an the next chapters. What a wonderful break from my studying. I cannot wait to find out what kind of conversation Naruto and Sasuke are going to have. Haha, oh Naru, how will you escape this embarrassment? I almost want this to lead into some smut, but then, I'm not sure if it would be the right time in the story. I guess only time and you will be able to answer that question.

    Love it! Can't wait for me *kisses*
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  • From esquisitepetal on March 07, 2010
    I like this story. I also enjoyed your other stories that I read this weekend.
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  • From kitsuko999 on February 13, 2010
    Do you think you will be able to release chapter 4 this month of February? I'm so looking forward to read more (while trying not to sound too much of a beggar).
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  • From ANON - sorellona on February 12, 2010
    Hi! First time rewieving so, hajimemashite I' m Sorellona.
    Love your works in general, but simply adore "To see your face" in particular.
    I really really wonder if the choice made by Sasuke to be a porn star had just everything to do with Naruto' s youthful (can't believe i used the y. word!) wish to be a porn writer. Also his sudden desire to write about ninja and the consequential research to be done at Naruto' s dojo, is it just a mere coincidence??
    Hoping my sucky english made some sense, I' m patiently waiting to see what you' ve got in store for us. ^^
    Sorellona
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  • From UzumakiNaruto20 on February 10, 2010
    I am absolutely loving this! I always enjoy your stories as you just seem to have a gift for writing original stories but always manage to keep Naruto and Sasuke in character (or as close as you can get since they are intent on jumping the other. sigh...wouldn't that be great if it happened in the manga? I would love Kishimoto-san forever!) Not only that but you smut scenes are always AMAZING!!! If only I could write like that, then maybe people would read my stories lol.
    Anyway, keep it up! I can't wait to read about Sasuke watching Naruto at the dojo. They sooo want each other, I hope they hurry up and realise that!
    Update soon or I'll start to get withdrawal and then I might do something drastic! lol
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  • From KaraMayonakaSora on January 24, 2010
    This chapter was great, as I expected. And I know what you mean about missing the intimacy.
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  • From kitsuko999 on January 24, 2010
    At first I thought Sasuke did quit his job as a porn star, but then as soon as he input quickly that he was becoming interested in the field of writing, I knew it couldn’t be so, especially at the part where Sasuke wants to write a ninja story by watching the practices at Naruto’s dojo. My only thoughts were then at that moment, “Of course you want some ideas, Sasuke – of how you’re going to screw that tanned ass of Naruto’s when getting him alone after he’s all sweaty and worked up.” LOL! And even Naruto’s not only falling for the bait, but he’s also enticing Sasuke to do such dirty things to him! I love it! Of course it the story changes than what I thought based off this chapter then I won’t be disappointed. You always work these stories out to their best, Jelp so I know I’ll love whatever you write for the remaining chapters left of this story.

    Oh and yes, I knew exactly what you were talking about regarding the need for contact. I’m a touchy person to a limit with the people I’m most familiar with of course and I like to stick close, touch shoulders, give hugs, and snuggle. When my ex broke up with me, the hardest part was realizing I couldn’t cuddle with him anymore despite the sheer closeness we had in our romantic relationship of 7 months. There were times where I’d find my hand almost reaching out to grab my ex’s shirt in attempts to drag him over to me and hug him. Of course I never did since I knew that would be inappropriate as past lovers. I almost didn’t mind having this guy I met a few months later sweet talk me and hold my hand while letting me throw my legs over his lap as we snuggled on a sofa. We talked and shared our common interests as well as had some quiet time of peace between us. He was so sweet, but I didn’t want to seem like I was replacing him with my previous relationship. I sadly had to let him go, but over the months I learned how to behave differently around my ex and I took comfort in hangout out with my two closest female friends which always gave me a hug or they would ‘glopped’ me as my best friend calls it when she pounces on me and hugs me to death.

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  • From ANON - fox_trot on January 23, 2010
    So I love you Sasuke/Naruto stories and this one is no disappointment. I am impaitiently waiting for your next chapter.
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