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From Sparky7491 on July 04, 2012
Awesome story! ^_^

I have a request. Please make a SasukeXHinata to "Scotty Doesn't Know" by Lustra. What I would like to see is Hinata getting her jollies off by cheating on Naruto(Who is either her boyfriend or husband) with his best friend Sasuke. I would like if Sasuke and Hinata having been doing it for a long time yet Naruto still has no idea, but the worst part is that all of Hinata's female friends know, they all support her, and even help her with her cheating time with Sasuke.
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From ANON - Jen on December 31, 2011
I kinda like the fact that Sasuke doesn't feel the same as Naruto in "Study Break." I've seen one-sided love fics before with this pairing, but when it's a case like this one where Naruto makes the first move, it always turns out the same: Sasuke was secretly always feeling the same as Naruto but pretended not to be when Naruto finally realized his own feelings. That seems like *such* a cop-out to me. I think a more interesting and realistic scenario is for Naruto to either legitimately convince Sasuke to give him a shot (and forcing him like he has been definitely won't do that), or to man up and accept that you can't force someone to change their sexual orientation, no matter how much you want them to. I think I'd be happy either way with this one: whether they decide to stick to being friends, or whether Sasuke gets convinced to give Naruto a shot. I'll look forward to part 3!
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From ANON - Jen on November 08, 2011
Aw, one-sided SakuNaru and one-sided KibaNaru. If I were in Sakura's place, I'd probably be thinking "it should have been me," too since she was the one who stayed behind when Sasuke didn't. But then there's your one-sided KibaNaru, which points out that both Sakura and Sasuke are jerks to Naruto, so what can you do? Naruto HAS to have a masochistic side if he'd pick Sakura as girlfriend material and Sasuke for a best friend. A nice, non-insulting guy like Kiba has no chance. :P (Which is fine by me since Naruto's masochism over Sasuke is always appealing. XD )

I think I'm a masochist too since I reread your "Shattered" oneshot every time you post new oneshots. It's always hard for me to figure out which of the boys I'm most mad at in that story, Naruto for going behind Sasuke's back with his own brother, or Sasuke for not having enough faith in Naruto to tell him about his feelings. But then Naruto didn't have enough faith in Sasuke to do the same (either about his feelings for Sasuke OR his feelings for someone else), so Naruto loses my sympathy for having the affair and for having someone to comfort him in the end, while Sasuke gets no boyfriend, no best friend, and his relationship with his brother ends up strained (at the very least). I always wonder what happens to Sasuke at the end of that oneshot. Without Naruto and Itachi in his life the way they used to be, does Sasuke become an even darker, more depressing person, or does he find a way to branch out? Since this isn't a tragic universe like the manga, I'd *like* to think it ends up being the latter (and that it *kills* Naruto seeing Sasuke gaining new interests without him. HA!) I think even if Itachi is a good guy and Naruto is happy with him, because of the type of person Naruto is (a guy who always goes after the things he wants and never gives up), the knowledge that he settled for something (in this case, another man), when he could have gotten what he'd wanted if he'd only tried, would always be hanging over Naruto's head as a regret.

Anyway, lovely oneshots!
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From missbri88 on October 27, 2011
I've been missing this. :) I'm happy I caught it again.

*Request*
I would love to see a Tomboy!Ten-ten woo Hinata who's afraid of men(e.I. Kiba and Naruto who are fighting for her) and then the girls make their relationship know to the group who are shocked.
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From Overlordofnobodies on April 07, 2011
Hey long time to see.Seeing as you have been doing a lot of SasuNaru(winch I like the last one a lot) and I all was like your SakuKarin fic.
Hightschool fic.Good girl Sakura spy the school bad girl Karin dressing in the girls locker room.Karin catches her and have some fun.
or
Sakura learn more about Karin biting thing.
Please do one or both of them if you dont mind!
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From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2011
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From AngelTalion on November 04, 2010
most of these are total inspiration for me. :) So I have a request... sluttyNaruto x any one willing + Jealous Sasuke = SasuNaru Pretty please? My NaNoWriMo is along these lines and I could use the added inspiration :)
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From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on July 02, 2010
i think the throwing of the alarm clock was really telling here....you snooze you lose....how sad!!!

poor sasu maybe he needs a little redheaded friend to help him get over the hurt.
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From ANON - Zwinky on May 23, 2010
This was hot~!
I really really would love to read another SakuKarin XD
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From PnKnG on May 10, 2010
Really nice stories :)
I really like the 3some ;)
here is a requests from me.

A sasuhina fic to the lady gaga song "monster".
It will be more fitting if you write it as an AU but if you can make it fit into the regular universe, feel free to do so.
There are a number of things I want you to get into the story as naughty detail ;)
Also the rating of this story is ++rated M aka. as naughty as you can make it and don't leave any naughty detail out.
The best setting for the story would be a party or a club.
You have Hinata on the dancefloor dancing with her girlfriend or boyfriend ( the gaga song implise that its a girl but I leave it if Hinata is bi or not).
Suddenly she spots Sasuke. She start to have naughty fantasy of him and wonders why she feels like that out of nowhere for someone she has never seen before but can't help but her fantasies just get naughtier and naughtier.
The perspective than shortly switches over to Sasuke.
He notices Hinata looking at him. Feeling turned on by her looking at him he licks his lips and thinks to himself how hot she is.
Than back to Hinata.
Her bf/gf says he/she needs to use the bathroom and leaves Hinata on the dancefloor.
Hinata is than taking over by her own desire and aproaches Sasuke.
They start to dance with each other. Soon they are grinding against each other.
Sasuke than wispers into her ear that he wants to eat her up and wants to take her to his home.
Soon they are on the way to Sasukes place.
Once there I just want Sasuke to rip her cloth of and get naughty.
There is the following passage in the song:

He ate my heart, he ate my heart
Instead he's a monster in my bed

And thats what I want to happen. I want Hinata to call Sasuke a monster because he is nothing like the peoples she has been before with. His cock is longer and thicker than any she has ever seen and it streches her in ways she never has been streached before. He also has more stanima and cums a lot more than any of her lovers before him. Make Hinata tell him all this and make her compare him to other lovers she had before and tell him how much better he is.
Make sure that all of that just makes Sasuke's ego bigger and turn him on more and give it to her more.
Also make sure that Sasuke unloads each of his loads either in her mouth or deep within her womb.
You get bonus points if you can build in that Hinata is fertile while they bang and both are only more turned on by that and Sasuke just wants to shoot his cum into her because he loves the idea and risk of knocking her up.

I really hope you will do my request.
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From missbri88 on May 09, 2010
Oh I like this compilation. You're opening me to somethings I usually don't read(aside from SxN). I would like to add a request as well!

_Um... One-sided SXN both on both partys but main Itachi x Naruto. Ummm... Sasuke would pine after Naruto after walking in on their lovemaking. Naruto always wanted Sasu-chan but ettled for Itachi because Sasuke didn't seem interested.
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From Overlordofnobodies on May 09, 2010
God what I would pay for you to keep going.You stop right when it was going to get fun but if you not sure about stuff like. Then I get it but if you fill sure you have to go and write some more for it.I love how Sakura forgot it was a public bath, It would have made it all the more fun if you had keep going. Oh if you had not got it let. IT WAS SO WHAT I WHAT'D!Thank you again for doing it. I think I'm going to read it again.
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From Overlordofnobodies on March 18, 2010
Sorry for not review the last one. I had other thing come up. I did like both storyes but I think I like the other one more. Most like as I got a thing for people rubing each other down. It all so gave me another idea.
If you dont mind makeing another SakuraXKarin. This time there in a bathhouse and they wash each other.
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From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2010
Awww so so cute!!! I love the chibi-dorable part....Loved it!!! Itachi would hook up his little brother..that was really cute!
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From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2010
Sasuke must be a major masochist, because I would never ever let anyone touch my back, arms shoulders or whatever if I had a bad sunburn like that....just touching the skin hurts....even when I put cooling lotion on it.....and I don't think even an orgasm would take away the pain of having my sunburned skinned massaged....yeah masochist bastard...i guess.
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