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Reviews for Violence and Smiles

By : mindslip
  • From DevilLived on March 05, 2010
    I was wondering when we'd get an update! Was not disappointed at all~ I love your Sasuke and his sarcasm. His and Naruto's bantering makes me giggle, XD. And I love their reactions to our world(? I'm guessing). How Naruto has insane ideas about aliens and Sasuke's darker understandings- it's a great contrast. Keep up the awesome work~
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  • From Dorkchic on March 05, 2010
    The shower should be an event. I wonder if they will go with one stands on one side of the curtain while the other showers and vice versa or (since they have already seen each other naked at the various onsens) if they will just share the shower and try not to touch each other.
    I am curious about what Kyuubi is doing/thinking all this time and if he can shed some light on the subject. Another method of finding out could be Sasuke going into Naruto's mind and physically looking at the memories since attempting to remember on their own causes pain. If nothing else and they cannot get back then they would probably do really well in action films, japanese game shows, or appearing at various conventions as characters. LOL!
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  • From mannahpierce on March 05, 2010
    I was compelled to leave a review. I loved chapter two, particularly the last part in the hotel. I haven't laughed like that in ages. Really looking forward to more.
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  • From GudenMulle on February 09, 2010
    Hahahahahah! Fuck, this is brilliant! "Actually waltzing isn't really our style" XDD.
    I really hope you continue this soon, I'm dying with curiosity about what's going to happen :b
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on January 22, 2010
    Wow.... I am so intrigued its crazy! So many questions! Where are they?! How'd they get there?! What are they gonna do next?! I really hope you continue this story so I can not die of anticipation while waiting for the answers! Your grammar is flawless and the set up for the story is amazing!!! You did a really fantastic job of describing the setting! I could really see them and what was going on in my head while I was reading! Both are very in-character which I, also an author, find hard to keep up with! But you did it with finesse. I so look forward to the next installment!!

    ~Cianis

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  • From Samric on January 16, 2010
    Well, this promises to be entertaining.
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  • From Arigatomina on January 14, 2010
    I'd love to see more of this. Naruto and Sasuke being handcuffed together is a pet fetish of mine, especially when they're bickering the entire time. I also love where they ended up. I'm really curious to see them getting along in this 'alien' world. Coping with the natives just raises so many possibilities for humor. ;p And that "adult" label leaves hope for smut. You can never go wrong with that. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From SakuraLee91 on January 04, 2010
    Wow!! That was so great :) I enjoyed reading it a lot :) I hope to read more of it soon :)
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  • From goodchaos on January 02, 2010
    This Fic sounds Awesome!! Please Keep it up!! I can't wait for more!
    & I agree with sess18 !! Please let naruto be Seme XD
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  • From fayjay18 on January 02, 2010
    Great story, please let naruto be seme:)
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  • From DevilLived on January 01, 2010
    Hilarious. Love it. Please, please continue.
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  • From xgangsofasiax on December 31, 2009
    This is hilarious! This is EXACTLY how they would act in that situation too! You kept them in perfect character. Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2009
    This was a great start for a fic....please more...oh and thank you...yeah...please and thank you.
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on December 31, 2009
    I like where you're going with this story.

    But, I think that in the first chapter, you should have explained to the readers why Naruto and Sasuke still have their ninja skills if they're not in the ninja world anymore. (I'm assuming they're not in the ninja world) Well, scratch that. Maybe it'd make more sense to the readers if you gave them a small note explaining why they weren't in the ninja world anymore in the second chapter.
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  • From cynaga on December 31, 2009
    So much fun~! Nice and in character. Satisfying to see them together again - you wrote them so well, it feels like Naruto really caught up with Sasuke.
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