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Reviews for Violence and Smiles

By : mindslip
  • From moodysavage on December 06, 2011
    this was soooo stinking hilarious!!! I just laughed and laughed over this... especially that first chapter because it was all just so unexpected. I really want more... more... MORE!!! Sending lots of plot bunnies your way and hope you write 50 million more chapters of this soon :)
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  • From Silvryfang on May 16, 2011
    I wish I could go back in time and write this before you just so I could say I came up with this awsome scenerio. And though a version of it has been used in the past, like all stories so this isnt an insult, the little clues are intersting and make it stand out as original. I want to know how they were thrown in to the future its eating away at me and that one clue leaves so many possibilities that I cant even begin to narrow down.

    And I love how they are reconecting and their insults and fights are hilarious. I should not have read it in class, because I litteraly tossed back my head laughing in front of everyone... a wee bit awkward, yeah? But i regret nothing! I couldn't not read more and I am freaking out that there is no more now, after I have read it twice. Though what you have written has yet to get boring so I will continue to read those for now as I wait "patiently."
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2010
    Very funny~!

    I like the humor that surrounds Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. They are very comedic with some of their actions (fighting, swearing, fighting...). The alien world must be a bit confusing to them but I'm sure they will adjust to it. What I find interesting is the difference between the ninja world and the modern world. Such as people usually ignore you in the modern world but in Naruto's time they probably do snare and make comments. I'm really enjoying how fimilar the two are to the original character though Naruto is quite agressive in this.
    Can't wait for the next chapter, cheers~!
    By the way, is this SasuNaru or NaruSasu? (I hope its the first personally... ^^)
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  • From discohound on May 30, 2010
    I felt SO moved, I've created an account SPECIFICALLY to review you and your stomach-crippling (from the laughter, you see) story. yes, you're that good. no, i'm not embellishing in the least. I was fortunate enough to bamboozle my way into your delightful writings and I have NO REGRETS FOR IT >;r

    SO FIRST OF ALL. You've managed to possess these characters and really bring out the LIFE, in them. your sense of humor is impeccably well timed, and the dialogue always an adventure to read. you've taken these boys and tossed them into some foul (yet highly amusing) clusterfucks. which is a word that fits their situation EXACTLY. and it's an awesome fucking word, no less.

    APOLOGIES FOR MY BRIEF REVIEW. IT'S BEEN SO LONG SINCE I'VE ACTUALLY DONE SO, MY FINGERS ARE RUSTED.

    P.S. IT'S SATURDAY NIGHT, BUT IT FEELS SO RIGHT
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  • From mi5tan8909 on May 10, 2010
    Thanks for the chapter. Reading this, especially the differences between Naruto & Sasuke makes me laugh.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on April 26, 2010
    Okay, usually I avoid these "dumped in our time" fics, but this is really good! I mean it's a riot, and you captured them so well. Great job! Now I'll be waiting anxiously for an update.
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  • From gigglesmirks on April 26, 2010
    This story never fails to entertain, seriously. Sasuke and Naruto are almost very nearly like a comic duo. Though ever since the part about their shirts, I couldn't help but wonder: How the hell will they get a new shirt on when they're handcuffed together???

    Though I guess that's the least of their worries. XDDDDDD

    Can't wait for more~
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2010
    I reviewed the first chapter under my username....sukenarufan09, and I have been looking for this fiction but had forgotten the name. This is such a cool premise and I can't wait for more. I'm glad that you are back and hopefully your muse will stay sober. Lock her the hell up so she'll stop deserting you to go get her drink on...seriously what was she thinking??? Anyway Thanks for the update hope you continue the story I'm really enjoying it.
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  • From bunnylove on March 24, 2010
    So many more questions have popped up since the first chapter.
    I totally laughed myself silly at Naruto. He thought the car was an alien machine! Priceless.
    I wonder how close to the truth Sasuke's guess was. It seems like he's not far off about them missing part of their memory. Because one of them had to have carved the goodbye into the tree (and I don't think it was Naruto). I love that I'm just as lost in this fic as Naruto and Sasuke.
    Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :]
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  • From kinai26 on March 07, 2010
    Wow, this is such a cool story, very realistic fiction heh heh. I can easily imagine Sasuke and Naruto trapped in our reality XD
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  • From inuspike on March 06, 2010
    What an interesting chapter. I must say, I thoroughly enjoy Naruto and Sasuke's bickering, you write it so well. Love the cliff you've left us hanging off of. Can't wait to see what happens to the boys next. ^^
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  • From MagicalReality on March 06, 2010
    I was laughing so hard at the car part. Sniffing the asphalt, tch. More please!
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  • From goodchaos on March 05, 2010
    Oh, I can't wait to see how they're gonna work it out! Love your fic!!
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  • From tovah on March 05, 2010
    The first chapter was interesting and pretty good but the text format on the second chapter was messed up, I didn't even bother to continue reading it.
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  • From AutorZwei on March 05, 2010
    I liked it, though a dump is an interesting place to start a story.
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