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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on June 04, 2010
    Alright! Hinata and Neji finally reunite! I'm happy that that is out of the way now (at least I hope).

    THat Klennethon Darrent guy is some character. He does like to keep Uchiha on their toes, doesn't he?

    And Itachi has been given the okay to be...Itachi. I hope this works.
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  • From bob665 on June 04, 2010
    Chapter 75 what I'm about to say I am saying as someone who has enjoyed your writing. This chapter was terrible. It jumped around chaotically and I felt as if parts were missing. To be honest I think you tried to fit three or four chapters worth of material into one to the detriment of the story.
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  • From bob665 on June 04, 2010
    Chapter 74 why no line breaks? Anyway Kiba's actions caught me by surprise as much judging from your author's note as they did you. It is interesting how stories take on a life their own at times, though, and I wonder if there wasn't something deeper behind your sudden change? Are you enjoying writing this?
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  • From bob665 on June 04, 2010
    Chapter 72 being able to signal like that when that's happening is impressive. I'm curious did you borrow it from history or come up with that on your own?
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  • From bob665 on June 04, 2010
    Chapter 71 The Blossom was tiny, fast, manoeuvrable and bristled with weaponry. maneuverable?

    So I'm guessing this was the end to an arc and it seemed sort of rush to me. Well, it's more the plan went off without a hitch which kind of feel disappointing.
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  • From bob665 on June 03, 2010
    Chapter 70 you know males are capable of going without sex for long periods of time. Sorry personal baggage again and I'll try to avoid that in the future. Anyway I liked this chapter with the jumping around and catching up on everyone. Trying to figure out if days or weeks are passing however. If you haven't already done it maybe you should just drop hints about ages because the last dozen or so chapters felt like they are happening very close to each other whereas I felt maybe two or three weeks passed by in this one. How far am I off?
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  • From bob665 on June 03, 2010
    Chapter 69 the conflict between Naruto and Sasuke or at least Naruto anger towards Sasuke was nice to see. So often your characters act so coldly logical that they almost seem completely detached from their emotions. As I look back I can only think of a handful of really strong emotions that came out to affect the characters interactions with each other up to this point. Conflict is good. By the way I can completely sympathize with the chapter thing. Whenever I finish one I always feel the need to post it then and there and it's hard to resist that temptation.
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  • From bob665 on June 03, 2010
    Chapter 66 the fight scene in this chapter was again all right, but it didn't get my blood flowing or anything like that. Its most notable in these action scenes where your lack of description of the ship comes through. The shifting points of view was informative, but might have added to the lack of drama. Not sure if it would've been better to pick one person to focus on or not. The part where Kisame was manhandling the intruders was the height of the chapter for me.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 03, 2010
    Woman, this is the best story that I am reading right now and I must say you have a great mind. I am sooooo glad that I found you here and I can't wait till another update. One of these days I will sign in under my real name, but today I was lazy and just had to get this out there. Thank you soo much for doing this fanfiction and I'm sorry I don't review enough. I really do enjoy this story. Thanks

    ja ne till next time
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  • From bob665 on June 02, 2010
    Chapter 64 I'm a little disappointed in your first rule while I might be able to help you out with the fourth one. Anyway as for the mature seen in this chapter I give it an eight. No technical flaws which is always good with more detail than usual for you.
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  • From bob665 on June 02, 2010
    In Chapter 63 where ever you meant to spell Kotetsu it came out as Koteusu. Anyway more off seen action which was kind of disappointing. I'm assuming that the extermination of the one particular group is going to eventually have consequences?
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  • From ANON - Nikki_T on June 02, 2010
    FINALLY!!! I was aching for some 'foxknotinSasuke' action. While I like how you're developing the other characters I would like to see more of just Naruto and Sasuke as they are the reason why I'm reading this (cause it's under their category). Just my opinion I guess.

    Awesome chapter!
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  • From meowkuu2 on June 02, 2010
    more.. that's all I can say. I want to read more, I want to see where you'll take the story in terms of Kabuto, Orochimaru, Klenneth, Kimimaru...ummm How the kits and kids will grow and learn together, the development of the new Uchiha, Itachi and Haku's "relationship" will we see a return of Zabuza...like wow...honestly, a real great story here
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  • From roro237 on June 02, 2010
    WoW wOw WoW!! I was almost ready to cry. I knew Naruto was already upset but when they said all that stuff about the kits. My heart sunk. I think this proves that they are a real family:) Figuring out what had happen and fixing it with everyones help. Then the icing was the alone time together. Hey my next boyfriend will definitely have to howl:) That was so sexy! Sasuke is a fine leader he could have been pissed but instead he knew what Kiba needed to hear and handle it beautifuly. Gaara the sweetie will he understand soon?!:) I look forward to what you have in store after the time lapse! You are the Queen of Naruto space travel and I'm loving the journey ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nivell on June 02, 2010
    Hubba hubba. The lemon scene made me drool. Thank you for that!
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