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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - ryn on June 12, 2010
    I vote for a chapter 1 =). Good job
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  • From missbri88 on June 11, 2010
    Damn Aff and their selfishness!!! I want to give you a five star rating every week! Why won't they allow me that one simple pleasure?!
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  • From ANON - Lil_lo on June 10, 2010
    When I saw you posted I felt real joy at knowing that the babies would be born. I think it's amazing to have been drawn into the world you created to be excited like I was. The babies are interesting and I look forward to seeing them as they grow into themselves and seeing how you handle the challenge of everyone raising the kids with the kits. I'm also happy for Shikimaru.
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  • From Prism0467 on June 10, 2010
    OMFG someone needs to FAN ART Shikamaru holding his genetic soup made with Naruto and Sasuke! It's unbelievable!!!!
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  • From roro237 on June 10, 2010
    I was almost as excited as when I gave brith! I wanted to know what the kits would look like. You covered everything! I truly loved it!! Of course Haru would be the one who had to eat alone first:) I sure didn't see it coming that Shi-chan would feel this way?! But that ever lovin Na-chan made it right. Have I mention I'm in love with Naruto to you:) Yea and Sasuke to I can't fight it any longer:) This is the first Naruto story I have read with 90 chapters 'Yea Baby'!!! Thank you for all your hard work ~bowing~ I love Your story!
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  • From cynaga on June 10, 2010
    YEA - Shika papa san~!
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  • From ANON - blondie3755 on June 08, 2010
    Hi there, just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story. it's a very original and interesting concept. Hopefully you will continue with it. Cheers.
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  • From bob665 on June 07, 2010
    Chapter 89 (finally) I've come to quite like these chapters where you touch base on everyone. This was the perfect scene to do it for and I found myself trying to figure out if there were any clues to what would happen next. Then it occurred to me that this could be the end, but as it's not listed as complete I'm guessing not. Right now, though, I'm not sure where you're heading.
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  • From bob665 on June 07, 2010
    Chapter 88 Jiraiya offered to walk the Centralite out. Haku, Neji and Shikamaru left. Kakaski went as if to follow but turned on the threshold.


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  • From bob665 on June 07, 2010
    Chapter 87 I think it's funny that you put a warning for lemons considering the site you're posting on. Anyway the problem with the nursery was resolved nicely though the use of the cards was a bit impersonal I think. The lemon wasn't bad.
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  • From bob665 on June 07, 2010
    Chapter 86 I always wondered if I read too deeply into situations? Was the fact that Inari not having his own room enough of a pressing concern that it perhaps might hant at the situation with him and Konohamaru or was it just a offhanded comment? Anyway, one thing that did shake me as strange was that several individuals took time off to work on their own quarters when the nursery was still incomplete. One is a pressing concern while the other is a matter of convenience, which makes me wonder that perhaps they are not as close to everyone else as I thought they were. Then again I was pretty sure that only two maybe three days had passed during this chapter.
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  • From bob665 on June 07, 2010
    Chapter 85 I'm guessing it was the security drill part that you had left out? Considering your concentration on character missing a plot point like that seems likely. If that was the case maybe you should consider an outline?
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  • From bob665 on June 07, 2010
    Chapter 84 in this chapter I had a sense of passing of time towards the end. I'm not sure how much time passed, but I definitely had that sense. I think the reference to the three-day mark along with the short list of things that were happening were the chief cause of that effect.
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  • From ANON - Lil-lo on June 06, 2010
    I love this story, I love this concept, I love that you take a slightly different approach on couples in that you have so many types and varieties and that there is focus on them and their individual problems but there is a strong focus on the goal of creating a new Uchia so that the reader isn't overwhelmed by fluff. I really have loved the arch focusing on the kids and cubs and I am excited about them coming. The idea of a mama Naruto fox is cute, granted you hinted that Sasuke might use the feeder. I was also interested in reading about Hinata and seeing our old friend try some of his tricks.
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  • From bob665 on June 06, 2010
    Chapter 83 I'm guessing I'm alone in thinking cloning your mother is 10 ways of creepy. You really are handling an interesting subject here. Should one punish someone for a crime they can't remember committing? What is the purpose of punishment? Is it to keep society in some form of structure or does one have a legitimate obligation to the victims? What weight counterbalances sin?
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