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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From NarutoVixin on January 24, 2010
    i may not always comment but i look for this ones updates and am thinking about reading the other tales set in this world i for one happen to love it
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  • From RyuEarth on January 24, 2010
    The part with Naruto and Iruka talking about the clothing to wear was funny! XD
    I loved that it is something that Naruto and Iruka would come up with!
    Also, I like that Iruka is finally being stronger and more sure of himself!
    Thanks for the updates! =)
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  • From evilchild on January 24, 2010
    i would DEFINITELY continue reading this! it's so much different and a whole lot better than a lot fics in this section to me. i only come to this section to check if you've updated and will be placing this on my recommended reading list (if you decide to continue that is). the story is so well thought out and put together that even if the characters are OOC, i don't care. i figure they are going to be OOC as soon as anyone starts writing as they are not the original author and thus cannot possible make the characters IC no matter how much they try.

    IF you do start an original story i will probably be stalking it as i do with this fic.
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 24, 2010
    Firstly you are writting this story and making the characters yours. That is what you are supposed to do. Your imagination should give each character a new trait. I as a reader enjoy the different portrayals of each character that I read on. If I wanted them to be exactly like the manga or anime I won't be reading fictional stories about them >.> Your story should have your own character development, not follow religiously the persona of the anime :/ That's just my opinion.
    I'll read whenever you post chica ^_^
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  • From Dragon7 on January 24, 2010
    Please continue with this story I'm really interested to see how the charters and plot evolve. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 24, 2010
    OOC is only three letters, not four (and isn't a word; it's a acronym). Taking the characters away from their canon characterization is not necessarily the kiss of death--certainly not from where I'm sitting. I've published fifteen Naruto fanfictions and rarely have I managed to maintain Kishimoto's characterizations.

    This story is a compelling trip to someplace else, somewhere else. I enjoy what you have done with the characters and do wonder why you chose to use someone else's rather than your own--you appear to be more than capable of coming up with characters and evolving them. However, I am 39 years old myself, and would not in any situation question anyone's enthusiasm for the manga and its characters. Naruto is something special.

    It's very gracious of you to write for others and then give notice that the fic will take on a different leaning going forward. I for one am planning to stick with it: I am interested to know, if nothing else, how this story evolves when the person writing it is doing it purely for herself.

    And by the way, I get the distinct impression that you are planning to pair Shikamaru with Neji. That's one of my OTP and I could not be more delighted. ^_^


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2010
    You're so awesome here I was all set and ready for ass kicking Sasuke and you pull a fast one and give me cross dressing Sasuke playing Neji's wife...That was brilliant...Like I said I never really can tell where the plot will twist and it makes things interesting.

    I feel sorry for Neji I wonder if he had a thing for Hinata, and I trully hope he doesn't fall in love with the littlest Uchiha, I'm glad Haku told him he was taken already.

    Haku is so awesome in this chappie too, maybe he and Zabusa will stay with the flying leaf? Who knows great stuff though, update soon.
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  • From Kerrisa on January 23, 2010
    Haku started off as a such a jerk but things have progressed so well! Well, minus being separated from their crew. I feel so bad for poor Neji =( but I look forward to him finding a new home on the Silver Leaf! I'm looking forward to the next update! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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  • From sonotgoingthere on January 23, 2010
    Excellent story. I like the world you've created, and how you've moved the characters from a ninja setting to a scifi setting.

    I like that you've created a greater world for this AU, but not tried to explain it to the reader in one hit -- it's part of the plot and the story line, but fascinating to click more piece of the world into place.

    Great work, I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 23, 2010
    I hope they all make it to the ship alive and well.
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  • From Halskr on January 23, 2010
    Sasuke as a girl, hmm. It's sexy jutsu!!! He would kinda look like Hinata wouldn't he.
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 23, 2010
    just the thought of the Sasuke from the manga doing mending to pass the time is funny but take him from that and put him in this world and it fits
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  • From Halskr on January 21, 2010
    Wow, lots to review on. Poor Kisame went back to the freak. At least he is still alive, but he probable gonna be in for it from Itachi when he catches up to him. To bad Itachi is stark raving loony.

    I really hope Haku doesn't sell Sasuke down the river. You get the impression that Haku can be a manipulative little bastard when he is angry.

    Poor Naruto, he really is feeling miserable about what happen, but I think it is probably a good thing. Sasuke needs to know that he can stand on his own and that he can make decisions. Up to this point, he has had the crew to fall back on if he makes a mistake. Its kinda like he got thrown from the nest. Plus it will show Naruto there is more to protecting Sasuke than just being a body guard.

    Anyway thanks for the massive updates.
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  • From luvesskiki on January 21, 2010
    *sniffles* Na-chan, come to my comforting bosom! *glomps Naruto* Lolz.

    Okay, so Haku stepped it up this time... I hope. *puts away sharps objects* Lolz, but he's still a punk. Get over yourself, already! Lolz.

    Amazing, as always. I just love your style of writing. Can't wait for the next one though.

    Excited,
    Kiki-Chan
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  • From Dragon7 on January 21, 2010
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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