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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on January 27, 2010
    Bravo.
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 27, 2010
    thank the gods my PT place has free net lol i got to read that before i got home i loved that you have one of the Cats battle command ill be waiting for that next update
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  • From Dorkchic on January 27, 2010
    I will definitely continue reading! Even if the characters veer into OOC sometimes- you completely make up for it with a well developed, properly paced, well written, and engaging story. Please continue!
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  • From Prism0467 on January 26, 2010
    I love you so much for making Naruto a hybrid in this.
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 26, 2010
    i wonder what Neji is going to think of all the howling those two let out lol
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 26, 2010
    omg Naruto howling is so cute ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2010
    Thanks again for the quick update. I still think you are spoiling us by updating so quickly, but I'll take the spoiling. I visit this site daily so when ever I see your update I will be sure to leave a review. I'm glad that you will continue this story and hope that you continue to write many more in this fandom.
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 25, 2010
    goody even if they slow to one every six months thats still better then not finishing it i will be sending a request to be informed of updates
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  • From Kerrisa on January 25, 2010
    Of course we would keep reading sweetie! It actually amazed me at how fast you were cranking these chapters out! Thats no small feat, at all! And for that you should be commended! I thoroughly enjoy this story and I'm in it for the long haul. Some fics on here I've been reading for two years ( TWO YEARS!!! Surprised me too when i came to that revelation!) so I will see to it that I review every time I read an update (may not be every chapter, cuz I have missed updates, stupid real life getting in the way of enjoying fanfiction!) but i will make sure that you know someone is excited about your fiction =) That being said, I look forward to the next installment, and I'm drooling over the look the guys decided to go with!! Omg black leather, chains, and weapons, YUMMY!! I want!! I want to molest and man handle!! xD Omg I think i may need therapy. Lol any who, until next time! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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  • From nivell on January 24, 2010
    I would read your story even if you updated slowly but I must confess that I visit aff everyday just to see your updates. I love this story so much!
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  • From dino1 on January 24, 2010
    I don't mind if the characters are au. About your question about maturity levels, being a spacer will do that. Spacers live a hard life. Sasuke was being raised his whole life to be a leader, and never realized his brother killed his family. So that angst factor is gone.
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  • From Kitling25 on January 24, 2010
    First, I registered just to leave a review for you. Second, I like to read in the evenings to unwind, as a result I have read a lot of fanfiction and your's is in my top five. I have read very few published books that are this good. Don't worry if the characters are OOC, through your writing you have almost made them your own. Not once have I thought 'That's not Sasuke' or 'Shikamaru should be more lazy'. You should definitely finish. Even if the updates are slower, I'll still read your work.
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  • From Zannie on January 24, 2010
    Hmm, in response to your musings on creating an original fic, why don't you finish writing this one in the style of Naruto and then just go back and change the names and features and tweak the storyline? Take it to different places that you couldn't take it to before because you were limited by keeping in character. This storyline would make an excellent erotic sci-fi novel. Think of this one as pratice, or a trial run, after all if you can't finish this, what chance do you have with an original story? Would be excellent as a manga, don't you think? Loving the way you developed the Naruto characters, more believable than the original Naruto.

    Well keep up the good work, I look forward to which ever direction you choose to take this fic.

    Au revoir,
    Zannie
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2010
    Okay so after I read over the review I left it kinda sounded a bit preachy to me so I'm changing it *blushes*...so yeah even if you took weeks or longer I would still follow this fiction, but only as you are writing it now and not if you go back to having the characters be all the way they are written in the Manga...cuz seriously I like the way your characters behave nothing wrong with them being Out Of Character who cares if you say they will be then we should expect it...so there off the preachy box...sorry...Still reading...
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  • From Sylvir on January 24, 2010
    I don't know how many readers you think you need to make this story worth writing but I'm throwing my hand in and saying I'm one. You can't just give us something this unique and different then take it away. I want to know what happens next and if it is transformed in to an original with characters I don't care about I won't be following it because I'll be too sad and angry that is story is gone. So please continue writing this fanfic. PLEASE!!!
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