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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2010
    AWWW I love you...(no not that way you perverts *___*)

    I loved this chapter...let me tell you the ways..
    1. The fact that you portrayed Naru as such an insightful friend, and the way that you had him explain how his experiences had changed him, and that he was stronger for them.

    2. I really like that you are taking your time to develop these characters and that we get a deeper glimpse of what makes them who they are in each subsequent chapter.

    3. I love that you make being a genius frightening in all reality Shika and Sasuke and Neji should be feared for their incredible intelligence as much as Naruto, Kakashi and Ibiki should be feared for their strength both of these qualities are indespensable in battle

    4. But my very favorite part was that you have your Neji vulnerable as well as strong, I love that he is going beyond his fear to trust Shika in a realtionship, even if he knows there is a risk to get hurt he sees that Shika is worth the risk. I also love that Shika the horn dog is willing to take it slow with Neji...now if that is not true love...I don't know what is.
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 31, 2010
    XD this made me happy.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 31, 2010
    All right Neji! Shikamaru is a lucky man; he has Naruto for a friend, Sasuke for a boss and now Neji for...whatever else. I'm so glad that Neji had the presence of mind to listen to what Naruto had to say. And I love how everyone is treating him as though he is a Hyuga, even though he has staunchly denied it to Sasuke, but he still isn't balking about it.

    You updated this so quickly I almost missed it! You're going to be staring at 60 chapters of a fic at this rate (not that I'm complaining, mind you)!

    Your AU is wonderful. I love science fiction but I don't think I have the skill to write it. I'm living vicariously through your efforts, you should know that.

    I note that Shino is quite the cheerleader in this fic, very free with advice and compliments. What's going to happen to him now that Shikamaru and Neji are devoted to each other? I hate to think of Shino being a third wheel, I love his character so much.

    I am also wondering about Zabuza and Haku.

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  • From roro237 on January 31, 2010
    The battle was magnificent! I loved Sasuke view on his head judgement and heart:)
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  • From roro237 on January 31, 2010
    I'm a new comer to your story but I have enjoyed every word I've read. For me it's your story and you putting your spin on the characters is fine:) I hope you will finish all of it! I'm hooked and I would love to know what you have in mind to the end ^_^
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  • From roro237 on January 31, 2010
    I love your story:) Forgive me for not reading it sooner. I'm hooked! ^_^
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  • From YojiKato on January 30, 2010
    I'm so glad you decided to continue this. The plot is intriguing. I have to confess that I am terribly drawn to the Shikamaru/Neji pairing. It's rarely written. I hope you continue with this. I'm hoping to be a professional author myself someday, and have found that honing my skills through fanfics has been an invaluable experience. I still have work to do until I'm completely satisfied with my own skills, as I'm sure all authors feel; but we work through it, y'know? So, keep on working and I'm sure you'll reach your goal. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2010
    YES we have ourselves a ShikaNeji!!! I never really would have put this paring together and then I read a fiction in which Shika goes through a ton of trouble just to get Neji to notice him, by getting his friends to hire him and Neji for a "non mission mission" just so they can work together and Shika can slowly seduce Neji, I don't remember the name of the fic right off the top of my head, but anyway that fiction sold me on this pairing....I'm so glad you are going to work with them as a couple...even if poor Shika is having to wait for Neji to come around.

    I still dont' understand why the captain can't have relations with anyone ...what will happen with Naru when Sasuke takes command? Does being his beloved not give him some kind of exception to the rule? I mean couldn't Naru as his beloved stay with him at all times even in the cabin? Or am I assuming that Naru is his beloved with out that ceremony having taken place yet? I thought the fact that Sasuke gave him the plaque made him his beloved...I think I'm a bit confused...
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  • From cynaga on January 30, 2010
    It just gets better and better. It's so good that it doesn't even matter to me that the characters are Naruto anymore ~ just the story is more than enough,,,
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 30, 2010
    i can hardly wait to see Neji's reaction to the Lab
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 30, 2010
    Thanks for updating :)
    That rejection by Neji was like being dropped in a cold lake >.> Totally cold rofl
    I was so amazed when Shino spoke to Shika ^_^ I love Shino :)
    And did Neji really like Hinata that way?
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  • From Prism0467 on January 30, 2010
    *claps feverishly*

    I REMAIN IN AWE.

    No wonder your muse was so insistent.
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  • From Halskr on January 28, 2010
    I have to say, I would follow this story even if you only updated rarely. It is that good. As far as being out of character, I don't have a problem with it since once a story diverges from the manga the characters would change. The only time OOC becomes a problem is when the chracterization doesn't fit the world created by the author.Your characters are believable with the background and setting you have given them.

    The last chapter does confuse me. I don't quite understand the reason behind the ambush or why ships seem to randomly declare their loyalty. Its not explained very well. I am glad that we get to see Sasuke take some decisive action. Up to this point Sasuke has been a follower and it is hard to imagine him restoring this uchiha empire unless he grows a pair and stands up for himself some.

    The last part was priceless though. The horror of not having sex for 42 days! It's funny considering where Sasuke started in this. Tsunade does have a mean side to her character. That part made the chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From nivell on January 28, 2010
    Great battle scene!!! Felt like I was watching Star Wars or something.=)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2010
    Thank you for continuing this story. Looking forward to updates when ever you post. Hope you have fun working on your other projects.
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