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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on February 07, 2010
    I'm smiling as I say "Here you go spoiling me again" That was wonderful! Forgive me if I sounded like I was complaning. No other chapter left me feeling like I needed more like that last one. I love this story and where you're taking us! Plus a Satarday and Sunday update! That calls for a 'Yea Baby' Thank you ^_^
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 07, 2010
    lol Asuma is so funny. I like his friendship with Kakashi :)
    Will Neji ever fully admit he's a Hyuuga? Will Haku stay with them? So many questions >.>
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  • From Prism0467 on February 07, 2010
    So they went at Shikamaru to lure out Neji. Hm...

    Lots of dealing with the past in this latest chapter. Their courage at moving on is inspiring. The emotional struggle translates effectively.

    The tender moment between Asuma and Kakashi will remain in my memory. It's beautiful.

    Everybody is all about Naruto now: the crew, Konohamaru, etc. I wonder how this will play out in the story.


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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2010
    "That Sasuke-san is like saying a blackhole is badly lit" best line of the whole chapter...a great chapter once again...thank you for another quick update...I love the weekend because I know you will be updating almost daily on Friday,Sat, and Sun...LOVE IT!!
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  • From Halskr on February 07, 2010
    I am glad you are so addicted to this have kept updating. I really like where you are taking these characters. I cant wait to see if Konohamaru joins the crew. It will be good for Naruto to see what he was like when he was cat. Although, at this rate Konohamaru is gonna have it easy or hard servicing just Ibiki and Jaraiya.

    I am hoping that Haku stays. I want him to be reunited with his love, but I will miss him when he leaves the crew. Are they going to move to a mother ship? I dont imagine the Silver leaf can hold many more people. You have really given us an idea of it size. I just got the impression that it wasn't that big of a ship.

    Now if I have this right. Sasuke is wearing his mother's ring and his father's while Naruto is wearing a ring that originally belonged to Jaraiya? Or is Sasuke wearing his mom's while Naruto is wearing Sasuke's dad's?

    Thank for writing and sharing this.
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  • From RyuEarth on February 06, 2010
    What happened to Kisame?

    And I hope that Haku and Zabuza join the crew and I loved the way that Naruto handled the problem!

    Thanks for the update! =)
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  • From ANON - Boo on February 06, 2010
    I'm very upset that you have me checking this site constantly for updates on this universe of yours and the crew you have created...I have a job y'know...unbelievable writing, a storyline that is incredibly exciting, and characters that I want desperately to meet and talk to...I love books, I love reading, I love authors that pull you in..shake you up..and then never let you go..I would buy your books based on this story alone..I don't even want to think about what I'll do when this fiction of yours ends...Thanks ever so much for giving it to us. :)
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  • From roro237 on February 06, 2010
    I loved it! But I felt like this chapter was over to soon,cut off. Ok you have spoiled me and I'm having trouble with a short chapter sorry:) I'll go back and reread it and that way it will be twice as long!(no giggling at that) I love your story read you next time ^_^
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  • From ANON - morlana on February 06, 2010
    Ah Naru chan has grown up to be such a protector. What a clifhanger for me, but I guess they did right, respect the unknown.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 06, 2010
    1. Was it Fugaku who gave the ring to Jiraiya?

    2. Stop looking at Shikamaru's arse. That belongs to Neji.

    3. Oh, hell no--they went after Shikamaru?

    4. Naruto is the friggin' MAN.

    5. Mannah, watch your tenses.

    6. I love you for pumping these chapters out so fast.

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  • From cynaga on February 06, 2010
    I hang on your every wonderful word. =)
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  • From ANON - Colette on February 06, 2010
    Hi!
    I'm here, making use of the new possibilities ;)
    I was so expecting this chapter and the meeting! You have given us just a little of it, but it only have increased my curiosity, jeje. In addition, Konohamaru point of view, as an outsider of the crew, was interesting.
    And now, the ashamed confession: it wasn't until Asuma and Konohamaru appearances that I didn't remember that Hiruzen was the surname of Sarutobi, the Sadaime Hokage. A question related to it, Asuma isn't here his son as he is in the original? See you soon!



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  • From arabuzumaki on February 06, 2010
    I applaud the way Naruto handled the situation. Shika's so hot he can start a war ^_^
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  • From ANON - vb on February 06, 2010
    I loooooove this story!!! LOVE IT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nivell on February 05, 2010
    Ooh, you brought in Asuma! I like the guy..and was Konohamaru such a brat that he and Sasuke didn't get along with each other? I can just imagine it..
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