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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From Halskr on February 15, 2010
    Thanks for the quick updates. I think the whole getting settled in bit is interesting while everyone is trying to redefine their roles. I take it the crew will be back in space in the future.

    As far as cat suggestions, there are two minor characters from filler arcs. Memna was a shinobi that became very good friends with Naruto who died from filler anime episodes after Sasuke leaves but before Naruto goes with Jariaya.

    Then there is Sora, a character from a filler arc in Shippuden. He was from fire temple and was experimented on by his dad. He was given some of the Kyuubi's chakra which almost made him a jinchuriki like Naruto. At the end of the arc he lost the kyuubi chakra and went on his way, so you wouldn't have to make him a hybrid.

    Thanks for writing and sharing this
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2010
    oh wait on second thought prism has a good idea with kimmi....yeah he was beautiful and totally hot.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 15, 2010
    My vote is for either Kimimaro Kaguya or Menma from the filler. Kimimaro because of his rare beauty and his fierce sense of loyalty and Menma because he, too, plays that (ocarina?) weird instrument. Additionally, Menma is a little blue-eyed blond so he'd be a weird amalgam of Naruto and Sasuke. Don't know if that's a vote for or against him catting for Uchiha; you're the boss. ^_^

    Thank you for soliciting input. I am enraptured in your tale and honored by the opportunity to contribute to it.
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  • From roro237 on February 15, 2010
    I like the idea of Inari. I know you'll pick the best candidate for the job:) As always I loved the chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2010
    Why not take one of the Akatsuki members and make him cat Deidara, and Sasori, where both beautiful, and I don't know that you have mentioned them.

    This is your fiction so you can grow your character and use them however you want. Sai is sexy as hell, but he looks too much like Sasuke, I would love to see Sasori in this fiction I have always thought he was almost as hot as the grown up Gaara.. Another character that is sexy as hell is the new character Ukataka from the most recent anime episodes, he is the guy that blows the deadly bubbles....he is really good looking also looks a bit like Sasuke, but has a much leaner physiche. Hope these suggestions help you some.
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  • From ANON - Zannie on February 15, 2010
    Ah, hello, my suggestion would be not to limit yourself to male only characters. You have already in a previous chapter (the one with Rin settling in) pointed out that they may well recuit more women. I would put forward fiesty characters like Temari, Tenten or Ino. (Please, I beg and plead, not Sakura or Hinata. Although you have already used Hinata indirectly, so you probably would nt use her anyway.)

    If you stick to male only cats I think you will run out of Naruto characters.

    Eh, well, thats my suggestion, it may be taken or leaven, spiced or sweetened with season-its your story after all!


    Please continue to write this story. I enjoy it very much. The story is fresh and original, the character traits well thought out.
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  • From NarutoVixin on February 15, 2010
    Inari or Udon also we do need to bring the girls in soon im kinda missing them lol
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  • From ANON - Kaliu6-san on February 15, 2010
    I read a fanfiction recently - it was called Triste with Wave or smt similar - there Konohamaru and Inari bacame boyfriends and they kinda fit well in my oppinion. So I think Inari would be a good cat, i believe he has potential and a common admiration towards Naruto could make him and Konohamaru bond even if not sexually. I also think he would be good because he has background info as well as missing pieces in his story which you can fill as you want. (I'm sure you'd do a great job at that).

    Another suggestion would be (although you said you wouldn't want a girl cat) to use Amaru from Naruto Shippuuden Movie 3: Bonds - she's a tomboy, so she'd be able to cope with being a cat and she's also valuable because she's a medic. It would also strengthen the idea that the New Uchiha is not gender favoring. All this if you feel like experimenting that is. ;)

    As for Gaara, wouldn't he be a great fighter? He'd be a good rival to Konohamaru (if he manages not to shit his pants XD) and would really put him to the test. Speaking of Gaara, ever consider Kankurou? Don't have any specific ideas about him, just reminding you of his existance.

    Hope all this would be of some help, I'd be honored if any of my ideas was accepted, cuz I really love your story so far! Good luck with the brainstorming!
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  • From ANON - Colette on February 15, 2010
    Buf, that Klennethon guy is really creepy. I now that Orochimaru is shit and Itachi crazy and all that jazz, but he is the one that had gave me the worst vibes. The words "unique", "collection" and "person" together are a very bad combination.
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  • From RyuEarth on February 15, 2010
    Chapter 40 was so good! XD

    I loved everything about it! Thanks so much! ^^
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  • From ANON - Nivell on February 14, 2010
    Oh oh, there is trouble up ahead! I love how unnerved the Uchiha fighters are towards Sasuke's screams and moans during sex. I find it cute how they worship Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - morlana on February 14, 2010
    Hi, loving the story. I was intrigued by the references to Sasuke telling Haku that he can see Iruka raising his children and Iruka saying in a few standards about seeing Naru surrounded by his own children. Then this last chapter when Sasuke said he was too young to raise children and Naru's non reaction.

    Does this mean at one point that Naru's possessiveness will have to abate in order for Sasu to have more than one child?

    Pertaining to the 'Sasuke is man only and Naru is sasuke only

    How will they each father children? Unless it'll be a fertilization method. And if so, will a female be involved or a test tube? Are they going to discuss it? Or will Oro capture them and cause one or both to be able to have children?
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  • From roro237 on February 14, 2010
    OMG! What can I say I haven't already said? Your story is the bomb! I want to watch it on TV or DVD! I love every word! I'm one of the crew in each chapter. Usually Naruto or Sasuke:) The visual you descripe is wonderful! You're spoiling me on the weekends with chapters. You know what I have to shout out 'Yea Baby' love-n it ^_^
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  • From ANON - boo on February 14, 2010
    I'm on the edge of my seat constantly with this story..its so good..I love how Shikamaru is developing..all of the characters are facinating, I'm also a little worried about K and O being introduced to the story..so suspenseful. :)
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  • From Prism0467 on February 14, 2010
    Oh, shit.

    Well, now we have a better idea about what Shikamaru was up to, the tactician that he is.
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