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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Nivell on February 16, 2010
    I read your other reviewer's suggestions about using Inari and I looked up his image. OMG what a cutie! If you do use him, it'd be great if he and Konohamaru grow up together and eventually become loovers. =)
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  • From ANON - Nivell on February 16, 2010
    Other than Sai, I don't see anyone else being attractive enough to cat, lol. Gaara yes, but like you said, he might turn into a psychotic cat. How about Suigetsu? Think the boy has too many teeth though.
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  • From sonotgoingthere on February 16, 2010
    For the cat -- You could use Inari, from the Wave arch. He's someone who would clash and come together with the characters, IMHO
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  • From RyuEarth on February 16, 2010
    For chapter 41: that newswoman has no ethics, unfortunatly, usually they have more manners and better ethics, though you portrayed the ones that don't, which is true because there are those out there that are bad... ^^;;;

    And I really liked the part with Shikamaru asking Iruka for advice! I enjoyed that because it shows that he still has much to learn and Iruka is somebody who you can go and talk to and he can help all that he can! It is so sweet! XD

    Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2010
    gaara is my fav...he gets my vote and i love your story so much
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  • From ANON - boo on February 16, 2010
    Found his name!! Kimimaro..and he is introduced in episode 119 of Naruto..he's only in it for a couple of episodes but in Shippuden one of the characters on Sasuke's group (JODY?) the big redhead has memories of him too. He's kind of sadly devoted to orchimaru as Haku was to Zabuto...anyways you might like him..he stuck in my head just like haku did. :)
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  • From ANON - boo on February 15, 2010
    There was one character, he fought gaara and lee and had all the weird bones, I can't remember his name though..he was very pretty and if orchimaru hadn't of got to him he would of made a character much like haku..i'm gonna have to find his name..
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  • From Kitling25 on February 15, 2010
    I have to let you know that this is the best story I have ever read on this site. For your question, I agree with some of the other reviewers that Utakata may be a good choice. I like your idea of Inari. Here are a few other suggestions:
    1. Idate - He is Ibiki's younger brother. He appears is some filler episodes in Part 1.
    2. Ranmaru - He is the young boy that hung around with Raiga of the seven swordsmen.
    3. Yukimaru - From Part 2, he had some kind of connection with the Sanbi. Naurto helped him find a home with Guren.

    I know you said you wanted males only but you might try one of the more fiesty girls that another reviewer suggested. I can see Temari in that spot, maybe even Tenten.
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  • From ahmenet on February 15, 2010
    If you are playing with ages try Kankuro. He gained a big following after the three year gap when he got poisoned trying to save Gaara. And he's good looking, kinda like Kiba. Plus it can always be fun that he plays with puppets.

    But aside from the suggestion, I have really enjoyed this story. I love the way you write it and I've been captivated by this world you put so much thought into. I look forward to each chapter and hope you enjoy writing this as much as I've enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - Ry on February 15, 2010
    Have you considered the possibility of bringing a member of Hebi (such as Suigetsu or Juugo) in as a cat or something else? I know they aren't from Konoha, but they are somewhat ridiculously loyal to Sasuke (Juugo especially). Though to be honest, I like the idea of the two of them coming in as a new breed of Uchiha elite or Sasuke's old classmates or something.

    Kiba wouldn't be too bad for the role since he is very similiar to Naruto in a lot of ways and it is Naruto who encourages Konohamaru in canon. Akamaru could come in later as a stray or a genetically altered animal developed by Shino's family, perhaps. Or hell, Tsunade could win Akamaru in a bet and drop him off at the compound as a housewarming gift. XD

    The only other men from Konoha that I can think of at the moment are Hayate and Raidou, which could possibly work, but then again you would have to alter ages and make Hayate healthier than he generally is.

    But aside from all that, I have to say how much I love this story (though I must admit the last couple of chapters have been a little lacking on the acting, but the logistics of everything does need to be worked out). There a couple chapters that could use some proof reading, but other than that I have no complaints. This is the only story I can think of that I automatically read a chapter twice whenever a new one is posted. I am really looking forward to see where this going!
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  • From ANON - morlana on February 15, 2010
    What about the character in Root that Sai called brother? He died so his character is a complete blank. How about changing Tayuya into a male? Unless you have a role for her. Or the son that hit naru in the head with a dart, I think that was a side movie they had to escort a caravan. You can also change moegi into a male. Inari would be good, then you'd have two vying for Naruto's attention and competing against each other. Inari and Konoha hero worship him. Doesn't Shino have a younger brother?

    Well I can't think of anything else.if I do i'll review again.
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  • From ANON - blasterblurby on February 15, 2010
    I do like the idea of Kiba "catting" (what an oxymoron) but I do agree that having akamaru as an hybrid could make Naruto less special unless akamaru was one of those less than stellar hybrids and could then make Naruto seem even rarer amoung his own kind.

    Sai (or maybe the guy who used the bone blood limit, you know Orochimaru's goon, he was really hot but died too soon) might be good as in he is a spy who is pretending to cat so he could relay information to any of the two villains you introduced in chapter 41. Some conflict within the crew would really spice it up. (atleast I think)

    and if you ever use Lee you should totally make him a clone of Gai (he really is XD).


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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 15, 2010
    Ibiki has a younger brother, though I don't recall his name. He was in a filler episode with a relay race and stuff. And have you considered Suigetsu or Juugo? I'm guessing you need them to be around 14 or so, and I'm not too sure how old they are, but they could work in a pinch, I think.

    Btw, I really like this story. It's very detailed and unique, and I really like your Sasuke. I can't wait to see where this goes. Please keep up the great work!
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 15, 2010
    There are so many choices :)
    Hayate - He can be a young friend/cousin of Genma's. I do think they look alike.
    Inari is a good choice as well. May be he can be around the same age as Konohamaru.
    Udon and his runny nose will take some getting used to, even if you cure his permanent cold he's an uber nerd >.> Besides Shika is already the brain of the fic :)
    The new guy in the recent filler Utakata, he looks like Sai but has emotional issues when it comes to trust. (He may have issues with swearing to Uchiha)
    There is Sora who sorta had Nine tails power. But you don't want to infringe on Naruto's uniqueness. But if you remember that filler you can incorporate it well. Sora can have genes like Naruto that don't agree with him and they get extracted by Rin... (is that too much??)
    Kiba is a good choice as well, Naruto will have a best friend besides Shika. Hopefully Shino will take a liking to Kiba ^_^ (I just don't want Shino to be lonely lol)

    This is my longest review ever >.> I'll give more ideas later if you still want to hear more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2010
    First let me tell you I love this story!!

    As for cat ideas...how about Tsunade younger brother....Ibiki's younger brother (I think he went to work for a mob boss)...or the young leader from Waterfall Village??

    Sorry I don't remember any of their names.

    Keep up the good work.

    I will also email this.
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