Click Here!

Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From arabuzumaki on February 20, 2010
    I'm so eager to see who the new charge is ^_^ I hope Shino wasn't the cause of Kono's breakdown :/
    Report Review

  • From Prism0467 on February 19, 2010
    So this Klennethorn guy, he wants to collect them as a couple?! What?

    Is the kid on the ship going to be a new cat? I can barely wait to find out.

    LOL Ibiki is a freaking beast. And Naruto is like a carnival ride! Isn't Sasuke the lucky one? And WTF is up with Shino, LOL?!

    Great chapter.
    Report Review

  • From roro237 on February 19, 2010
    This chapter was so breath taken to me:) The wonderful care of Naruto for Sasuke. The sweet side of Sasuke letting Naruto hug up Konohamaru. I loved it! I'm very curious about the meeting? I can't wait to see what this guy wants. I couldn't figure out his riddle?! ^_^
    Report Review

  • From Prism0467 on February 17, 2010
    Sasuke is my favorite Naruto character. Indulge his insistence all you like.

    Shino's a cheeky monkey, isn't he, LOL? We have to get this man a date. I just love him so much.

    Please keep up the excellent work.




    Report Review

  • From roro237 on February 17, 2010
    Ok for point number 2: PLEASE DO NOT culled because it is taking up too much space. Whatever you've been doing PLEASE DO NOT STOP! Your story is fantastic!! I would think we all like sentiment:)
    3: Who ever need time in the chapter is fine. 4: PLEASE DO NOT WORK MORE SLOWLY! I can't believe I'm the only one who likes getting spoiled with chapters up like you do it????:) If it aint broke done fix it.(PLEASE) You're in the zone of writting and I'm in the zone of loving it:) You know what I have to say next 'Yea Baby' I wish I had eyes like a english teacher. Thank goodness they don't check me for spelling or sentences structure. Or they would delete me before you even ead it:) By the by I loved this chapter ^_^
    Report Review

  • From Dorkchic on February 17, 2010
    I realize you have probably already received a ton of suggestions for possible cats, but I wanted to suggest Izumo. There is something so terribly uke about him.
    Report Review

  • From NarutoVixin on February 17, 2010
    i can not edit ether and if im reading many chapters i cant always remember were i saw the mistakes tho i can spot them i cant spell or anything i wish i could beta but im not that good
    Report Review

  • From ANON - eris on February 17, 2010
    Whatever, I love everything and the mistakes are generally small at best. Just wanted to say I love the story and to keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ryn on February 17, 2010
    One of the great things about such a public forum for posting writing is thaht you can use it as almost an in-between state for your writing. Basically all your reviewers are your "post-posting" helpers and since nothing is printed yet editing fits in well. Your quality is good, your posting is fast (which I adore), and your charecters have personality with out just forcing each name into each chapter. On a side note I like your Shika. I hope you keep having fun with this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2010
    I love this story and honestly Inari is the first person that cames to mind as an additional cat to work with Konahamaru. They both idolize Naruto and I can see them fighting to get his attention and praise.
    Report Review

  • From XSapphirexXxRoseX on February 16, 2010
    If your looking for characters not from leaf then you have Inari for the Waterfall Village, you also have Ibiki's younger brother Idate. Looking forward to you next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Courtney on February 16, 2010
    Here are some suggestions

    Kimimaro one of Orochimaru spare bodys that he sends out to get Sasuke but he dies,

    Sora is a monk who appeared in the first filler arc of Shippûden and that had some of the nine-tailed foxs chakra so he was a little bit like Naruto but you can leave that out, and

    You all should remember Sumaru from that filler that everyone liked the Natsuhiboshi Lullaby Lyrics.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kimberly on February 16, 2010
    Been loving your story, its always interesting to read an AU and see what the writer does with the characters.
    If you are looking for characters that can possibly cat I think Inari is a really good choice, Udon is definitely not. Other obscure choices are Nawaki, Tsunades brother, or maybe Idate, Ibikis brother in the anime. Kankuro may also be a choice.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shinningvixen on February 16, 2010
    My opinion right off the top is Inari.
    You said it yourself about Sai that you don't really want another emotionally damaged cat running around.
    He is one of the very few characters that actually seems to be well rounded out. And you get to keep the age group right to Konohamaru.

    Although its tough for me, I would absolutely love to see Gaara in your story. He is probably my all time favorite character.
    I'm not here, hopefully you have plans to bring him in later.

    Good luck in your choice, I hope my opinion might have been helpful in any way.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SEt on February 16, 2010
    you could use kiba and akamaru, but make them both human and twins? btw love your story!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!