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By : mannahpierce
  • From RyuEarth on March 07, 2010
    Awesome update! XD

    I wonder if Kakashi and Iruka will have a kid? I really really hope that they could! ^^

    Thanks for the update! =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2010
    I shed tears over this chapter!!! The bits about Naru's childhood made me cry.

    I really do understand Naru's desire for a Suke Shika baby, they are his two most precious people. How wonderful that he wants a child that combines the best of Sasuke and Shikamaru. I don't think the Neji that you have created would have had a problem with it if Sasuke would have come clean they are all so devoted to him and Naruto that it would have been hard to say no.

    I've been surprised with the insinuations that Sasuke and Shikamaru have feeling for eachother.

    I don't think that there are any sort of romantic feelings between Shika and Sasuke, I think their shared feelings are the ones they both have for The fox boy. Shikamaru loves Sasuke but I don't think that he loves him in a romantic way,or at least I did not get that idea from the very beginnig of this story. If Shika is in love with anyone other than Neji I think it would be with Naruto. He has invested more time and emotion into his relationship with the fox boy than with any other.

    I think that he appreciates the respect and trust that Sasuke shows in his decision making and genius, and the fact that he made him "the voice in his ear", but I don't see how all of a sudden people think he is in love with Sasuke.

    I hope that you don't make Sasuke some kind of "Mary" that everyone falls for, I mean yeah they can love him as a great leader, who is devoted to his people and family, but I hope you don't turn this into some fiction where they are all going to fall in love with him in a romantic way....that is just so unrealistic in my opinion, and it would take away from such a great story.

    Thanks again for sharing your work with us, really enjoyed this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2010
    U did a wonderful job on this chapter dont doubt that... the idea of uchiha babies and the revealing of some of narutos childhood loved it... a shika/sasu baby was a nice twist an uchiha with shikas brain very nice ... cant wait for gaara to arrive should be very interesting
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  • From Prism0467 on March 07, 2010
    That Neji is sharp, isn't he? He smelt the bullshit way before anyone else did, and he let Sasuke know it. I love the way they silently challenged each other, even if Sasuke was going to be the winner.

    So...first Klennethorn, and then Temari. They seem to understand the situation with Shikamaru pretty well. Sasuke is like a kid in a candy store--he has the best of everything at his disposal. I see now how that is beginning to affect those in allegiance to him.

    I'm not sure that I understand Shikamaru's feelings. I know that he feels something for Sasuke, but I'm not sure how it is different from what he feels for Neji. He is submitting to both men, albeit in different ways. For someone who is inherently dominant, he submits very easily.

    Anyway, it's some triangle.

    I found this latest chapter to be most thought-provoking. I recognize that you could have ventured into a number of different directions, so I empathise when you state that it was difficult to find your way. For what it's worth, I think you did an excellent job. You have a wonderful ability to balance the physical and emotional aspects of the interplay between the characters with a cerebral plot; not many can pull it off. I don't think you need me to tell you how powerful what you have published here is. The icing on the cake is that so many of the readers seem to share my enthusiasm, if your hit count is any indication.

    And again, for your quick updates, I thank you. It is most appreciated.


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  • From cynaga on March 07, 2010
    Ch 53 may have been one of the hardest chapters for you but it was also one of the best. It was full of warmth and love.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 07, 2010
    I know it doesn't mean to be, but this story makes me depressed with all the trials and tribulations that this spacer crew has to go through. However, if there are this many people all crowded together, with their backgrounds there are bound to be problems and that I think is what makes this story part of the GREATS. I can't wait till you update again. I think we are finally getting into the cresendo of the story, nowhere near the end, yet, but still moving toward the even more shocking bits. I don't want Naruto to die, but we all can't live forever; cause' really there is no happily ever after, but we can get close.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2010
    I'm really looking forward to the genetically engineered babies....I'm glad that you will be giving them and opportunity to know Naruto, but I have to plead that you not kill him...please find a way for him to survive. I read Constellations last month and when Naru died in that fiction....I cried so many buckets of tears it wasn't funny I really don't think I have it in me to read another fiction in which Naruto dies.


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  • From RyuEarth on March 05, 2010
    I liked how Iruka treated Tayuya! =)

    Thanks for the update!
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  • From NarutoVixin on March 05, 2010
    i love how you are making this work for them all also i love the 7 kisses
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  • From Prism0467 on March 05, 2010
    Sasuke's a persuasive little something, isn't he? And what is up with Temari? Jealous much? She can't have Shikamaru, he's Neji's.

    I can't wait for Gaara to finally meet Naruto!
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  • From roro237 on March 05, 2010
    I admit I had to go back to 29:( Or maybe I just went back to reread the 'Shower':) I confess I had forgotten. But while I was there I did reread 29 thanks:) Shika that sneaky devil hacking! Ir-chan was wonderful as usual! My favorite part was Sasuke watching Naruto with the children. He can't help himself. He has to have kids with Naruto one why or another. Have I told you lately how much I love YOUR story? I love your ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on March 04, 2010
    I do not envy the path that Neji is about to embark on. I certainly wish he and Shikamaru the best.

    I am praying that Temari's appearance in these most recent chapters is an indication that we will be introduced to her brothers very soon. I am missing Gaara very much here.

    I am happy that Iruka got the most valuable ring that was available. He deserves it.
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  • From roro237 on March 04, 2010
    Very interesting! I loved it!! Showing the inter works of the day. Helping Neji solving his problems. Ir-chan picking out a ring:) Plus it looks like the Heros might have their first job!!! ^_^
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  • From RyuEarth on March 04, 2010
    I love the little parts about the rings! Haku's reaction was so cute! And Iruka's choice was priceless, even more so when he doesn't know how much it is worth! XD

    I also hope that Haku and Rin will beable to help Neji and I like where the story is heading too! =)

    Thanks for the update!!! ^^
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  • From RyuEarth on March 03, 2010
    I feel extra happy every time you write a chapter with Kakashi and Iruka in it! I just love them so much! XD

    I just loved everything about this chapter basically! I loved the way that you described the girls, Temira and Tenten were rather funny too, like preditors almost lol.

    And I think that Tsunade and Jiraiya know about the ring as well, if not, I would love to know what he did that one time too (thoughts of it make my head spin more with half-assed ideas that don't shut up, not that I really want them too)...

    Anyway, I enjoyed the ending too! I love that Haku is growing into Iruka's shoes, that was so good!!!

    Thanks so much for the update! I can't stop saying that I loved it so much! ^^
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