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By : mannahpierce

From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 17, 2010
I know that I am probably late with who should be Gaara's but with the symbiote making people superhuman I think it should be Lee. Just my opinion
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From meowkuu2 on April 17, 2010
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!! That was amazing!!! I'm torn between wanting to help Itachi vs. him getting what he deserves...then...Sauske is taller than him??!!! Didn't see that coming....what's gonna happen to Kiba and the minks???? *waves hand frantically*
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From roro237 on April 17, 2010
WoW!!! That was awesome!!!!
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From ANON - achillona on April 17, 2010
wow! very intense! wonder if Sasuke really does slit Itachi's throat?

~excellent as always!
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From cynaga on April 17, 2010
Holy shit! How do you do it? Go directly to the nearest Hollywood studio and become screenwriter of the next biggest hit movie or tv series!!!

Action, emotion, plot and PERFECT pacing.
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From nivell on April 17, 2010
NOOO Don't kill Itachi!!! I'm starting to really like him and I love how he's the leader of his minky crew!! Seriously, that scene where he and Kiba are training the little minkies? SOOO Cutee!!!! I'm sad that some of them died (are they actually children human/mink hybrids) and that Orochimaru and Kabuto perverted their creations and abused them. I hope that Itachi's minkies will stay with his crew!
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From Prism0467 on April 17, 2010
HOLY SHIT!
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From ANON - cat YS on April 15, 2010
I just love Kimimaro. It would be awesome if you could put him in your story.
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From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2010
I love you story and am eagerly awaiting updates.
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From meowkuu2 on April 15, 2010
I didn't see that coming.....I did not see that coming...like...how is Itachi gonna react to when he sees sasuke in person..if he even does...wow...
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From ANON - LadyAnocsona on April 14, 2010
I love Naruto Fanfiction,and Naru/Sasu pairing, but got a little burnt out on it. The other day I was bored and descided to check out one of my fav pairings, and ran across your story. I wasnt going to read it at first, (I dont usually like furturistic stories)but the amount of chapters was what drew me. You had obviously put a lot of work into the story to write so much. So I decided to give it a try. By the end of the first chapter I was hooked. I couldnt stop reading it. While it took me a few days to read all 74 chapters; never was i dissatisfied with the time spent. You are a very gifted writer, and you have managed to restore my interest in Naruto Fanfiction. I thank you for hard work that you put into your story. I eagarly look forward to reading more when you post it.

Thank you again

LadyAnocsona
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From Prism0467 on April 14, 2010
BRAVO!!!!

Ding-dong, the witch is dead! In canon Itachi only cut off Orochi-chan's hand, looks like he got to finish the job in this fic! I guess it takes a devil to off one, eh? HAH!

I guess fanfiction is what happens when you're making other plans, yes?

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!

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From serenagold on April 14, 2010
You got to watch out for them fully developed characters. Once you've rounded out their personalities in your mind they disregard everything else you've got planned and take over. lol

Keep up the great work!
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From RyuEarth on April 14, 2010
This chapter was very breath taking! I am curious as to how Itachi will react to the truth that he doesn't remember and I wish that Kiba hadn't sent that message! DX

Thank you for the update! I hope that people stop bugging you for updates and you are able to concentrate on more important things like paying the internet bill and other bills... ^^;;;
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From Halskr on April 14, 2010
I am really glad Kiba snuck up on you. He is a close third when choosing my favorite Naruto characters with Sasuke and Naruto taking up positions 1 and 2. The plot thickens concerning Itachi. It will be interesting to see which direction you choose to take him: does he die tragic hero, is he redeemed, or does he fall back into madness? Of course I have my own personal favorite, but I have enjoyed where you have taken this, so I'll continue to trust in your judgement.

I do have a suggestion on updates. Dont post everything you write right away. Keep some of it back and build up a buffer of 4 to 5 chapters and make a schedule for posting that meets your needs and real life situation be that weekly, monthly, or every 6 weeks. This way you will have material to post without feeling the pressure of meeting a deadline. The story is awesome enough that I would even take just a couple updates a year and continue to follow it avidly. Just take a hiatus while you build up your advance chapters. Then when you figure out how much time you have to devote to this you can determine a posting schedule you are comfortable with.

And by all means don't fall into the trap that snares to many authors. You are under no obligation to us. You write for you own personal reasons and we are lucky to be invited along for the ride. It frustrating when a good story isn't finished and dropped by an author for whatever reason be it motivation, lack or interest, real life, etc. Juggling all of your commitments is difficult enough without adding to it by letting a piece of fanfiction become like a real life job. You aren't getting paid, and I do realize that if writing stops being enjoyable, authors tend to stop writing. So take however much time you need, and make sure you are happy and comfortable. Thanks for writing and inviting us into your world.

Halskr
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