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By : mannahpierce
  • From arabuzumaki on April 30, 2010
    Thinking of the theme I got from the babies' names, I was thinking of what the other theme should be.
    I was thinking along the lines of miracle as a theme since it is a miracle that they actually survived or are surviving enough to be born.
    I came up with -
    miracle - kyou or keseki
    hope - kitai
    joy - kietsu
    pure - kiyoraku
    reflection - kaisou
    image - shashou
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2010
    I enjoyed this chapter and am eagerly awaiting whatever you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2010
    i just read this for the first time i love it i cryed when you shortend narutos life span i cant wait for the next ch
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  • From Prism0467 on April 24, 2010
    Did you ever think there would be 76 chapters of this story? I can hardly believe it myself.

    It's a phenomenon.
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  • From ANON - morlana on April 24, 2010
    Hi, Thanks for updating. Was wondering will the hybrids have the same connection to Naruto as the children since they are not being comforted by his heartbeats. Will he and Kiba have an altercation so they know who is who in the canine world. I know Kiba is special but he is showing insubordination. Maybe they need to figure out that though he does have experience, he shouldn't be too dismissive. I do like that he'll have an aggressive relationship with Rin.
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  • From meowkuu2 on April 24, 2010
    OMG!!!!!!! I don't know what to think anymore!!! Suppose Itachi flips???? The minks???? The fox babies??? Why the hell is Kiba such an asshole? ( personally I wouldn't mind if someone brought him down a notch or two)...THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!! *HUGS*
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  • From ANON - Nivell on April 23, 2010
    I hope Sasuke won't kill Itachi! I find it quite sad that they had to pod the minkies so that they wouldn't become too attached to Itachi. To me, he's like their Mama! =)
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  • From getd0rky on April 23, 2010
    This is quite an epic ass tale! I love it. Everyone has a unique personality, and everytime I pick a favorite you have to go and make someone else lovable.

    And oh those poor boys. Nine babies!? I almost cried FOR them haha. Good thing they have a small village for a crew to help. Its funny and amazing how many chapters this story has so far and there's still quite a bit to go from what I can tell. Maybe have a Part 2? Just a thought.

    On a sidenote I've been dying to tell you about a song that everytime I hear I think about this story and the Uchiha empire. It's called 'The Royal We' by Silversun Pickups, I think you'd enjoy it ^_~
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  • From Prism0467 on April 23, 2010
    OMG I am so happy to see this chapter! I HAVE MISSED YOU!

    LOL I adore the way Kiba and Naruto are fussing over the babies. Kiba the wet nurse. It's too much, LOL!
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  • From roro237 on April 23, 2010
    Hey I missed you! I know it hasn't been that long it just feels like it has:) You had me cracking up at Sasuke thinking about Naruto can lick his own balls:) I'm still giggle at that part. That was so funny to me:) The title fit perfectly. Poor Sasuke stomach was churning will all the things a leader has on his shoulders. I think he's done well:) I loved this chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on April 23, 2010
    OMG YES WIN WIN WIN!!!

    You let him live. Things I loved

    1. Kiba...He is so adorable and I loved his interaction with Naruto
    2. Itachi..Still think he needs to be allowed to live I hope Haku decides to speak for him if only for Kisame's sake.
    3. Love the Minkies....how funny that they are already bonded to Tachi
    4. You Rock! I hope Kimimaro is one of the young men...I'm still holding out hope that he is Gaara's love interest...that would be sooo hot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2010
    OH MY gOD!!! How did I miss this update again??? I had to go looking for the story and sure enough I missed it....UGH...You left us with such an evil cliffy???

    *begs for Itachi's life on knees*.....Please don't kill him....

    I was never sure I wanted him dead maybe just in cryo or tanked for a long time....but now that he is Sane again...OMG...he is such a good character I've loved the last 2 chappies with him killing Oro and now back in the Uchiha fold. I hope someone else speaks up for him, he may not have completely redeemed himself, but he does deserve another chance to make things right. Oh man I'm so torn....again thanks for the update great chapter once again.
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on April 21, 2010
    hi,

    well I don't know how I manage to reach this chapter so fast (guest i'm glue on your story in my free time, bad me). To give my input for Gaara's mate (if not yet found):
    Itachi (i found him and Gaara a sexy pair): he is already a character in the story. Only problems with him if i understud well, he treats hybrid like things or possession. Plus, what he did to Sasuke, even if now he appears with amnesia.
    Kimmimaru (i have never read a story with him and Gaara as a pair): antagonist true, but only due to fate. As a see in the original Naruto, he suffer the same fate as Haku. They reach to the only ones who show any interest in them.
    Keep with the good work, you can do it.

    read you later :)
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  • From Prism0467 on April 18, 2010
    I'm sorry, I have to review chapter 75 AGAIN. Because I had a mini-orgasm over that final scene where Sasuke was standing like a pissed-off warrior over his brother with a sharp knife at his throat. OMFG that was YUMMY! Itachi submitted! Itachi, the man who survived a bull-style gang-rape and then turned around and killed all the men and their leader before he was even fully healed! If by some twist of fate he manages to survive additional folly, he would be quite a formidable opponent to anyone who sought to harm Sasuke. To think of them fighting side-by-side--OMFG I just had another one!

    LOL I love how a full-blood Uchiha was kidnapped, not because he was Itachi Uchiha, but because someone wanted Kisame. Mannah, I love you for the way you demonstrate that EVERYONE in this fic has their worth, not just Uchiha. And I applaud you once again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2010
    I had put off reading the rest of this story because I could not take the cliff hanger you left after Kabuto's raid. Now I have gotting caught up and I must say I love that you have add Kiba to the story and I hope he will join Uchia, I'm not dissapointed in what you have done to Itachi and personally I hope that if he gains his memory back he will not became the same person he once was. You've done it once more though left me with a cliffy thats going to have me continously looking for an update that I will not have the patiences to let biuld up.

    I love your story and I adore your writing style and capability, I hope this will not be the only story you share with us.
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