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Reviews for In the cold of space you find the heat of suns

By : mannahpierce
  • From bob665 on May 23, 2010
    Chapter 10 there are two points I think are worth mentioning in this chapter. The first was that Shikamaru pointed out that there was a downside to the whole cat relationship. When he was in that position his relationships with a crew member was strained because of something he was told to do. It shows the power imbalance and is interesting to see. The other thing that I felt was emphasized by this chapter is I don't know exactly how old Shikamaru is? In the original series they're basically the same age given a few months, but that doesn't seem to be the case here.
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  • From bob665 on May 23, 2010
    So, I'm enjoying this story, but regarding the caller I think you should have shown and not simply told.
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  • From bob665 on May 23, 2010
    So usually I wouldn't look at an AU, but my curiosity got the better of me. This story sort of reminds me of one I had of my own, but you seem to be carrying it off with greater skill than I ever could. Your dialogue is pretty good and while from what I've seen so far you could stand to put a little more description into your stories it's a damn good read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2010
    OMG ItachiHakuKisame...yes that is a wonderful solution.

    What an incredible turn of events I would have never ever been able to conceive of that scenerio...Wonderful....I'm sure some people will be all like WTF?

    But I LOVE IT!! What a wonderful thing for Haku to do....if this does not show his love for Kisame nothing will...Kisame is one lucky Shark....Itachi and Haku both love him.

    I just grin like and idiot every time you have Sasu screaming his head off in ecstasy like seriously the boy is soooo loud....poor Itachi..those scenes are just funny to me.

    I also think that Kimimaro is being and idiot, I hope Gaara ends up falling for sweet Lee...Kimi is being a biotch! Acting like a Diva....what's his problem really?

    I have to tell you that my favorite scene was how the crew reacted when Itachi and Haku danced the Tango....man I wish some awesome artist would put some art out for this fiction...Ugh if I could draw that would be one scene I would do.

    Anyway thanks for the update....your spoiling us rotten and I love it!!!
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  • From arabuzumaki on May 22, 2010
    Every time I try to picture Itachi and Haku dancing the tango my brain malfunctions. How in the world can you picture something so amazingly epic.
    The threesome was an amazing idea. I wouldn't have wanted Ita-chan to be left out :)
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  • From ANON - cynaga on May 22, 2010
    My hero~! You saved Itachi. And with a Tango. Go you~!!!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 22, 2010
    I never thought I would see the day when Haku had a change of heart over Itachi. Itachi, the man who made him dress up like Sasuke when they fucked, and who cut his throat for no reason and left him for dead. This is a miracle.

    I have a stunningly sexy visual in my head of Itachi dancing the tango with Haku. Thank you for putting it there!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 21, 2010
    Sasuke has a son.

    w;oeirj[oqw4itj;lskfdg;lsafngl;kqejrtpougokjfg;lklkjlfjsdljfasl;kjf it's so damned CUTE!

    I can't imagine how difficult what Jiraiya ended up doing must have been for him. I don't know that I could have done the same in a similar situation.

    We have got to get Kiba laid!
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  • From roro237 on May 21, 2010
    I'm feeling pretty choked up right now:) That was good! ^_^
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  • From cynaga on May 21, 2010
    Do you think you would make this story available as a downloadable pdf file at some point? I'm sure we would all love to have it. Please consider it~! Thanks for your time and talent~!
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  • From cynaga on May 21, 2010
    The way you write Itachi and his story is incredibly moving and elegant.
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  • From Gaia77 on May 21, 2010
    Ok you've gone and made me cry. I love that Itachi is being given these chances to redeem himself. And I feel so bad for him but Haku is right. This story has really come along way and gets better and better with each update. =D Love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2010
    Man this chapter made me cry....good of Haku to speak of redemption...
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  • From meowkuu2 on May 21, 2010
    .......wow...i'm speechless..this is...really good...as always i wait for your next wonderful update
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  • From serenagold on May 20, 2010

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