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Reviews for Breath

By : yaoiismyantidrug
  • From ANON - Daga on November 15, 2013
    And if you read it... please come back with another story, you're work really stands out, you put so much emotions, meaning in oneshot story that makes them unforgettable, although I would like to read your multi chapter work as well.
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  • From ANON - Daga on November 15, 2013
    You keep amazing me with every story! I was always a big NaruSasu fan, because it's almost canon pairing with lots, lots of hints in manga. And somehow you made KakaSasu so believable for me! You've captured Sasukes personality so well that I'm thinking of course he doesn't need all Naruto's solemn speeches about friendship and bonds, Sasuke doesn't speak about emotions, he acts, and the most he can get from Naruto physically is a fight. So looking for what he needs could lead him to his "perverted" sensei.
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  • From TheVictorianMuse on June 20, 2012
    This was absolutely WONDERFUL! I really enjoyed how you captured their personalities! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Narutoad on June 24, 2010
    Hey! I wanted to know if you still had "A Tenuous Grasp" & "The Lucky Ones" online anywhere? Ive been looking around, but it took me forever to even find your AFF page. O_o
    But yeah. "A Tenuous Grasp" Is probably one of the best smutty fanficiton ive ever read! I read it a few years back and something made me think of it the other day. So if you still have it lying around anywhere I'd really like to read it again!!!!! Like... really badly!!!!

    Thanks! :D

    Your fellow Yaoi Addict.
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  • From ANON - Lila on December 19, 2009
    OMG!!!! I can't even handle how HOT that was...(Fans self)...Uhh what was i doing right feedback....I love you!!!!!...T_T Wait that not's really feedback...lets see alright fangirl moment time!!!!

    I absolutely adore your Sasuke and Kakashi!!!! This was an absolutely extreme and intense way for Sasuke to know that Kakashi trusted him, and have i mentioned hot!!!!...

    Alright and plenty of Kakashi Sasuke interaction in this, the sneaking through the window beginning absolutely something Sasuke would do and Kakashi would allow :)

    Let's see it wasn't too long but there are so many little nuiances that you do with the characters that when i go through and read it again i'm like how could i have missed that? So when Kakashi can't say more than "No one else" meaning he wouldn't have allowed anyone else to choke him like that...

    And Sasuke taking it to be a possessive statement of him not allowed to be with anyone else is just so...well perfect :)

    Then with Kakashi realizing his total misunderstanding of his student and the intense way he came to realize it is just way beyond awesome...Then Sasuke saying "Okay. You either." The statements are simple and straight to the point and the sheer amount of commitment is just amazing and how the hell do you do that?

    I mean i am very greatful that you can get inside their heads like that but i've tried to do that and it's sooo very hard and i've been with the Anime since the very beginning.....And trying to get inside their heads makes my head hurt because all i can see is Sauke with the wind flapping his shirt open and Kakashi(during the fight with the Akatsuki)being all vulnerable with his mask torn slightly...

    you know what i'll just call you yaoi_is_my_antidrug-sama :) Because you are just the awesomest? Greatest? The best writer ever!!!!!! :)

    You are an elite and i'm just gonna humbly await for the next story you create:)

    Have you considered doing another multi-chaptered fic?

    Alright i guess i should wrap this up...(Looks up and reads review)...I ramble alot and i think i already wrapped the review up a couple lines back (Shrugs non-chalantly) Meh once agin i am in Awe of your work and humbly await the next installment XD



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  • From ANON - beckbeck on December 18, 2009
    Oh, my. *fans face* Very, very hawt. Good to see you're back.
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  • From ANON - micah on December 16, 2009
    terribly hot. breathplay isn't one of my kinks, but the way you approached it as a psychological thing instead of physical made it blisteringly hot. and the imagery of sasuke's rolling hips - i could completely see it in my head, and it's ridiculously arousing. great job.
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  • From ANON - PotatoPancake on December 15, 2009
    How do you like your EGGS?
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  • From Prism0467 on December 15, 2009
    Where have you been?
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