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Reviews for A Darker World

By : bob665
  • From ANON - ttenandayo on February 11, 2012
    I find you write very... mindfully. Mindfully, but at the same time, naturally. You seem to have a practiced hand and exhibit much authority over your words...

    'Easy authority.' (I think that's what I mean to say.)

    It's impressive, you know.

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  • From bloodshound on January 15, 2012
    well, that's hopeful. no more children pimped out as punishment. danzo really was one sick prick.
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  • From ANON - Filka on October 19, 2011
    Really glad you're still continuing it. I can't wait to see Danzo overthrown!!! That bastard deserves it!!!! Orochimaru is a great plot twist! I like seeing all the characters in here!
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  • From bloodshound on October 18, 2011
    makes face.
    this is what i get for not checking back regular and often. still, xtra chappies to read are always fun.
    wow, things are really beginning to move now. I hope their plan works. I always thought Danzo was a sick bastard.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2011
    This is a fascinating story. Looking forward to how the story unfolds.
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  • From Carousel on August 29, 2011
    I finally caught up with all the chapters in this story. I must confess that I love it so. It is an original and well thought out plot with a moving storyline. I can't wait for future chapters.
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  • From serenagold on July 21, 2010
    ooOOooo Whats wrong with Naruto. Could the other boy be a jinchuriki? Maybe the boy's past history seems to parallel to his own?? Could Konohamaru's loose flirting with Inari have that big of an effect?

    Can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - narutolover289 on June 13, 2010
    i love ur story it just keeps getting better and better. hope to see the next chapter sooner^^
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  • From Alteegry on May 21, 2010
    Hi :)

    I really liked how you described both Konohamaru's point of view, and Naruto's thoughts as he witnessed the other two. Well, I liked that, but many other things (such as the "transformation training", which made me laugh but is realistic nonetheless).

    I don't really know what I should add, and I have a somewhat hard time putting my thoughts into words, but I just wanted to let you know I am still following your fictions ^^

    Thanks alot :)
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  • From serenagold on April 11, 2010
    "Yeah, that he is... its Konohamaru you have to look out for."

    Bwahahahahahahaa!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on April 04, 2010
    I think Konohamaru's becoming very Naruto-like. :)

    Keep up the good work! (And Happy Easter!)
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on March 24, 2010
    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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  • From serenagold on March 22, 2010
    I hope Konohamaru will be able to change his opinion of kids his own age, although knowing the kind of brat they'll be meeting up with.. lol

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From serenagold on February 21, 2010
    And once again we are graced with a glimpse as to how irresponsible Kakashi was as a sensei.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on February 08, 2010
    good chapter. i liked Naruto's defensiveness about konohamaru.

    also I like Jiraiya's horror at the two boy's closeness. I think his point of view wouldn't be so much "I hate all gays" rather than "how can you go gay with so many women around." lol Although his advice to Naruto is understandable precaution. Those two are sooooooo freaking young.
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