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Reviews for A Darker World

By : bob665
  • From serenagold on January 26, 2010
    Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on January 10, 2010
    YYYEEEEAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! Go Jiraiya!!!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 08, 2010
    ahh rescue now that tastes and sounds so sweet
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  • From ANON - Sneakyfox on January 02, 2010
    I think in all this time I've been reading this story I didn't realize that they were all that young. (Additional ick factory, lol. Poor kids.)

    I hope Naruto and Konohamaru manage to escape their tracker, although at this stage, it seems unlikely. Here's to hoping they encounter Jiraiya in the next village. Surely he could protect them. (Although knowing him, that could be a big if unless he cared enough to figure out who they really were.)


    Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on December 20, 2009
    Ha! Naruto when all semi-demonic and Konohamaru doesn't quite know whats going on.


    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Paintsy on December 19, 2009
    I love this pairing, and the story is going great. I can't wait to see how Naruto will fend for himself and Konohamaru. Will Zabuza find Naurto with the same killing eyes of Haku, and turn him into a weapon too? Keep up the good work.
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 19, 2009
    not bad i can hardly wait to see how you get those 2 away and keep them away
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 11, 2009
    now this is good so far i will be waiting to read more before i can say i will keep reading give me a few more chapters and i will let you know what i really thing about this but so far good
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