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Reviews for Reckless Hearts

By : MagicalReality
  • From ANON - Chynna18rawrr on June 13, 2011
    I'am really glad I took the time out of my day to read what you have so far of this story, I enjoyed it very much, I can't wait to see what Sasuke's going to do about his engagement to karin, and how he is going to handle telling his father he may be gay, and how he is going to deal with kakashi in the future. I really liked how you wrote Naruto's pov, for the first 8 chapters, I feel like naruto needs to be single for awhile , to figure out what it is exactly that he wants, and to possibly if he goes out with Sasuke again. Go on a real date, where they go to dinner and talk about their likes and dislikes, cuz I kinda feel like their relationship so far has only been physical, and naruto thinks he's in love with Sasuke, when he doesn't know everything about him and he doesnt spend every waking minute with him, so that part left me confused. I would recommend getting a beta reader, their were quite a few mistakes here and there , I understood what you were trying go say, but I think it could help you in the long run to get a beta reader.... Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next. :))
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  • From randrinawilson on June 13, 2011
    Wow...that just made what he did with/to Naruto even that much worse. Sasuke knew all along everything that was hanging over his head. Everything that he wasnt willing to let go of at all. Knew that naruto was young and a virgin and then found out that he was underage and then STILL did all of this. Revealing what he was fealing just makes him seem like that much more of a selfish bastard not much else. The pressure that he was under is self made pressure. pressure that he could walk away from. The pain that he CAUSED naruto was all because he wanted to run away from HIS problems for a little while. Did he not care about what he was doing to this boy? Doesnt look like it.

    It will be really interresting to see how everything plays out. I cant see how naruto would ever forgive him for this. And that naruto would do a complete 180 with Kiba, who was being such a horrible friend, I dont know anyone in the real world who would forgive so easily with what kiba had done and said to him. that seemed kinda strange. after a couple of attempts maybe but just like a, dont worry about man, im over it, kind of thing was weird.

    everyone knew that sasuke was engaged but noone actually told Naruto this. They just tried to keep him from sasuke but they never actually told him the one thing that actually made him want to leave sasuke alone. that was mind blowing to me. Why wouldnt Iruka and kakashi just come out with that right out the gate? i would have that would have been their number one ammunition besides the fact that naruto was underage.
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  • From moodysavage on June 12, 2011
    omgosh that was sexy. I love Sasuke's POV. be inspired to write lots more! Can't wait to see how he changes to being willing to throw everything out for Naruto :)
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  • From ANON - Sunflower on June 09, 2011
    please continue! This is SUCH a great story, and I love it so much!
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  • From ANON - Leechie on April 29, 2011
    Please pleease keep updating
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on April 08, 2011
    I can't wait too see how Sasuke will fix this, I mean fell in love with Naruto but he really hurt him as well. I hope Sasuke kicks the bitch to the curb and gets Naru back real soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From missbri88 on April 07, 2011
    More! More! PLEASE!!! How did everyone know about Karin but nobody wanted to tell Naruto?! I'm so sad for little Naru-chan...
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  • From missbri88 on March 21, 2011
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Oh noes! Oh noes! Oh noes! How could he? I MUST SEE MORE! And soon. UPDATE! Please?
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  • From hisoka on March 18, 2011
    wow,that right there is just aweful.it seems everyone was right and for a second there i thought they would probably be happy to get back together when narutos actually 18 but i guess that plans shot.glad naruto didn tell sasuke how he feels now engaged by force or not thats still deception.poor narutos probably heart broken,still wonder how hes going to act around his friends or more persislly kiba.really interested in what happens next now.hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2011
    Nooooooo! Please don't be who I think he's engaged to! >
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  • From randrinawilson on March 17, 2011
    W-T-F??????? where the hell did THAT come from? why would sasuke even THINK about carrying on with naruto if he was engaged to someon. that mess will surely mess up naruto's head and he tells him this right after they finish having sex!!!! what in the seven hells is that about!!!!
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  • From ANON - Val-Chan on March 17, 2011
    HOW DARE YOU >:(!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE?!?!!? :D
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  • From Shadowfox3163 on March 17, 2011
    WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO! Not a cliffie! Not after that huge revelation!!! No wonder Kakashi & Iruka were so against it!!! Who is he engaged to? Who can I expect to hate? What's going on... *runs around in panic until collapsing* Please......I beg of you.....Update....Soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2011
    Somehow I had guessed that Sasuke was engaged. What gets me is that all those people who I now think knew about this should have said something to Naruto right from the beginning. This hurts WAY more now that he's had time to develop feelings for Sasuke. I guess the question now is, will they fight to be together again (when it is more legal at least)?
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  • From Gingitsune32 on March 16, 2011
    Watttttttttttttttttt!!!!! :( That's what Kakashi knew that Sasuke is hiding?! Sasuke better dump his fiancee!
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