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Reviews for Move Down To Me, Slip Into You

By : MagicalReality
  • From lara5170 on September 11, 2015
    This was good & I liked how it played out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2014
    I've always really liked this fic. It's probably my 3rd or 4th time rereading it. It's just to the point for a fanfic, you know? No pages and pages of the characters musing about their feelings from every possible angle (introspection can die). No filler. No love triangles and BS side pairings that no one really cares about. Just, Naruto and Sasuke start messing around, feelings arise from it, and they get it figured out. Perfect! Couldn't ask for any more than that.

    I thought the plot, for a PWP, was actually pretty decent. Naruto develops a problem getting random boners (as teenage boys do) and Sasuke gets interested. Take away the ninjas aspect of it, and there's plenty of teenagers out there who have experienced sex for the first time under similar circumstances.

    Another thing I liked was that they weren't in love with each other before all this started and that they didn't fall in love at the same rates. It took Naruto a few months longer to figure it out. But that's realistic because love doesn't usually work out that perfectly where both people understand their own feelings at exactly the same time, or get into relationships after they've already fallen for the other person. It may take a little while before they get onto the same page.

    Great fic!
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  • From ObscurexShadow on February 16, 2011
    Awwwe, it was so cute at the end when Sasuke pushed Naruto away after he asked to have sex. *giggle* Naruto's an idiot, sometimes. Yesh! lol
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  • From serenagold on March 31, 2010
    This was great. I loved it. The ending was perfect. Those two are so rough and tumble anyway that it would go like that. Perfect.


    I really enjoyed this story. Congrats on finishing it!!!!
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Nataliya on March 30, 2010
    That was great! x3!! I loved it! Youuu are soo friggin awsome x3 keep up the good work! =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2010
    Awesome story, I couldn’t stop reading from start to finish. I loved it!
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  • From nivell on March 30, 2010
    Very hot! Can't wait for Naruto to fuck Sasuke!
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  • From Prism0467 on March 29, 2010
    Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Nataliya on March 12, 2010
    Oheemmgee!!1 That was great! Please update soon =D!! I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Jessica Rabbit on March 12, 2010
    omggg this is truly amazing!!! my god i cant stop reading i need moreeeeee :D hehe keep up the good work love!
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  • From serenagold on March 12, 2010
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! Sasuke is sssoooooooo begging for it! Even Sakura approves!!!!! (Hell, she probably wants to watch. =^^= hehehehehee


    Also, with all the great sexual tension you've built up in this little story (which I love, btw), how inappropriate is it that I got all excited over seeing this little smilie: *~* OMG! I've never seen anyone put together that particular combination before and I don't think I've ever even considered incorporating that little Spanish thing they put over the Ns to make them sound like Ys. This is such a great face! I love it. Ha!


    Anyway, I suppose thats enough random off-topic rambling. Your story kicks ass. I can't wait for its exciting conclusion. (NaruSasu for the win! hehehe)
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  • From Prism0467 on March 11, 2010
    Naruto needs to go nine-tails on his stubborn ass. Then we'll hear some real begging.
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  • From tovah on March 11, 2010
    More Please, I am begging you! I think this is so hot.
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  • From ANON - Timberwolfdsk713@yahoo.com on March 11, 2010
    Read chap. 4 update

    I really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!

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  • From Samric on January 16, 2010
    -Sighs dreamily- I love NaruSasu. And I love how you've moved this from mindless smut to what will hopefully be much MUCH more.
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