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Reviews for Rainy Night

By : bob665
  • From Prism0467 on September 17, 2010
    I've never made that connection between bacon and sex, but whatever makes Kiba happy.

    I'm so glad you came back to this. I missed it.
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  • From serenagold on August 21, 2010
    Ahh, Naruto wants to take it slow. This story is so adorable. I love it!

    Keep up the good work and I hope you feel better!
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  • From Kingcobra on August 20, 2010
    "So there's one more chapter and given my current health situation I don't know when it will be coming out."

    Yikes. Good luck with your health and I'm sure you'll be fine. Just take it one day at a time.
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  • From DevilnBlue on August 19, 2010
    Is it wrong that I want to squee at the cuteness. There arkwardness is so fricking refreshing. I love odd pairings like this and when I can run across a pairing that could probably actually happen I want to fricking jump for joy.

    It really isn't that easy confessing your feelings to someone, especially when you don't know what you truly are confessing too. I like how Naruto was angry but wasn't quite sure what he was angry at. That he loved even the simple act of holding hands and going to the movie. Plus I also like that Kiba wanted to make sure they were friends or possibly boyfriends. That he gave blondie the option and had came to see if everything was cool with him.

    AWWWWWWW Naru-chan missed Kiba XP
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  • From mannahpierce on August 19, 2010
    Thanks for the recommendation. I confess I do not read many fics or review that often - all my available time is spent writing. What I like about this story is how genuine it feels. The way Naruto thinks and the dialogue between him and Kiba makes them sound their age and sound male - I am never sure if my male characters sound genuinely male. The things they worry about are so wonderfully young and the fact that they are interested in sex but know almost nothing about it is so sweet. I like the fact that Naruto is incredibly lonely but that is revealed slowly in little thoughts and details and it is only in chapter 6 that Kiba points out that Naruto does not have any real friends and offers to be his friend rather than his boyfriend. I found some of the scenes particularly touching - for example the one with Ayame and him seeing Kiba's bedroom - it really brought home that Naruto was growing up without a family.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 19, 2010
    You beta for MP, don't you? ^_^ The pride in your recommendation is obvious.
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  • From ANON - sooty99 on August 03, 2010
    ah i love this pairing, i'd never thought of it before but it really works! please update! :D
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  • From ANON - Val-Chan on June 11, 2010
    Omg, i love this story i had no idea you wrote this!?!?
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  • From serenagold on May 11, 2010
    Great chapter. I love how insecure Naruto still is. I'm glad their date went well. ^^
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on May 11, 2010
    wow i am so happy you updated! this is so sexy Kiba is so hot and Naruto is a little hottie too xD I hope they have sex eventually that would be awesome.... Kiba has to be seme though.... Cant wait to read what happens next !!!
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  • From DevilnBlue on May 09, 2010
    This is too freaking adorable. I love Kiba and Naruto's budding relationship and loved how Naruto freaked when the dogs burst through the doors. Had me smiling all the way. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Kingcobra on May 09, 2010
    What a great chapter that was. Kudos. :)
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  • From serenagold on March 08, 2010
    Yay for Naruto and Kiba!
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  • From ANON - Svirfnebli on March 07, 2010
    It was a great story, thank you very much :). I love it, maybe...a few more chapters? Please? (L) ^^
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  • From Kingcobra on March 07, 2010
    Thanks for the great chapter. I hope we get to see a sequel. Would be interesting to see Naruto and Kiba in this new relationship.
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