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Reviews for Deep End

By : kongxing
  • From ANON - Balls on November 08, 2015
    Why is sakura such a bitch here?
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  • From jupmod on March 05, 2010
    Are you going to be updating this story soon? I want to know what will happen. The suspense is killing me. :)
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  • From wind797 on December 28, 2009
    well this was good i wonder what sakura is going to do now lol thanks
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  • From serenagold on December 23, 2009
    lol. Good chapter. ^^

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From jupmod on December 22, 2009
    Boy, I'm sure the shit would hit the fan now. Sakura can figure obviously that Tenten's new boyfriend is Naruto, and to go lingerie shopping with Tenten will make things worse. Makes me wonder whether Sakura will finally confront Tenten in the store and ask the weapons-wielding kunoichi how she and Naruto gotten together when the last time Sakura remember was that Tenten was with Neji. It will definitely make for an interesting conversation, especially given Sakura is jealous that Naruto didn't wait for her and gone with Tenten.

    So I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Tenten would invite Sakura and get the pinkette into a threesome with Naruto. ;)
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  • From takun on December 14, 2009
    Incredible. One of my favourite and rarest pairings writtain so interestingly and so well it's got me coming back to re-read it again and again. I can't wait for the next chapter, and hope your working on it? There's not enough NaruxTen, and even less that are just so damned good.
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  • From KageChidori on November 30, 2009
    TOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.

    Can't wait till Chapter 2.
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  • From wind797 on November 23, 2009
    well that was good i would like to see more of this please
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  • From jupmod on November 18, 2009
    Yeah! A NaruTen fic that might turn into a NaruTenSaku! I love NaruTen, and I don't mind NaruSaku either. So if this fic can grow to become a threesome I have not ever read in fanfiction before, I'm all for it! :)
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  • From Saitochan on November 18, 2009
    Nice, real nice. Even though I've been away from the realm of fanfiction for almost a year now, I've got to say there's no better way to return than reading a good story, and man! your fic sure hit the right spot. Not only because I love anything with Tenten on it, but also because I really enjoy well-written stories.
    Though I believe a Beta could help you improve your grammar and correct those minor mistakes, I think your writing is good and can do without proofreading.
    I'll wait anxiously for the next chapter! Keep writing and improving!
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  • From Shawndra on November 17, 2009
    I personally enjoyed this fic. There's not enough Naruto/Tenten fics in the world. I did not see many mistakes at all. I never knew Sakura was into voyeurism.

    With Much Respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From serenagold on November 16, 2009
    I actually enjoyed this very much. I love how narrow minded Sakura is; assuming the worst of Tenten just because she does not share the same shallow values that Sakura possesses and the possibility that she might prefer Naruto over someone else becomes unthinkable. Sakura is definitely in for a 180 view change. ^^

    Naruto likes to throw out some pretty hefty demands. While he says them half jest, we all know he means them with full sincerity.

    Great story. Keep up the good work.
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