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Reviews for Forgiveness

By : Daydreamer79
  • From NarutoVixin on February 17, 2010
    well now THAT's a monkey wrinch lol wonder what you have planed for them next lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2010
    WHAT!!! noooooo why did you stop there. I feel like I'm going to cry. :(
    BTW-> I love your story so far, your writing is amazing.
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  • From Travellyr on January 27, 2010
    I don't have much to say. I just wanted to let you know that I read this, enjoy it very much, and watch for updates. It made a hard day at work into a really pleasant night to see that there was more of this. I don't have any demands or wishes or comments- I'm just enjoying this exactly as you're writing it, very much.

    Thank you. ^_^
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  • From Stacy on January 25, 2010
    awesome plot! i like how you are taking your time. i can't wait to see what happens next!!
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  • From serenagold on January 25, 2010
    Great story!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 24, 2010
    Hooray, we get to see Naru soon. I wonder what he's been up to all this time. I like Kisame as a family man and Itachi as a Uncle. Very sweet scene. I hope nothing happens to them while they're gone. And I got this feeling that Ryuu's papa is not a Hyuuga but Sasuke. Anyway, nice update. Looking forward to the next.

    ~Devious
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  • From gaara89 on December 15, 2009
    Lol, poor Itachi! Did the baby bite him when it came out or something? I'm glad that Kisame found some love in this story. So many authors just skip over him because of how he looks. I also love the interaction between Kisame and Itachi. It's so good...I can almost see it happen in the manga it's so IC.

    Anywho, I do hope you continue this soon. It's going on my bookmarks. :)



    ~Reigh~
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on December 02, 2009
    Someone is gonna get it good. Lol. But awww, Kisame has a little family now. I wonder how Itachi is gonna deal with having a baby around. Looking forward to your next update and seeing how Itachi's training is coming along

    ~Devious
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  • From NarutoVixin on November 30, 2009
    oh no you did not just make Itachi help a female give birth oh dear gods i cant stop laughing at that photo in my mind please more
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on November 08, 2009
    Really cool intro. Your Kisame is awesome. Had me cracking up when you made Itachi say 'I don't have ... titties.' Really looking forward to your next update.
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 08, 2009
    I really like this story. I love how you have Itachi and how remorseful he is and I also like how you have made Sasuke into a monster but not. Really this story is very exciting and I love Kisame...I so hope he marries that healer a makes lots of babies.
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