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Reviews for Finding a Bit of Trust

By : Strailo
  • From Helfinna on June 03, 2018

    Really enjoyed this story! Well done! 


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  • From ANON - afrieal on February 23, 2013
    oh my god... *fans self* that was so incredibly hot it's not even funny... and you were right and spot on about how great that last scene is... doesn't need a thing tho... *drooooooool*


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  • From smint45 on September 29, 2012
    Sorry I review so late but university is killing me at the moment^^I adored the last two chappys!!! They were so fluffy^^And the smutty goodness in the last one was just great!!! I'm happy to hear that htere will be a sequal^^ Hope to hear from you soon!!!
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  • From Deandraquin on September 28, 2012
    Great update as usual! Though I think those gender bender plot bunnies kept you distracted cause there were some minor things that didn't flow very smoothly, but nothing to worrisome. The wedding night was sweet and sexy, loved it!!*swoons happily after reading*

    A sequel??? YAY I'm very happy to hear that. I'll be sure to read that one too. I just love Ibiki and Naruto in this story (I'm a huge Sasuke/ItachixNaruto fan but your story made me appreciate IbikixNaruto as well).

    I'll wait patiently for any stories you plan to write because I know I will certainly enjoy them.
    So see you with the next story,

    Huggles Deandraquin
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  • From Deandraquin on September 16, 2012
    Great update, I think I can safely say that I have found nothing wrong, no grammar mistakes or spelling problems what so ever (and if there were I blame my glasses for missing them). *Feels very proud of her favorite author* Though I do have a little tiny thing. Though it was well written and flowed perfectly I personally would have liked to read a little more detailed scene of the wedding/reception. For me it felt a bit rushed but that's my personal opinion (probably comes from my terribly romantic soul). Really no offense intended and what was written was very good.*Offers cookies to make up for her terrible big mouth*

    Maybe you should keep the male and female plot bunnies separated so they can't multiply.*Starts chasing the pb's* But if you need help with anything I'm here and willing to help where and if I can.

    Can I just say that I really think ANBU should be warned before they enter that the job can require for them to handle screeching banshees. And those who actually do should be rewarded generously. Maybe put a sign at the entrance stating: WARNING SCREECHING BANSHEE PLEASE PLUG EARS.
    Can we please, Please, PLEASE show Sakura the wedding pictures for both Naruto's and Sasuke's wedding and force her to look especially at the kisses PLEASE????

    Iruka and Tsunade SHUT UP!!!!! We *points behind her to the mob of yaoi fangirls holding pitchforks and torches* all love to hear, read or dream about Naru's love life. Just telling you to make sure you don't say any more crazy things that might end with you being taken care of the mob behind me. Naru's love life is what saved my sanity after reading about...*starts mumbling incoherently and convulsing. Than start chanting; Think Honeymoon smut, think honeymoon smut*

    I'm looking forward to the next update!!
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  • From smint45 on September 02, 2012
    Oh the mental torture if sakura was great^^I really hate that bitch... I can't wait fro the last chappies!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From Deandraquin on September 01, 2012
    I'm glad my review made your day, I know what it feels like ;). I know editing can take a huge amount of time and seriously I wasn't that bothered by the mistakes and I think most of your readers weren't. *Concludes this brilliantly from the lack of real nasty flames*

    I feel so sorry for Sakura for having to spend the rest of her wonderful youthful life in a cell rotting away. Wait no I don't!! What goes around comes around Pinky with no Brain!!!!

    I have one question though; What were you on when you wrote that there was actually someone willing to have sex with *shudders* Danzou?? Did the stuff make you feel very happy and if so could you send me some of it?? Then I can lock myself in my room and try to forget about Ibiki even knowing the word Fluffy. * Begins to shudder violently and than starts convulsing* Please send me the stuff ASAP I don't think reading about Sakura looking like a lemon eeehh looking like she swallowed a lemon is going to keep the mental damage away for long.

    Loved the updates and I'm looking forward to the next one!!!
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  • From ANON - librarycat9 on August 10, 2012
    Ibikis eyebrow raised upwards as he watched Naruto walk back into the bedroom, tail twitching over the curve of the ass that he would soon be buried in. Smirking, the man followed after, dropping his tail into a hamster before stepping into the dimly lit bedroom... tail into a hamster LOL I think that particular typo is pretty darn funny :D But I also thought you might like to know about it :D Thanks for the smut!
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  • From silvermane36 on August 05, 2012
    great story
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  • From smint45 on August 03, 2012
    That was nice but you could have gone into more detail with the torture^^I hate that bitch!!!
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  • From Deandraquin on August 02, 2012
    I want apologize for taking so long to review this piece of art. I seriously doubt you'd want to read about me going on and on about how wonderful, funny, angsty (in a good way of course), romantic this story is and how easy it is to read, the chapters are not to long (or to short) but still give alle the information and detail needed. See I knew it, you just didn't want to read that did you ;)

    There is one minor comment I'd like to make though; There are some spelling mistakes that really had me crying tears from laughter. They might have been typo's or maybe a spelling check gone haywire but I really thought I'd mention them to you.
    In chapter 33 Naruto and Ibiki are discussing which tailor to go to for their kimono's and Naruto mentions at one point about Ibiki's meetings with the Dynamo. I think you meant Daimyo, so that little slip really had me thinking that though some friction and tension between Ibiki and the Daimyo could create some sparks, it still wouldn't make the man a Dynamo.

    The one that really had me laughing (cause I could actually picture that one in my mind, yeah I know way to much imagination lol) was in chapter 35. This little sentence really had me cracked up completely:
    Smirking, the man followed after, dropping his tail into a hamster before stepping into the dimly lit bedroom, finding Naruto already crawling onto the bed.
    I really hope you meant dropping his towel in a hamper, because imagining a hamster in the room when they are getting down and dirty would be really disturbingly hilarious.

    Please don't think I mean all of this to offend you, but it was just to funny not to say something about it and all in all I still think this story is great.
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  • From Smaffa on July 25, 2012
    Yay smut!
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  • From smint45 on July 22, 2012
    Oh that smutt was so hot^^And adorably sweet!!! Thanks for posting!!!
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  • From smint45 on July 08, 2012
    The fighting was awesome and the ending was really cute!!!! Thanks a lot for posting^^ See you again soon!!!!
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  • From Smaffa on July 07, 2012
    Oh, you tease! So cruel! ~
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